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Death Draws
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I fell out of bed

and landed on my head

first into an open mouth

lips wide open and

filled purple with blood

tongue crimson

flipping out and rolling me up

like a hand rolled blunt

tight in the middle

loose ends

licking my seams closed

in a candy soaked wrapper

death took me in between

two boney fingers and

lit me up

slow draw deep into

flaccid lungs

held me close within

and then puffed me out

in circles

rings around the bed post

where piece by piece

I was re-assembled

together but never

to be the same again.

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Death Draws"
Reviewed on December 19, 2008
couch cough...I am so glad I quit smoking... :)
well...this perhaps may have been a smokie treat?
Very Clever Poem & also the message of it's premise

Much Love
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Whether a dream or a work of imagination, this is a cleverly constructed piece of writing where the imagery is clearly comprehended. Blessings J AG.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Intense...

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