Have I told you lately
how good you smell
when the shower
finally spits you out?
I can't remember
the last time, but
it wouldn't surprise me,
considering how much time
we actually get to spend
alone together these days.
I do know I remember
how intense we used to be.
We need to get away,
just the two of us,
before we grow any ruts
in this relationship's road.
Let's go somewhere,
before talking dirty really means:
"You doing a light load?
Can you grab my pj's
on the back
of the bedroom door?"
Before wanna catch a quickie? really means:
"I'm pooped. Wanna take a nap?"
Before Oh God, I'm coming! actually means:
"Don't nag me, I'm almost ready!
Go ahead, start the car."
Let's go somewhere, while
Baby, that was fantastic! still means ...
a lot more than
a Sunday Scrabble win.
This truly is an important trip to take...My hubby and I have our Wednesday's as "date night..." it doesn't have to be anything but time to ourselves...a walk in the historic district, appetizers at a seaside shanty or just driving in the country, going to vegtable stands or flea markets...and Home depot too! LOL!
It's fun to have fun with your bestest friend!
You penned it perfectly, with a desperate voice wanting to grasp anything...before its too late!
Enjoyed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
P.S. Hope all is well with you and yours, CJ~ :)
You have just described the comforts of marriage. Seriously. Who else but someone you are that comfortable with can you talk about your loose bowel movements? Okay, not exactly the perfect example but I think I made my point! I loved this, so true.
LOL...this made me laugh so hard...because I have been there, done that recently...this I can asssure you...regardless of the time in between, when the opportunity arises it will be as sensually steamy as you remember.
Excellent write here my friend.
Giggle...Giggle...Giggle...More than just a little humor! :) Thank you for sharing. You are so inspiring even with this. God Bless.
Peace&Grace,
Sharon
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
JC, AD did not notifuy me of this poem, so I'm sorry I have not read it before. It seems there is a problem. Glad I was told by a friend of this. Quite an amusing poem. I hope to receive notices of your poems. Victor
Yes CJ get away before the meanings change. Giggle, I really like this. It brought a smile to my face, something which I seem to do more of these days, but sadly not enough. Thanks for sharing CJ.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Amusing how language has associated meaning (double entendre??). Like the driver standing by the ambulance eating a pair. Along comes a busty nurse on her way to work. She smiles at him as she passes saying, 'Ooh that looks a lovely pair' to which the driver replies with a juicy grin, 'You took the words right out of my mouth!'
So saucy. It's a pity that political correctness in all its kill joy manifestations has deemed this kind of harmless humour offensive.
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
An empathic young nurse driven to help and heal others since childhood after watching her mother languish for months before finally succumbing to cancer, Aziza Lopez abhors cruelty and suffering in any form. When she is assigned comatose patient Davi
Welcome to Hell on Earth, boys.
Andersonville POW camp...
Russell's battle-worn body looked defeated. He was a Union soldier; she was a Confederate nurse. But when Rosa looked into his eyes, she saw pure determination. He looked fo
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actually means:
'Don't nag, I'm almost ready!
Go and start the car.'
hillarious CJ.....
and yes it's still not too late
now means.....
can I get to the beer store before it closes.....LOL
Walt
It's fun to have fun with your bestest friend!
You penned it perfectly, with a desperate voice wanting to grasp anything...before its too late!
Enjoyed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
P.S. Hope all is well with you and yours, CJ~ :)
Thank the good LORD, that the spiritual connection and blessing, is what keeps old lovers together...and discovering new levels of that love!
Love&Blessings, Rhonda
Reindeer
loveya
Rusty
Excellent write here my friend.
Or early retirement!
Good poem C.J. and a lot of truth in there.
Peace&Grace,
Sharon
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
So saucy. It's a pity that political correctness in all its kill joy manifestations has deemed this kind of harmless humour offensive.
so wise, it is never too late, you bring this too light with the earthiness and humor of people who know each other well
lol
perhaphs too??
pax A