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Moments in Time
by CJ Heck → (All Poetry by CJ Heck)
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memories ...

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Moments in Time

Our most tender moments
are flash-frozen
and locked away
by an efficient mind
to suspend,
waiting patiently,
like fruit
in a gelatin salad.
I find it astonishing
how easily my senses
can pick the lock,
and once freed,
how quickly
those same moments
are breathed
back to life.
Today in a crowd,
I caught the scent
of his cologne …


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Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on May 8, 2007
What a fabulous family of words, CJ.

With a quick noting of the reviews below, one can see easily what a touchstone you created. Everyone has a secret place in their heart that erupts in a fountain of emotions when the right trigger is pulled. Oftentimes, its unplanned, powerful, totally beyond our control.

Your closing lines say it all:
"Today in a crowd,
I caught the scent of his cologne..."

O, yes, how strongly we identify. And love those "Moments in Time."

As always, CJ, your words move us from deep within.

Love to you,
Richard

Reviewed on March 15, 2007
What beautiful imagery: 'flash - frozen' 'efficient mind' 'waiting patiently' 'pick that lock' 'breathed back to life' all adds up to a mind ever mindful of a trigger to release the appropriate moment in order to please our senses.

Your writings reveal a craftswoman possessed with a fathomless cerebral repository of words, phrases, clauses, similes, anecdotes, imagery and metaphors etc to enrich us with.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
Momories of a loved one never fades away....just a tiny thing can bring it all back....and haunt you for days!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
Well said,many times i have opened up this dungeon of memories and senses...

Michael

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
This is an amazing poem. Thanks for sharing your gift.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
Our sense of smell, and the memories it can trigger, is truly an amazing thing.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
CJ.

Thanks for the memories. You've made a few moments stand still for me.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
This poem is an excellent example of how well written, simple words can profoundly express mystery, romance and sensuality. This poem gives the reader just enough information to allow them to gather whatever scents or memories they wish but not overpower them with Brut-ish excess. Less is more and this poem is proof.
loveya
Rusty

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
Sometimes memories turn themselves into a very tiny, nearly invisible one inside your shoe getting your attention, no letting you to ignore it until you give it its time.
Then, are those provoked memories by someone going by leaving that special scent...
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
Memories, like grains of sand. Never knowing what will trigger one. Very sweet write.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
"..like fruit in a gelatin salad..." great comparison-such a truthful write

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
It is very true that a scent or a sound (music) can bring back a memory in a flash, CJ. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
Wow! so great...short, almost mysterious, potent :-)

ann

Reviewed on March 14, 2007
This one is gorgeous, CJ, captures the mystery of lost love. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 14, 2007

Poetic feast abounds in the "Moments in Time" ~ poetized with words that sound pholosophic-romantic-spiritual.

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
Wonderful poetry with a hint of romance at the end.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
Oh wow...this was sensual in a mysterious way...and intriguing to the memories of "Moments in Time" so to speak...
This is excellent CJ!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
P.S. What kind of cologne? :)

Reviewed by Frank Stein (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
now this is a side of you I've missed ! This is wonderful, CJ. More more more !

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
A wonderful write my dear friend, it amazes me how powerful our senses are, they have the power to transport us back to a wonderful time, and sometimes to a time we wish to forget...enjoyed this beautiful write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
CJ again this captures so well that split second that a scent, a glance, a touch or somthing can trigger memories and love locked far away and forgotten. Sweet expressions of a lingering love.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
How very hauntingly lovely! Yes, just a whiff or a word and whole scenarios come to mind. Beautifully written CJ!

Eileen

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
This is riveting CJ, and one I can definitely relate to. I was once bent over selecting cereal at the grocery store when a whiff of his cologne (so to speak) went walking behind me. Turned out that my heart didn't need to jump into my throat because the wearer was an old duffer who had to be at least 90 or more. Talk about a slosh of cold water in the face! Tee hee! :-) Love, Michelle


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