The tentacles of my rose buds are putrefied and your breath deepens on my serenade like a gossamer cover of slippery promises I’ve held you close in my sauntered mornings and dreamy evenings taking measured strides in your arms’ embrace. look me in through the tinted mirrors kissing my body scents like sparks of flickery flame. The fire of my lusty songs haven’t melted like winter flakes, the burns have deep scars of watery love. But you have tasted those with your fluid songs and roughed me in. downed in silken truth the eyes have gone deep into the whispered nothings and your tongue placed a heaven in my belly, slipping through the souled kisses in and out.
In and out....
But the tongues have met through deeper fangs of poisoned truth and drunken obsession and I hid the hole with my rose buds of sweet tomorrows. The sleep was a lasting song rolling on your body like a warm bubble bath and went deeper like a sequential symphony. I’m your sea draped lost mermaid inhaling the kisses on the surface justifying our realities like a poet, painting pictures in the wind.
Just a beautiful picture you have painted with your words, Saberi...the images are superb and you have a firm grasp of the beauty of metaphor and the sensual depths of the soul's whispers.
Emotionally charged views of an intensity of relation that has its highs and lows yet the reality of passion stays embedded deep within the soul of one who lives for the intensity of life...
The depth of your poetry that touches on love and lust that only a lover of life can bring to fore in words left unspoken. Loved the ending.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
And like that poet painting those pictures in the unpredictable wind, this poem goes from ectasy in the making to pulling back and wonder . . . Your poetry challenges the reader and mmore than one reading is necessary at times . . . Classic Saberi Roy on display here . . .
Erotic Interracial/ Reincarnation/ Suspense]
Gale Sinclair is a marriage counselor who has broken the cardinal rule of psychotherapy and fallen in love with his client, Zoelle Sutherland.
always,
randy
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Richard