You wear your skin so soft and bare
and walk among Gods in night’s air
You tote bags of unresolved fears,
and a glass vial filled with my tears.
You push and pull and dare your strength
burying your dreams at such great lengths
Your wounds, badges of sweet release
times, places and bicycle grease.
You and I are not lost, but found
every thing and place, up and down
Your struggles and mine, deep they tread,
sewn together with the same thread.
Copyright 2001 Kim Alvarez
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Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
I'm not quite sure about this one. I think you could do it better. The thoughts are moving, though.
Doc
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
Soul Mates. Such a very Beautiful poem. All the times through life ... Bicycle grease.... I really like this, very romantic too.
Have a wonderful day
Tracey
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Well done. Glad I stopped by. You should post more often. You are very good.
Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2002
Inspirational for UNION. Should be vows at the time of marriage
Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2002
very,very nice.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2002
Like the flow of this--beautiful write, for sure!
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2002
Hey Mz Kimi! I really liked this one...such a beautiful write!
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
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Have a wonderful day
Tracey