In the arms of your first love,
holding each other close.
The seeds of love are then planted,
a beautiful blood dipped rose.
When love fades and tears do flow,
from the pain tearing you apart.
It is from the blood dipped rose,
and its razor thorns in your heart.
Its beauty is unsurpassed,
and it can never die.
It blooms in the times of your love,
and is watered by the tears you cry.
The blood dipped rose with razor thorns,
planted in your heart.
It can fill your life with beauty,
or it can tear your world apart.
It is said its beauty is eternal,
despite its terrible pain
The bloom is to remind you of love,
and to look for it once again.
Should the thorns surround your heart,
and tear with its terrible pain.
Remember that one day you will find the love,
to make it bloom again.
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Reviews of "The Blood Dipped Rose (Exercise in Pain part 2)"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2003
This one is excellent in emotions and
imagery
"When love fades and tears do flow,
from the pain tearing you apart.
It is from the blood dipped rose,
and its razor thorns in your heart."
PJ
imagery
"When love fades and tears do flow,
from the pain tearing you apart.
It is from the blood dipped rose,
and its razor thorns in your heart."
PJ