I can live alone, I can be without you.
I do not go astray, even if you betray.
Am I not happy before you step into my life?
Can't I sustain without being your wife?
I convince myself.
But Dear....
When I see any couple,
When someone cares for their lover,
Heart moans, Tears flow,
an Involuntary action.
I always break my vow,
not to bow to your thoughts.
I can't tolerate if someone be your wife.
I can never be someone else's in this life.
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Reviews of "But....."
Reviewed by Srinivas Surya (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Don't worry, you willt ide over the loss. As I had mentioned in one of your reviews, "A person who makes you cry is not worth your tears, and those you cry for, will not make you cry ".
Reviewed by Vahini Epari (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
Hope for the best Shanti. Time shall bring Good days to us.
I think u hv so much tallent. ur peom is so nice. all the best for future
Reviewed by raj
Reviewed on February 2, 2003
nice poem continue it
u can succeed
wish u all the best
Reviewed by dyvadhinam
Reviewed on December 28, 2002
JAI-BABA
Your heart fixed in the frame of "BUT"
like a golden plate placed in show-case
"IF"it was not placed there
and covered in dust
who will recognise.
We wish more provision for
"IF" rather than "BUT"
Audrey and Sue, both 42, took a trip to England completely paid for by Audrey's cheating millionaire boyfriend. “Cougar” describes older women on the prowl for much younger men, and although they didn't begin the trip on the prowl, somehow they bec
u can succeed
wish u all the best
Your heart fixed in the frame of "BUT"
like a golden plate placed in show-case
"IF"it was not placed there
and covered in dust
who will recognise.
We wish more provision for
"IF" rather than "BUT"
Nikki