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paean
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As I sit...
Missing you
As I stand...
Missing you
As I lay...
Lonely again, missing you
And the scent of vanilla wafts through the air
I remember:
The first sight of you
The first half-shy smile
Our first embrace
The feel of you against me
and the promise of tomorrow
As I smoke...
Missing you
As I dream...
Missing you
As I lay...
my bed once again empty
Missing only you
Your scent still on the pillows and the sheets, still in the air, charged with the memory of you as am I
And charged also with the hope that you will once again brighten my doorway and my life
With your charm and your wit and your impudent tongue that thrusts outward whenever our lips meet, and most of all your love, which warms me and refreshes me and reminds that this vale is not all pain and loss and suffering, nay, far from it
As long as you are a part of this world
I love you, and I miss you


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For my love...very free verse, and probably not very good poetry, but honest

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 Reviews of "paean"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
Well written !

Reviewed by Goldberry
Reviewed on January 31, 2003
Fintan, that is wonderful! It has so much movement and climb. Don't be so modest with commenting on your poetry. Keep on writing more.

Reviewed by Benjamin Marks (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2002
Outstanding. It comes from your heart, which (in my mind) makes it the best kind of poetry. The very best kind of writing!

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on August 5, 2002
Eloquent. Simply astounding. Now stop being good, it puts pressure on me to keep up.

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
I liked it :)

Reviewed by Shelagh McKenna (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2002
Wonderful pacing. Starting slowly in short bursts, rising to climactic eloquence, resolving in a simple, honest statement. Kudos to you.
(P.S. I can't get used to 'lay' instead of 'lie'. Otherwise it's super.)

Reviewed by authorauthor
Reviewed on July 3, 2002
best poem i ever read...do you have a motor bike? seriously, one of the most honest and moving of poems except for poetry in The Song of Soloman and the Psalms
your most humble servant, philia

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on June 29, 2002
Sweet, affectionate and I am sure the lady appreciates the emotions, my friend. Great poem! :)
Love, Silver

Reviewed by Peter Elmore (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2002
Great poem, short easy to read and right to the point!!!

Reviewed by Peter Elmore (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2002
Very nice Duane

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 28, 2002
very good presentment of fellings...

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 28, 2002
Excellent.

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2002
Beautiful poetry, very honest indeed. Good write!

Reviewed by Denise
Reviewed on June 27, 2002
Very sweet and touching. Will treasure always. mmmmm vanilla

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 27, 2002
it's very good, I like it...lovely expressions of love...;-)


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