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Amazed Always
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Amazed because I'm truly free Amazed because I get to be me Amazed because I get to see the beauty of an odorless fog gathering, embracing, kissing like connected streamers one depending on the other exploding, imploding thoughts rescuing, wrestling time in shades of evolutions Amazed because of the chances I take Amazed because of the progress I make Amazed because in my sleep I'm awake to the hearing of the bleeding heart of the soul hoping, praying through the glimmering light of hope like the rays that warm a thousand seashells on distant shores pressing, pushing upward with a face filled with a lifetime of journeys never taken Amazed because I've been touched by the hands that are untouchable are unreachable are unthinkable but are thought about endless, infinite forever, waiting forever, amazed I'm amazed always copyright may 8, 2004 marion coleman brown

Reviewed by M. Brown

Reviewed on May 11, 2004

Lori, I would be humbled and honored if you placed "Amazed Always" on your wall above your desk. Just the wanting to do so pleases my poetic spirit. It moves me and fills me with peace knowing that this piece touches and moves you too. No one has ever asked before. Wow! What a thrill knowing that somewhere in the universe, someone is hanging my words so near, filling up their space with a little part of me.

Thanks always,
Marion

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 8, 2004

This is an outstanding work. It touches me deeply. I would love to place a copy of this on the wall above my desk! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reminds of Lennon's song "O my lover for the first time in my life..."

AMAZING writing!!

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Beautiful poem. I am amazed on a daily basis- after all, in this world there are so many beautiful things to be amazed about.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

I am amazed with this powerful poem...
Excellent Marion.