This girl would always sneak a peek my way
and greeted me with the most innocent smile
a big beautiful girl with uncompromising eyes
this mature woman with a sweet caring heart
Her breasts cascaded over like twin waterfalls
deliciously sagging over time from their weight
her dark nipples the size of mayonnaise jar lids
punctuated by hard erect puffy elliptical raisins
Her ample hips were the bottom of an hourglass
and captured more minutes than I could count
with every grain of my being ingrained in lusting
saturating my every desire with that of her own
Her derriere was proportionate with decadence
it was perfectly formed and symmetrically sound
inviting the demons within me to howl in ecstasy
and never failing to elicit every ounce of my want
Inherent in her soft angles and obvious curves
etched exaggerated upon my wanton desires
reaching through depths of my prurient needs
a beauty existed that nowhere else was found
Her face inspired the sun to rise earlier each day
a scandalous beauty that drew me into her fires
radiating deep into my heart with passionate rays
exciting each atom in my body to bask in her glow
She prepared a queen-sized bed for my tastes
with just enough to love when she would disrobe
but she knew that I had struck gold in her arms
when I lingered roaming free in her treasure mine
I sought her the moment that I had thought of her
insatiable as she to revere in the chance to meet
absorbing each others heat as we would embrace
making every minute count as if it were our last
Our lips would meet well before we would speak
our hands grasping and groping for satisfaction
seduction and foreplay were foregone conclusions
when our mutual lust would be the priority at play
She would always complain about her love handles
unable to realize…that was all I had to hang on to
not grasping the fact that real women have curves
and in every twist and turn I would never turn away
It occurred to her that I kept returning to her bed
and it finally made sense to her that I would remain
it suddenly dawned upon her that I was aroused
when her body craved mine as I would crave hers
She discovered that I would be fueled by her needs
and that in a silent light her body would scream out
she encountered a revelation in her present world
she found that her desire was that impetus for love
It's beautiful Amor, you've given hopes to real women out their ..
.who are self conscious about themselves....
you've taken your poetry to where many won't go ...and that's what's
so beautiful about your work....this is an excellent piece...thank you for sharing
Quite a few comical lines toward the beginning of this piece, showing a sense of humor. Besides that, this poem is an intimate look at a woman's beauty regardless of size. Great comparisons and a message that none can miss. Well done! Sheila
A tribute to the beauty and voluptuousness in every woman no matter her size or proportion and the answer to what is perfection...it is not only that in the eye of the beholder and his personal preference, but the confidence a woman projects from within because of him. This goes for every woman who is critical of herself no matter how perfect she may be or how driven to public standard she is. If she is percieved as personal perfection, then indeed she is. Help me remember this on my way to the gym very early Monday morning!
xo Taylor
This is a lovely poem. As a Big Beautiful(eyes of the beholder) WOMAN, it's nice to find a man who can appreciate us for who we are, both on the inside and the outside. Blessings and hugs Denise
You've won my big beautiful heart with this ode to larger women. Thank God there are still real men out there who won't be taken in by the skin and bones mentality of society...thank you, this is a keeper.
Stunning tribute big beautiful women
True beauty is deep within
Truly love the sensuality and passion
That flows throughout this page!
Excellent imagery and flow love the tone!
Absolutely stunning piece!!
Love Peace and Hugsss...Morning Star
Beautiful tribute and honest writing, Amor. Thank you for putting across an expression of what it means to be truly feminine - and adored for being so. Our first-world style councils have sold womanhood, to some extent, down the line, modelling us on the masculine forms rather than the female ones. It's nice to consider, for a change, what's RIGHT with our bodies, instead of what's WRONG with them. Big is indeed beautiful... and bountiful... and benificent... and a blessing. Thank you for such a loving appreciation. Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2007
Now that is a lovely tribute to big beautiful women.
You go! Lust and all.
What a beautiful write Amor, true beauty is found deep within, I have often said there is a difference in fat and big. Some may think beauty comes from a jar but what about when it is washed away. Thank you for sharing.
Rose
You give hope that somewhere out there someone will love a big beautiful girl for herself. Not look at her as if she were a fat slob of a woman.
You write beautifully Amor.
Hugggggs
Ann
The anatomy of love pound for pound, The Big Beautiful Girl puts this romantic analogy to my mind...we climb a Big tree to test our sexual stamina, the bigger the tree, the juicier the apples...the important consideration is the attitude of which affection radiates, Amor...these lines are so erotic, but these lines drive me wild, as I have described nipples as big as silver dollars, but yours, the size of mayonnaise lids!!Whoa...makes me hungry! These lines are my deliciously favorite...
Her breasts cascaded over like twin waterfalls
deliciously sagging over time from their weight
her dark nipples the size of mayonnaise jar lids
punctuated by hard erect puffy elliptical raisins
A young widow joins her aunt’s house-restoration project in the wilderness, determined to take a stand for independence, but two men have different plans for her—and so does God.
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.who are self conscious about themselves....
you've taken your poetry to where many won't go ...and that's what's
so beautiful about your work....this is an excellent piece...thank you for sharing
a tribute to an earthy female would make jenny craig go out of business.........poetry for real people
excellent pax A
xo Taylor
Love Tinka
You've won my big beautiful heart with this ode to larger women. Thank God there are still real men out there who won't be taken in by the skin and bones mentality of society...thank you, this is a keeper.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
True beauty is deep within
Truly love the sensuality and passion
That flows throughout this page!
Excellent imagery and flow love the tone!
Absolutely stunning piece!!
Love Peace and Hugsss...Morning Star
You go! Lust and all.
Elizabeth
Rose
Very, very lovely..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
You write beautifully Amor.
Hugggggs
Ann
ET
Her breasts cascaded over like twin waterfalls
deliciously sagging over time from their weight
her dark nipples the size of mayonnaise jar lids
punctuated by hard erect puffy elliptical raisins
Love,
Sage