Erotic Romance (this was written and meant for Valentines day posting but i am so late and felt it is better late than never :)
"Chasing Valentines"
With sweet tongues in our mouths
We chase Valentines in our quest
A kiss in the fringes of our loving
The taste of heaven in our bodies
Upon a bed of orchids we repose
While I breathe in all your beauty
I seek out your love in the sheets
I map out all your luscious curves
My tongue traverses these oceans
Of your sweet love in the recesses
There as I part the sea of desires
Within the folds of loves passion
And upon the cusp of every need
My lips course your source of life
With tremors that your love emits
In the light of a thousand candles
That the both of us do eagerly share
As I find ecstasy in all the crevices
Hunger at every fork in the road
Where I am driven by your moans
And heavy breathing I leave behind
We chase Valentines in our wants
Seeking the treasures of our love
That we are immediately rewarded
With the smell of incense in the air
Your perfume and my cologne mix
To impel us at our table of intimacy
While my hands caress every curve
And our two bodies soar in emotion
Melting together while we are one
And I find my way within your temple
While I seek the essence of loving
In the heights that we quickly reach
Our two hearts speak their language
And our souls intertwine in the mist
But it is our bodies that take us there
You gently place kisses all about me
And you breach my soul with love
In the same way that I give to you
With nothing that is ever held back
We chase Valentines in our search
and leave nothing behind untouched
As my tongue and lips give pleasure
So you always know that I am there
And when my lips stop their kisses
As you still feel my love within you
While I reach your heart incessant
And with your body still craving more
My desire is to please you to no end
In the undulations of our two bodies
In the far reaches of anxious tongue
Where you derive waves of pleasure
As your love delivers pleasure to me
And dance over me with your body
Where you have become my altar
Where my body becomes your stage
Chasing Valentines in our endeavor
While we explore every square inch
And while leaving no stone unturned
We rapidly reach our state of passion
As waves of climax reach our shores
And our hearts race to peak wildly
Exchanging the essence of our love
In the moment I look into your eyes
when the dark skies turn inside out
and the stars fall from the heavens
Amor,
Its pretty coincidental that we both came back to the den on the same day! Lovely poetry as always, it captures true beauty and love!
Peace love and light
Amber
Not only very late but overdone. While it should be erotic, your poem doesn't come off that way with all of the repetition and attempts at describing ecstasy without getting there.
I would suggest a much briefer, but much more intimate and intense poem that the reader can readily identify with.
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Love ya!
Jane
Its pretty coincidental that we both came back to the den on the same day! Lovely poetry as always, it captures true beauty and love!
Peace love and light
Amber
I would suggest a much briefer, but much more intimate and intense poem that the reader can readily identify with.
Ron