HOW THE STORY ENDS (poem) by Linda Law on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 2, 2010

Hi Linda, I was reading this piece written 32 months ago, and still feel your hurting. You are a very angelic person. It is an honor to know you so late in my lifetime. I pray your story ends with peace, happiness, a long healthy life, and love from a godly person. Stay sweet always.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY MIKE NERONE

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 19, 2010

Beautifully expressive poem ~
I'm clinging to the clouds Linda, you too!?
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on October 14, 2009

Wow! What a poem! Well, it's NOT over until it's over and it's NOT over yet!!!

Amen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Great write Linda...intense and deep.

Fee

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Linda:

You are so insightful and have expressed so well in your poem. I have read and read and digest each line you have written. You are one tough lady and your strength comes though each line.

Lots of love to you,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Donnie Madden (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Mrs. Linda,

You have rendered one very touching poem with deep feeling. Just love the 3rd and 4th stanza, a beautiful poem within it's self. You do have
a touch with words and make them come alive with feeling.

Luv ya.......Donnie

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Linda...a writing with such depth of the emotional stages of a lonely heart!
These words have shaken my soul deeply!
Maybe these words of yours will crack the shell...of the lonely, enough they may see some light! Your title is perfect!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Linda I love all your poetry, but this one stands on its own, this is absoltiely amazing,and I agree it floews like a beautiful song
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Wow Linda you're outdone yourself with this one. It's magnificant. As I was reading it I kept thinking, yes, yes, yes! And Karla is right on, it does flow like a song, just as all good poetry should.
Hugs, Marcia~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Flows like a song, Linda - so beautiful, so poignant - powerfully penned. And that piccy - stunning! As are your words. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Stuart McCallum

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Oh Linda,
Genuine people with a caring heart like you, deserve a story with a happy ending, no more sadness no longer feeling blue. Excellent thought provoking piece.

Stay happy sweet lady, your friend Stuart

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

The next to last stanza without the ending is the path to follow for happiness sake.

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

That last stanza... There would be nothing to live for, if that was the case... But how often do I/we hold ourselves back for fear... fear of being hurt, unloved, loved, everything...
Your words hit a mark with me.
Thank you,
Cryssa