I looked into a covered mirror and found the face of mortality staring back at me--Oh, go away!
I feel the weight of all I've yet to be etching my bones like acid tears-- The best of my intentions blaze in the dark-star crucible of fear--
My heart has set a far horizon as the finish line to legacy-- I hope to leave some lasting trace to mark the place I dared be me--
No stone wants to sink beneath the silver liquid just at dawn-- No man wants to fade to black a ghost while living that doesn't belong--
If only heart and mind-- and my spirit's cage-- were equally partnered, glove and fist-- I'd scrawl my vision across the void and make my name a cometary epithet--
Betraying flesh denies desire, and fails ambition's adamant will-- My soul is longing for the hidden country where dreams take flight on wings of steel--
Lee- I like your metaphors how they jump out at you with such intensity! Great very Intense feeling poem, I understand where your heart is at! YOu will leave something of great importance, to the one who needs it most! I like your word usuage in your writings! Warm HuGs! *She*
Lee, this one takes my breath away. To be remembered, to feel like you made a difference...that you left something worthwhile in your wake... I understand all too well.
Just as life during the pandemic was color-coded with different hues representing different levels of danger, life in its aftermath has become shaded in similar ways. As a self-styled “Seeker of Beauty with Beauty,” (borrowing from a quote by W.E.B.
I raised my hand in salute. Respect, acceptance, success, is such a fickle pursuit at times.
"A cometary epithet" Indeed!
Good one ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Mary
"Betraying flesh denies desire, and fails ambitions adamant will--"
an awesome line
speaking of duality fears.
I will climb upon my wings of steel the very next time my mirror tells me of fleeting time, aging body and flagging soul. Excellent write.