Somewhere in life
The heart of a dream
Of tracing the moon;
Embracing the sea
Of dancing with stars
And falling in love
Of painting the clouds
And chasing the sun
Its there in your eyes
Reflecting the light
Catching the trails
Falling stars leave behind
Deep in your heart
Glows a red ember
A shadow of a star
A hope to remember
Maybe we'll live
Maybe we'll die
Dancing with stars
A walk in the sky
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Reviews of "A Walk in the Sky"
Reviewed by April
Reviewed on December 30, 2002
Sara i dont understand where you get the emotins to come out so beautifully, but u have talent girl u really do! Keep up the hard work, this is like my 17th poem i read haha!
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Reviewed by CJ
Reviewed on November 11, 2002
i like this one - the title caught my eye and i wasnt gunna read it cuz i gtg soon but after i read the first line it just enticed me and i read and read in a trance of awe until suddenly it was done! badda bing! powerful yet delicate, this is a good, short one!!!
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
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