The Trench (Short Story) - 9/22/2009 6:19:21 AM
Very good with interesting twists. Originality in which you cannot guess the ending and the surprise of Thomas at the end of the ordeal at the trench exclaiming to his father that his concern was for hsi torch. Bravo! Wonderful story.
Slug (Poetry) - 1/27/2010 10:47:39 AM
I once ate a whole slug and a whole snail. And then I woke up!LoL
well done ..steve.
Don't Ask For Forgiveness (Poetry) - 9/26/2009 10:41:18 PM
Man, a kindred spirit. I like how you think. Very nice.
Don't Ask For Forgiveness (Poetry) - 9/20/2009 5:52:55 AM
Interesting indeed dear man..enjoyed very much..stay safe and well..Hugss
The Night Sky (Poetry) - 9/14/2009 4:15:31 AM
Excellent poem
EDWIN
Julie (Poetry) - 9/14/2009 4:14:23 AM
She is a very lucky woman.A beautiful poem
EDWIN
The Night Sky (Poetry) - 8/30/2009 5:39:15 AM
having just returned from the lighthouse at Montauk, this poem rekindles the ambiance & "feel" i experienced there ...
The Night Sky (Poetry) - 8/28/2009 2:49:42 AM
WONDERFUL WRITE WITH GOOD PHRASES THAT HAVE PRODUCED GREAT RHYTHM, RHYME AND IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS RESERVATIONS
The Night Sky (Poetry) - 8/27/2009 3:45:06 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Who Makes The Clown Laugh? (Poetry) - 8/24/2009 5:48:59 PM
SAD...WHAT A GREAT POEM...FULL OF THE POETICAL ELEMENTS THAT BLEND TOGETHER WELL AND SUPPORT YOUR THEME SOLIDLY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Who Makes The Clown Laugh? (Poetry) - 8/24/2009 3:38:42 PM
Tis true. Being a former magician and escape artist there are many who are lonely and sad. What you see on the stage is a great actor not the happiest person in the world.
Who Makes The Clown Laugh? (Poetry) - 8/24/2009 2:05:47 PM
Brings to mind the song, "Send in the Clowns." Nice work.
