The Ship (Poetry) - 5/11/2007 5:30:55 PM
Billowy sails propel us to look deep inside our Dreams...name our journeys and water our camraderie with one another, Silvia...I've missed you...The Ship commences at the navigation by the stars and we focus on the skies, Draco, The Southern Cross, The Milky Way, and the peoples...Europeans, Africans, Native Americans, pilgrims, pathfinders, kinship links, and other points of Light find our destinies that await on those wild shores...be well, Silvia...Blessed Be.
Sage
The Ship (Poetry) - 5/11/2007 8:09:32 AM
Sounds like the journey of life. Nicely written with good imagery. I was swept off by the sails.
The Ship (Poetry) - 5/10/2007 11:23:58 PM
How lovely, I have enjoyed this journey upon a wonderful clipper ship from days gone by.....Thanks for sharing this!
Be safe,
Karen
Women In Water (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 11:43:03 AM
Good one, Sylvia. I like the way it addresses a duality of "someone needs" -- not just the searcher, I reckon, but she who speaks to him as well. Thought it quite musical, btw, even before listening to the audio.
Women In Water (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 9:42:54 AM
Silvia ...
A heart of longing that refuses to give up infuses the lines of this song with hopefulness.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Experience Counts (Poetry) - 1/14/2007 4:38:22 AM
Those that have lived through a tornado or hurricane can relate to this potent write.
Always (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 9:06:05 AM
"ALWAYS" is like a mantra of awareness and a testament of strength and faith. Happy Holidays Silvia, and the best in 2007.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
The Ocean Creature (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 7:02:14 AM
Beautiful poem! Liana Margiva.
Someone (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 6:57:57 AM
Smart and nice poem!!! Liana Margiva.
Memory's Song (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 6:54:22 AM
I like your sentences, they are beautiful. Liana Margiva.
Memory's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2006 1:50:48 PM
Just a lovely flowing piece Silvia. Wonderfully done. Crafted like a piece of sculpture.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Memory's Song (Poetry) - 7/18/2006 12:19:57 AM
Absolutely beautiful. This would make a wonderful song.
Memory's Song (Poetry) - 7/14/2006 9:30:59 AM
Your words have complimented the picture through your great imagery. Thanks for sharing.
Helen
Memory's Song (Poetry) - 7/13/2006 5:51:06 PM
For the year-rounder or day-tripper, a poetic foothold, verse of five metrical feet, and I have a toehold where I see the great blue heron at the frog pond. Memory's Song has other-century aspects and nature's everyday facets, (camouflage art) and there are but few on the trail with you and me Silvia, but the hermit...maiden, mother and crone...
Sage
A Time Of Rest (Poetry) - 7/1/2006 8:31:50 PM
between the holding pattern and flight awaits timing and decision ... choose prudently ...
A Time Of Rest (Poetry) - 6/30/2006 9:30:44 AM
A sentinel of solace, Silvia...has a seraphic appeal...or when the vampire learned to fly in your "Vampire Solstice."
Sage
A Time Of Rest (Poetry) - 6/30/2006 9:06:58 AM
Seems like you have been granted a period of peace and contemplation
before the revenge is set into motion.
"The sea of night" is a phrase that conjures, in my mind, a picture of a person getting ready to retaliate against an injustice that was perpetrated against her.
Richard
7 Shamans (Poetry) - 6/29/2006 10:21:40 AM
~~Silvia~~fantastic poem~~
~~martin~~
Rage (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 2:39:01 PM
A passionate confession and certainly one of the emotions that defines the human race in all its multi-faceted complexities.
I can relate Silvia! It's good to read you again!
Richard
Mysterious Box (Poetry) - 5/29/2006 8:30:09 PM
GREAT IMAGES... I ENJOYED THE POEM........M
Mysterious Box (Poetry) - 5/18/2006 3:39:39 PM
Enjoyed this beautiful well written poem. THe visualization was breath taking. Thanks for sharing.
Mysterious Box (Poetry) - 5/17/2006 4:50:42 PM
"Mysterious Box" has in its contents ~ all the jewels ~ to show what a poetic bullion bank assets are; and most of all what the major art is capitalized with.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Wisdom and long healthy life through a creative living.
Gratefully,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Mysterious Box (Poetry) - 5/17/2006 11:03:28 AM
The real treasure of this poem is that nature washes ashore all the rare gems that came from nature and return to nature. Each one of these gems you mention are touchstones, items to bring magic rememberances. Good luck on your ten reviews, Silvia! I am throwing in a zircon!
Sage
Mysterious Box (Poetry) - 5/17/2006 8:53:25 AM
Dreams can deliver us from many things. This is a beautiful fantasy of truth...Enjoyed reading!
eT
Explorer (Poetry) - 5/16/2006 8:15:54 AM
Silvia
This sounds like the perfect find...
Peter
Explorer (Poetry) - 5/16/2006 7:06:26 AM
My kind of man
Wonderful write, gifted poet
thanks for sharing
love and peace
Explorer (Poetry) - 5/16/2006 6:08:58 AM
Wow! Elemental, gargantuan, sweeping, bold, tender epic... this is just an amazing work. Dear poet, thank you for this volcano of blood and roses from your gifted hands.
Bright Morning (Poetry) - 5/15/2006 2:54:58 PM
This is a Gestalt poem, a perfect day born out of the here and now, Silvia...great rhyme and meter flows. Bright Morning shape shifts into a woodland forest for me, many hidden things watching me, like a Bev Doolittle camouflage painting, the birds lively with song, and the gentle breeze from all four directions converging in the center of it all. Every morning should be as you describe here. Blessed Be.
Sage
Bright Morning (Poetry) - 5/15/2006 12:31:26 PM
Lovely images, and you kept the rhyme real and the flow moving, excellent work.
Bright Morning (Poetry) - 5/15/2006 8:03:30 AM
Silvia . . . thanks for this attempt! I guess one of the greatest feelings as a writer/poet/musician (retired recording musician), besides selling thousands of novels, is when anothers creative juices are piqued by something you've done. Imparting life to one another is certainly a priority for a writer. Although not classical in its entirety, I enjoyed the "freeness" of this piece you've written and also the challenging moment I percieve you embraced while doing it.
While the free expressions of ones creativeness always reflects the personal gift each has been given, I always find myself humbled, reestablished, and edified, by trying, occasionally, especially when my pride starts usurping my imagination, to adhere to the old forms of the venerated masters. Respectfully Richard
Bright Morning (Poetry) - 5/15/2006 8:03:07 AM
Thr rhyme keeps the time, and sets the pace, the pondereing comes, in where the rhyme takes place. You can put them in every line, or maybe every two or three. But using ryhme in your writes, is a challenge, Certainly! Art Great write!!
Bright Morning (Poetry) - 5/15/2006 7:35:38 AM
Silvia this is splendid poetry! A pleasure to read something so beautifully written! Thank you for sharing!
eT
Bright Morning (Poetry) - 5/15/2006 7:00:55 AM
Silvia
An exquisite poem of great sensitivity and awareness
Enjoyed immensely
This is my cup of tea !
Blessings
Peter
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/8/2006 1:01:53 PM
A self-empowering poem that commands your audience to listen, Silvia. The voice can muster a tremendous surge of energy, simply a result of loving life and all of its activities. I appreciate what Singing To The Ocean has to say about confronting our fears and embracing our dreams. Fear of the unknown as motivation = growth!
Sage
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 4:49:34 PM
strength and determination bring out the best in us ...
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 2:40:34 PM
awesome picture! rich, reflective piece of self-analysis. particularly love that last stanza, ty
Treasure Quest (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 11:48:24 AM
A most engaging poetic offering, Silvia. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 11:46:23 AM
The whole presentation is soul-reaching, Silvia. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 10:55:41 AM
I've spoken to the ocean, cried and screamed at her when depressed, but never have I sung to her, though many a time she has done so to me and I always appreciate her song no matter the subject...Ed
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 9:17:56 AM
Beautifully written and sung, I also applaud, and love the pic,too!
eT
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 8:40:05 AM
Poem expresses beautifully the power of inspiration through the sea. R
Singing To The Ocean (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 7:37:37 AM
That was beautiful, facing our fears.
Rebecca
Treasure Quest (Poetry) - 3/23/2006 9:38:13 PM
A poem of muted moods with underlying screams!
Enjoyed reading this superb work...
Eileen
Treasure Quest (Poetry) - 3/19/2006 10:12:11 PM
The shipwreck of the Soul. The ghosts of the Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald giving us valuable feedback on how to seek out heartlight.
Treasure Quest is symbolic of the water maze where one must swim past all of the obstacles deposited at the bottom of the sea to find the real treasure, the prize, the higher connecting of twin souls that one party knows it to be, but the other person has yet to recognize what a treasure the other soul is. Like a shipwreck that has spilled tons of Quicksilver, mercury, so slippery and elusive, and you can chase it for a lifetime without ever catching it. When you do catch it, it is a treasure to cherish. Liquid metaphors of the highest caliber here, Silvia.
Sage
Treasure Quest (Poetry) - 3/19/2006 6:18:48 AM
an excellent metaphorical piece. beautiful imagery with a great emotional pull
Treasure Quest (Poetry) - 3/19/2006 6:07:17 AM
Oh my, this is outstanding, excellent imagery and metaphor, I loved it!
Reindeer
Far Future (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 10:56:24 PM
"...Now raise your arms,
unfold your wings
and step up to the threshold,
to the edge of wisdom,
where beyond the lands of future lie,
wide unexplored horizons beckon,
symphonies await..."
Really good lines.
Diva (Poetry) - 10/15/2005 11:50:18 PM
Right up my ally! I loved this powerful wirte!
Blessings~Shell
Far Future (Poetry) - 8/25/2005 8:27:45 AM
A wonderful poem, with a marvelous last stanza, Silvia.
Far Future (Poetry) - 8/25/2005 5:41:12 AM
Makes one want to fall into the tomorrow for sure. Beautiful verses that lift one's spirit.
Lisa
Far Future (Poetry) - 8/24/2005 9:50:55 PM
A powerful work that resonates on many levels, speaking to mind and spirit with the same inviting breath of wonder.
Far Future (Poetry) - 8/24/2005 8:39:04 PM
Oh Silvia,
I am totally swept away with this beautiful piece.
A well penned work of art.
Thank you.
Bonnie
Diva (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 11:08:21 PM
Wow! What an empowering poem! I felt lifted and could hear the bouncing energy of the words.This poem is about blossoming womanhood,and sheer feminity. Wow! anne pawlak.
Someone (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 11:04:46 PM
This poem reminds me of a song: "someone" who will always unconditionnally be there for you.You should try to write songs because the reader can hear the melody, backdrop to the words.Lovely poem..anne pawlak.
Someone (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 11:16:12 PM
So true that is what we all need...
God Bless
Michelle!
Someone (Poetry) - 1/13/2005 12:39:53 PM
A poem to make one think. Excellent poem cuts deep to the heart.
Someone (Poetry) - 1/1/2005 10:21:41 PM
Of course, as you may have expected, I was thinking of my lover as I read this. A surprising yet sensible ending. Thanks.
Someone (Poetry) - 12/26/2004 8:37:58 PM
Excellent write. I agree. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Someone (Poetry) - 12/22/2004 1:53:34 PM
AWWWWWWWWW
I love this
Someone (Poetry) - 12/21/2004 11:35:58 AM
I just wrote one like this! Are you "reading my mind?" It's a very short read, I assure you. At any rate, I have hesitated posting mine, but maybe ... eventually. Beautiful thoughts and poetry! -- Jeff
Someone (Poetry) - 12/21/2004 8:59:45 AM
Great message! Wonderful write.
Diva (Poetry) - 10/28/2004 8:47:38 AM
This lady is certainly some Diva, beautifully versed, a joy to read.
Thank you.
Reg.
7 Shamans (Poetry) - 10/15/2004 5:15:56 AM
Striking write, Silvia!! The use of #s and short lines accentuates your tale. I loved it.
Peace.
7 Shamans (Poetry) - 10/14/2004 9:59:59 PM
Oh Wow Slyvia! This is so magical!
And I love the picture too! Honest I
did not know you were doing this.
As you see on my poem, I wrote it on Microsoft Word and
finished it at 7:47pm Central Daylight time. Guess it was
just co-incidence! (spelling?) Thanks for the review! I love the titles of your work, thus far and have read just the beginnings of some, and so I am thus starting to track you! The pleasure is all mine!
When I get to Gold-Status again, and can find a library with pictures on disk or CD, I will start to put up pictures with my poems!
Love,
Becca
7 Shamans (Poetry) - 10/14/2004 8:11:50 PM
Superb mystical mood in this gem! Wonderful progression!
7 Shamans (Poetry) - 10/14/2004 8:09:49 PM
Powerful imagery and use of numbers. GREAT write.
7 Shamans (Poetry) - 10/14/2004 7:52:27 PM
I've only just "discovered" your work here and I'm in awe. This was an awesome spiritual write. Dawn
The Ocean Creature (Poetry) - 10/6/2004 7:37:57 AM
Captivating and powerful in meaning and emotions evoked within. Thank you for sharing this offering, Silvia. Love and peace. Regis
The Ocean Creature (Poetry) - 10/4/2004 7:12:05 AM
Absolutely outstanding, This was excellent.
Reindeer
Oasis A Love Poem (Poetry) - 10/1/2004 12:39:43 PM
wonderfully romantic
Oasis A Love Poem (Poetry) - 9/30/2004 8:57:33 PM
You are an expert with your weapon. Enjoyed.
Oasis A Love Poem (Poetry) - 9/30/2004 7:23:59 PM
Reading this I could not help but feel it would be great to see you and Robert J. Ace do a poem together. Love the flow of thought in this. Very romantic on many different levels.
Oasis A Love Poem (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 8:45:12 PM
i like the contrasting images ...
Oasis A Love Poem (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 7:29:03 PM
wow......beautiful!
Oasis A Love Poem (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 7:14:22 PM
Oh, this is truly saying something, Silvia. You've written well here, exceptionally so. And boy, would I like to find someone who'd stun me enough that I'd put down my sword. LOL
Diva (Poetry) - 8/13/2004 8:00:13 PM
enchanted and mesmerized ...
Diva (Poetry) - 8/13/2004 7:55:39 PM
Wow! This is great! Powerful write.
Sandie May Angel
Serenity's Sky (Poetry) - 7/30/2004 9:47:57 PM
Ah... elusive serenity... Very interesting verse; draws the reader in for several rereads. This one sticks to the ribs; Bravo!
Solace (Poetry) - 6/8/2004 5:50:54 AM
what an amazingly powerful and evocative write. Thank you!
I am in awe of this emotive depth here!!!!!
grabbed me from the first line and never let go....
Sacred Lights (Poetry) - 4/16/2004 10:35:59 AM
"the stars above who once were only love - and wait for you to add your sacred light" - That is truly brilliant. Superb rhythm, beautiful. Thank so much for sharing your gift of light.
Sincerely,
Troy
Sacred Lights (Poetry) - 7/2/2003 2:50:09 PM
Lovely poetry of creation, as is this piece a lovely creation!
~Nikki~
Sacred Lights (Poetry) - 7/1/2003 9:19:58 PM
Beautiful creation poem. Love it.
The Ocean Creature (Poetry) - 6/14/2003 12:29:40 PM
I really like this. It is unusual in form~to me~but it captivates you and the healing of tearful request answered through omnipotent droplets and healing hands is very enlightening~a great way to rend this potentiality to readers.
Thank you,
Donna L. Quesinberry
The Ocean Creature (Poetry) - 6/7/2003 11:42:17 PM
a beautiful transformation it must be... superb write!
The Ocean Creature (Poetry) - 6/7/2003 11:20:24 AM
This is so beautiful and so touching to one's heart!
~Joseph
The Ocean Creature (Poetry) - 6/7/2003 7:57:40 AM
WOW.
I wish everyone felt this deeply about the damage we do to our planet. Very emotional and touching.
Good Read!
Christopher
Serenity's Sky (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 8:55:48 PM
abstruse but very well crafted...
Serenity's Sky (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 6:21:45 PM
Poetry is written from the heart, not necessarily with a rhyming dictionary. You write very well with or without rhyme. Excellent job!
Serenity's Sky (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 5:41:21 PM
Shoot...who cares if you rhyme. I like rhythm and look at the choice of words. Style. Now THAT's important. Gotta have style. [smiles] And you do. I like this.
Serenity's Sky (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 5:39:31 PM
A thought-wrenching tale. What does it mean?
Wedding Dawn (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 5:28:45 PM
Beautiful
Wedding Dawn (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 12:22:50 PM
Blindingly beautiful...stunned by the perfection of the line and stanza breaks.
Wedding Dawn (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 12:50:11 PM
Beautifully done. The imagery is superb.
Wedding Dawn (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 9:38:31 AM
So well penned, I enjoyed this much.
Wedding Dawn (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 7:56:59 AM
Sylvia, this is wonderful! Thank you! -Bear
Wedding Dawn (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 6:11:33 AM
This was beautiful, I loved this so much!
Excellent imagery and verses here!
Reindeer
