The Clinic (Short Story) - 8/4/2011 7:12:10 AM
Interesting beginning to what I'm sure will be an interesting story.
Donna
The Clinic (Short Story) - 8/4/2011 5:46:04 AM
good read, good story, lots of directions to go with this one.
keep creating,
jch
Yin & Yang (Poetry) - 8/11/2011 7:27:58 AM
the second verse has some very interesting logic to it ...
my napkin scribbling could clean the mouths of a concert hall ;)
Yin & Yang (Poetry) - 8/7/2011 9:22:58 PM
I like this alot-reminds me of my brother and I, we were very yin and yang.
Yin & Yang (Poetry) - 8/3/2011 11:54:27 PM
In the overview of life... While good is on the rise, evil is slowly recovering to plot again... The balance for which keeps both very much alive... Like how you've said very little, yet the view is there to the reader...
