Country Club (Short Story) - 6/19/2012 1:57:03 AM
Marylou,
Nice read, very well portrayed from his minds eye.
Budd
A Day In The Pharmacy (Poetry) - 6/25/2012 9:42:01 AM
Reads like the traffic on a Delhi street. Requires a multi-tasking mind or multiple cameras.
Ron
You (Poetry) - 6/22/2012 5:25:15 AM
Misunderstandings are often the cause of a breakup. Unfortunately, your poem indicates that there was some breach that could not be crossed. It's so sad to hear that.
Ron
You (Poetry) - 6/21/2012 3:39:17 PM
Marylou,
well done sorry it had to go that way.
Budd
You (Poetry) - 6/21/2012 10:52:43 AM
Such a sad lament. It's cast a shadow on your soul.
Clearly and tightly written.
We can't turn the clock back, but it sure can be rewound.
