Caretaker (Short Story) - 9/18/2016 2:55:16 AM
interesting literary premise, well said
please add some articles, short stories, maybe a poem or snippet from chapters
the more you post the more likely readers will come to read
keep writing
m
Caretaker (Short Story) - 10/18/2015 7:25:12 AM
I normally think that ghost stories are ridiculous. But, your interjection of the intrusion of a hellion woman and the conflict that caused, along with the comic relief of introducing Ghostbusters made your short little ghost story delightful.
By the way, your writing is flawless. Wish I could write as well.
Ron
Caretaker (Short Story) - 10/18/2015 1:28:56 AM
I enjoyed the combo of humor and horror written from the perspective of a ghost--one of the good guys.