I'll Take The Rain (Short Story) - 11/2/2004 1:16:24 PM
Very strong piece. Characters are well drawn. Story is absorbing. You have a good voice as a writer. The script style was a little distracting though. I think I would have enjoyed this more in the standard literary format, but this was still well done.
I'll Take The Rain (Short Story) - 10/22/2003 8:56:14 PM
Very descriptive and full of emotion. Very well done, Jim.
Forever Friends (Short Story) - 9/29/2003 7:00:31 PM
A good beginning, makes me yearns to read more. Good job with this story.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
A Perfect Fit (Poetry) - 9/18/2005 4:42:48 PM
great concept ... this poem is put together so percisely its no puzzle in grasping ...
Detach (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 4:02:23 PM
sad wistful and beautiful. There's something about an ending that makes one cry --- and with your words, you have accomplished that. Beautifully done sadness, my friend.
Joni
A Perfect Fit (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 3:55:33 PM
Excellent post ! I really really like this one !
Joni
A Perfect Fit (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 12:55:55 PM
life is a puzzle alright. Enjoyed the way you put this poem together. k
