They run 'em nights burning flames (Poetry) - 6/7/2014 7:42:08 AM
So poetic as to be incomprehensible at points. But from the critics standpoint, sure to win awards for its esoteric qualities that I'm not capable of.
I just enjoy the campfire, burning my front with a chill wind on my back. I can't imagine the countless generations that only had this warmth and protection in the cold and dangerous night. It always brings chills when I think of it, and how they survived to be me… So far removed from that primitive way of life for thousands of years.
Ron
They run 'em nights burning flames (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 11:42:46 AM
I like the rhythm and the mood your poem sets.
I don't understand your culture well enough to grasp the setting.
But you are well on your way to a future with poetry that few of us will ever know.
The Hollywood Ranger (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 11:38:33 AM
Brilliant, and perhaps this is your best today. But accept this prediction -- your best is yet to be!
