MIGHTY! (Short Story) - 7/23/2014 2:32:52 PM
well done
war of the clouds (Poetry) - 8/12/2014 6:31:58 AM
stimulating imagery ... unusual format ...
war of the clouds (Poetry) - 8/12/2014 5:37:42 AM
I am much impressed by the images that spring from your poem. Each day I go out for a little sun and it seems like the clouds win some days. As I watch them, they mostly pass by very slowly and gradually change shape. But when they become agitated and start to consume one another, and they become quite fascinating to watch. You're right about the sun. It is certainly a steady customer and can banish clouds. But yesterday we had a front come through and it got very dark, almost night like, canceling the sun. And then, after a brief violent rain, finger lightning lit up the sky for the next two hours. A light show I had not seen in a long time.
Ron
RAIN (Poetry) - 7/4/2014 5:52:06 AM
Oh yes! There's nothing like a driving rain. But beware...
They're another good reminder to always take the high road.
RAIN (Poetry) - 7/3/2014 7:30:22 AM
Catch and wonderful to read. Watch out for that lightning! It can hurt you.
Ron
RAIN (Poetry) - 7/3/2014 4:05:18 AM
Beautiful thoughts in this write. I too love the rain.
Kathy J Parenteau
RAIN (Poetry) - 7/3/2014 2:24:22 AM
...it is the most beautiful experience...to
go out...on the rain...smell and breath the air
...feel alive...to the sound of the sweetest
of all rhythms...Ah! precious moment...
Thank you Margaret for sharing your wonderful
verse. Blessings!
GONE TO WAR (Poetry) - 7/3/2014 1:52:25 AM
enjoyed reading your narrative
Welcome to AD! Happy to welcome a new member.
RAIN (Poetry) - 7/2/2014 7:18:19 PM
I like the sound of the rain, it gives me a refreshed feeling; but I don't like the sound of the thunders and lightning...
Sandie
LOWLY NEEDS (Poetry) - 7/1/2014 1:02:28 PM
I will comment on my own work. I can"t get it to stay in the right format!!!
TO SHINE FOR THEE (Poetry) - 6/30/2014 6:09:46 PM
Amen.
Margaret, this is beautifully-written!
Sandie
TO SHINE FOR THEE (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 3:57:05 PM
Amen! Beautiful!
Kathy J Parenteau
SPEAK OUT! (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 12:56:25 PM
Well, we will just have to wait. For to impeach Mr. O all that is left is a VICE Pres who a step BELOW par to say the least. White House is truly creepy these days.
I CANNOT watch the news - too dam depressing. I can only pray that when these bunch of CLOWNS go we are better off with the next. Want my opinion - now you know!
SPEAK OUT! (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 10:54:18 AM
Very patriotic. And that's the ruse. I'm not sure that blindly following, god, country and honor is at it all right thing to do when careful thought says otherwise.
Ron
SPEAK OUT! (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 9:01:10 AM
Uh, we have a Muslim in the White House. Although it is of little comfort now, I can say that I didn't vote for him in either election.
http://www.capitalisminstitute.org/allen-west-impeaches/
GONE TO WAR (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 8:20:24 AM
Hello neighbor in Algiers, I'm over here in Thibodaux. I liked your prose. To be a man sometimes comes with dire circumstances. Still, it is an inward feeling that is impressed upon us our whole lives. "Grow a set," is one of my favorite sayings about the manhood thing. Welcome to Authors Den.
