The Face Of Depression (poem from my 4th book) (Poetry) - 6/10/2009 6:30:57 AM
"The Face Of Depression" reveals the sorrow of torment binding the soul into darkness. Within a Comforts Embrace...for you
from me....
May Peace Find The Beauty of Your Spirit
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
My Invitation (Poetry) - 6/10/2009 6:27:18 AM
loves voice speaks of time everlasting
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
did she accept? I surely hope she did...
Pictures (Poetry) - 6/10/2009 6:25:00 AM
this love you honor for 13 years speaks elloquent poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Harsh Realities (Poetry) - 6/10/2009 6:22:45 AM
with comforts embrace may the joy of love's bounty return to this dimmed sky....
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
A Moment (Poetry) - 6/10/2009 6:19:30 AM
how lovely you describe the essence of her soul
Peace, Love & Inspirations to You Darin
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
A Moment (Poetry) - 6/7/2009 8:20:05 AM
Very nice. Thank you for sharing this moment.
A Moment (Poetry) - 6/6/2009 6:33:22 PM
Excellent written poem,I like it,take care
EDWIN
Tears of Fire II (Poetry) - 4/24/2009 1:55:21 AM
Great poem,beautifully written.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
The Tyranny (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 2:26:17 AM
Great poem,very well written,take care
Edwin
My Invitation (Poetry) - 12/23/2008 10:47:34 PM
:) Awwww, this just touches the heart!!
My Invitation (Poetry) - 12/22/2008 2:28:09 AM
Beautiful and heartfelt poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
My Invitation (Poetry) - 12/21/2008 8:27:27 PM
Awww, well miracles do happen and just maybe she will accept the invitation, God bless....
Be always safe,
Karen
My Invitation (Poetry) - 12/21/2008 8:13:14 PM
How beautiful loving someone so much, but how sad the time that has passed.
Mary
Hesitation (Another Poem From My 4th Book) (Poetry) - 12/20/2008 9:37:43 PM
I think as writers we all find this sometimes, I know I do. You've expressed well the fear of letting your true heart show because you love so much.
Endeavors of Time (Poetry) - 12/6/2008 9:26:18 AM
A beautiful poem,take care
Edwin
Endeavors of Time (Poetry) - 12/2/2008 5:57:49 PM
A true romantic longing so well expressed....
Be always safe,
Karen
In The Wake Of Six (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 9:37:42 PM
Loss lies heavy in your simple short lines, bringing the reader into the heart of your pain.
Harsh Realities (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 7:49:58 PM
Wow, this grips the heart.
Harsh Realities (Poetry) - 11/25/2008 4:26:27 PM
How how sad this is, the emotions are so raw, yet in time you will love again....
Be always safe,
Karen
Harsh Realities (Poetry) - 11/25/2008 1:46:00 PM
Beautifully expressed. Love doesn't have to end with one woman, live life to its fullest.
Mary
Pictures (Poetry) - 9/12/2008 3:18:39 PM
This is very beautiful,Sarah is a lucky woman.Take care of yourself and I enjoy reading your poem
Edwin
No Monogamy (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 3:36:40 PM
In the future, down the road, when you least suspect it your entire life will change over night. How sad this write is and the disillusionment in what could have been. Patience and one day you will fall in love again with another who shares your dreams and values...
Be always safe,
Karen
Pledges In The Moonlight (Poetry) - 8/27/2008 8:26:18 AM
Sarah is surely a lucky girl to receive this special proposal. You have much love to give her and surely she realizes that. To profess your love publicly like this takes lots of courage.
13 Dawns Past The Hour (Poetry) - 8/26/2008 11:15:30 AM
Darin,
Though this poem bring a tear to my eye it was lovely. A tribute to a love that will linger a lifetime. Excellent piece of poetry.
Pledges In The Moonlight (Poetry) - 8/23/2008 9:52:07 PM
Very loving proposal, full of warmth and deep love!
Pledges In The Moonlight (Poetry) - 8/23/2008 7:27:08 PM
Darin,
What a wonderful love poem, and what a lucky person your Sarah is.
Mary
Spirit & Eternity (Poetry) - 7/28/2008 2:04:51 PM
wow, i can relate to this very very well, i loved this, to the library it goes
Spirit & Eternity (Poetry) - 7/27/2008 6:51:21 AM
Great love and longing for her. Always keep her in your spirit for eternity. Lovely spiritual write.
Spirit & Eternity (Poetry) - 7/22/2008 6:45:39 PM
How sweet and endearing and the longing sentiments are crystal clear in this wonderful gem...
Be always safe,
Karen
Blue Tears Fallen (Poetry) - 7/15/2008 10:14:05 AM
Wow!!! Sad...indeed sometimes death is freedom. Poetically sincere!!!
Until...
Blue Tears Fallen (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 10:27:47 PM
How sinerely written and filled with such emotion that one can really feel all the anguish that lies within....
Be always safe,
Karen
Paths Crossed (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 8:41:43 PM
All the pondering, the allure of what could be, well said....
Be always safe,
Karen
Paths Crossed (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 5:13:03 PM
This is evocative and honest and truly felt.
John
Paths Crossed (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 1:31:58 PM
Such a touching love story. May you find your love. Beautiful write.
Mary
Whispers Of Love (Poetry) - 6/19/2008 4:30:41 AM
So beautiful, such a priceless love you share with your Sarah.
Whispers Of Love (Poetry) - 6/18/2008 11:59:15 PM
Beautiful love
My Consoler (Poetry) - 6/16/2008 9:14:46 PM
Very deeply profound in the expression of hopelessness until the one held close comforts, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
Death of my heart (poem from letters to sarah) (Poetry) - 6/9/2008 1:07:21 AM
This is touching.Its hard to loose a love one.I'm sure she is smiling in heaven.Thanks for sharing it.Take care and God bless
Edwin
Diamonds Through Love (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 6:21:29 PM
Resolution is sometimes better than dissolution. Wonderful dedication. -- Jeff
Diamonds Through Love (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 10:34:59 PM
A shared love between to equal is more than one can ask for, well said....
Be always safe,
Karen
Diamonds Through Love (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 8:41:10 PM
I like your style, and am glad your verse was heard. Warmth and Love, Carin'
Kisses in the wind (Poetry) - 5/25/2008 5:45:06 PM
A bittersweet ode to a true love, nicely presented. You hooked me with the title.
Take care,
Sherry
Kisses in the wind (Poetry) - 5/25/2008 7:55:16 AM
Heartfelt...keep sending her kisses.. they will find her. ;)
Faith And Payment (Poetry) - 5/21/2008 8:16:45 PM
Awww, so sweetly written with all the desires one can hold for self and for another....
Be always safe,
Karen
The Distance (Poetry) - 2/22/2008 12:53:22 AM
...longing...moments in love...traveled years...for one true of heart...in wishing will be shared.
beautifully penned Darin...
John
The Distance (Poetry) - 2/21/2008 6:54:16 PM
A long, lonely road to find true love and express it well....
Be always safe,
Karen
Beyond the threashold (Poetry) - 2/19/2008 6:59:26 PM
A joined loved cherished for all time, just wonderful....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Journey Of Time (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 11:38:22 PM
This is just beautiful, almost prayer like the way it flows....
Be always safe,
Karen
The angel (Poetry) - 1/20/2008 2:09:39 PM
Great job!!! Keep poetry alive!!!!
Moments Frozen (Poetry) - 12/17/2007 10:55:54 PM
Beautiful sentiments well expressed....
Be safe,
Karen
Whispers In The Dark (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 7:41:53 AM
Love this honest write from the core of your loving heart Darin!
Whispers ~ in the ear are the best form of sweet communication in love! Speaks to our Soul!
Thank you for sharing it!
Much love and Warmer hugs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
Whispers In The Dark (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 6:56:01 PM
I love those whispers in the dark - makes me feel truly loved.
Awesome poem,
Kathy
Whispers In The Dark (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 4:33:24 PM
This is so loving it takes my breath away. To have something so wonderful is a gift....
Be safe,
Karen
Whispers In The Dark (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 2:13:01 PM
Darin, this is such a great romantic writing...there's nothing like true love, it causes mankind to feel all sorts of things. Loved this.
Whispers In The Dark (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 7:25:27 PM
Beautiful writing,enjoyed...Hugsss
Anger and Rage (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 5:44:04 PM
Don't con the jurer, you may get a lifes sentance. ;)
Tears Undried (Poetry) - 6/22/2007 12:57:48 AM
Just BEEATUFUL and SAD!
Focus on what can be my sweet friend~
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE POsitive!
STay SAFE!
Amen!
Tears Undried (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 2:29:56 PM
Vivid description of emotion and imagination. Congratulations Darin. Waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}} Barbara
From Old To New (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 3:28:21 AM
This is true. Every new expression is a timeless piece of then and now. Regardless the author. Nicely done.
From Old To New (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 8:03:15 PM
How very lovely a write this is. Pondering, thinking.....Enjoyed.
Be safe,
Karen
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 5/29/2007 10:04:55 PM
A poem written with raw emotion and feeling. Most of us have felt as if life was a constant slap in the face at one time or another. Things do always improve, it takes time and faith in yourself. Keep writing, it's an excellent way to begin to heal.
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 5/28/2007 6:29:37 PM
A most solemn write filled with inner anguish. Turn to God and let his light shine into your heart and brighten your days ahead.....
Be safe,
Karen
The Old Man (Poetry) - 5/11/2007 10:10:49 PM
A weathered, broken man, still with a small twinkle of life. Interesting!
Be safe,
Karen
Frustration! (another poem from when the light flickers) (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 12:16:59 PM
We all get mind block from time to time. I find standing in the middle of the freeway during rush hour helps me to come up with all kinds of ideas.
The song of a lonely man (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 1:49:36 PM
God gave you the gift of life, self worth is your gift back. All people, all life has value.
Be safe,
Karen
The song of a lonely man (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 7:47:01 AM
Darin, Nice write, you have hit the nail on the head...Having asked the question "why must I go on?" I can say it was because I have at least one more poem that needs to be written.
Thanks,
Dan
Broken Man Song (Poem from my second book) (Poetry) - 4/23/2007 5:54:03 PM
Darin,
Powerful write. There are many broken men on the streets, homeless, starving, There are also broken men in homes who have been brought to their knees by circumstance. Outstanding poem, Darin.
Many blessings,
~Linda
The Swing (Poetry) - 1/7/2007 10:35:05 AM
Oh, this is so lovely and romantic!!!!!
Sandie May Angel :o)
Loving you (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 12:12:27 PM
Yes, it's really simple and you spelled it out in this verse.
Good read!
Chanti
The runs come in (Poetry) - 9/5/2006 1:09:14 PM
This puts you right there, popcorn and peanuts and crackerjacks, lol-loved the descriptions in this that are not so heavy as to weigh down the poem, but distinct enough in word choice to bring the scene alive for the reader.
The runs come in (Poetry) - 9/5/2006 12:03:13 PM
nice tribute to the Babe. Mary
My works (edited and revised) (Poetry) - 8/1/2006 11:42:07 AM
Yes and this is why i write also so with that said you just write on poet.
My works (edited and revised) (Poetry) - 8/1/2006 8:54:58 AM
great poem Darin, truly good work from a poet. Keep up the good work. peacexxxJennifer
My works (edited and revised) (Poetry) - 8/1/2006 8:53:08 AM
I wonder who many poems posted here are about the craft and the practice of poetry. I know that I've written more than a few . . . write what you know i quess1
Interesting write
john+
The star (Poetry) - 7/24/2006 6:41:24 PM
It is fun to do from poolside too.
All the mystery awaiting.
Enjoyed...
The Chest (Poetry) - 6/27/2006 1:25:24 PM
and what a fantastic moment...the discovery of the design! I enjoyed this.
Susan
