The Legends of Nevermore County (Book) - 1/25/2008 11:56:11 PM
It brings back childhood memories a world apart: I grew up in Romania. But there also was a bridge (only one), made of a split branche, giving it a Y shape.
Your story is dreamlike, carries the reader in a wild, mistery world, where one would like to live, carried by fantasies.
Being in the Middle - a Children's Story (Short Story) - 6/1/2008 2:33:34 PM
I am the middle of 3 girls. I remember feeling a bit out of it--especially as I was born in December near Xmas and my 2 sisters had summer birthdays.
I really could relate-and yes-the middle of an Oreo and a Twinkie are indeed the best part!
Patterns (Short Story) - 11/14/2006 2:03:08 AM
Light and easy reading
Being in the Middle - a Children's Story (Short Story) - 11/10/2006 1:03:59 PM
This is a really cute piece, Adele. I am one the eldest child--so I can only imagine what it must be like to be in middle. Still, you're right about the Oreos...
Wendi
About Small Things . . . . (Article) - 1/14/2007 1:22:04 PM
This is very good. Thank you for sharing it.
Chrissy
About Small Things . . . . (Article) - 1/11/2007 7:04:46 AM
I don't even know what to say, I liked this so much...
Rejection Slips (Article) - 8/14/2006 7:15:12 AM
At least you have a personal note attached. The ones that are most insulting are the ones so Xeroxed they are crooked on a page and barely legible becaused they've been copied so many times.
Writing is a crap shoot.
Good rant.
Elizabeth
An Animal Lover's Declaration of Independence (Article) - 8/9/2006 7:04:18 PM
May there be many more people like you......I am one :-)....although I might not have the spiders in the house;-) Nature is beautiful in all of its forms :-) Enjoy what is natural to you :-)
Morning (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 3:36:41 PM
Your poem reminds me of my grand father. thanks. hope you do well with your wrighting! R C Smith
Choosing a Candidate (Poetry) - 10/31/2008 1:07:57 PM
You captured it perfectly, Adelle. When truth and humor merge.
This posting should be posted on the editorial page of every newspaper in the country...and in the campaign book of every
politician. -gene.
Choosing a Candidate (Poetry) - 10/31/2008 9:02:37 AM
A humorous slant on politics. Thanks for making me laugh about such a sad subject. I liked the clichés bouncing from the walls. Elections these days seem to be nothing but repeats of past elections. The "ostrich-like" hit the "nail" on the head and drove it home. It seems most politicians at the presidential level have their heads in the ground hiding from reality. Let's hope that the outcome of this election and our next president will change that image. We can only pray and hope.
I remember - A Child's Poem (Poetry) - 7/8/2008 11:22:19 AM
Wonderful poem. Nice memories of Dad and the sea.
John Michael
Morning (Poetry) - 7/4/2008 9:49:56 PM
Hi Adelle, I read your poem,"Morning" I found it a fun read. Reminds me of me in the mornings. Best of luck with your writing. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den"
If I Turned My Back On You (Poetry) - 5/27/2008 7:24:28 AM
Beautiful Morning To You Adelle,
This write evokes the purity of a kind heart & soul of lovingness.
You have penned a beautful memory of love so very cherished.
Have a Lovely Day Poetess.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
If I Turned My Back On You (Poetry) - 4/11/2008 12:29:36 PM
I don't like to turn my bakc of anywone. You said it all in this great poem. I offended a poet Vickie McColley on author' den and had to apologize. Said she should forget her bad husband. Missunderstood me and now I want to read more of her poetry along with yours to . Like to not hurt anyone.
I rode my Nightmare (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 7:31:28 PM
You captured the essence in only a few short words - well done!
In the Principal's Office (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 6:03:42 AM
I stopped by your den and was immediately intriqued by your pegasus picture and your words--this write is awesome-the words chewed into sawdust--great!
In the Principal's Office (Poetry) - 3/23/2007 2:42:45 PM
Hi friend,Adelle,
This poem brought back a similar memory of when I misbehaved and was sent to the Principal's office. I got scolded ans had extea homework.
Thanks for the nostalgia. Feel free to visit my sites at www.freewebs.com/kendoo or at helium .com and of course, here in the 'den'
In the Principal's Office (Poetry) - 3/2/2007 2:31:05 PM
I can't remember if I was ever 10 Adelle.....
:-)
Choosing a Candidate (Poetry) - 2/1/2007 4:46:17 PM
What a perfect picture of the proverbial smoke screen used in today’s politics.
Choosing a Candidate (Poetry) - 2/1/2007 4:09:54 PM
Clever, true and unfortunately humorous. Enjoyed
Rusty
In the Principal's Office (Poetry) - 2/1/2007 11:48:08 AM
What a visual interpretation of a child's first visit to the principals office. Great metaphor.
In the Principal's Office (Poetry) - 2/1/2007 10:42:38 AM
An artful story of a ten year old mind. Superb.
Rusty
In the Principal's Office (Poetry) - 2/1/2007 10:32:32 AM
Frighteningly evocative. I was there back then, and felt this exact way. (-:
I love it! Great write.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
I rode my Nightmare (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 10:24:12 AM
Whew--sounds like some nightmare. Enjoyed the write,
Wendi
I rode my Nightmare (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 9:49:29 AM
Sounds like some of my nightmares, Adelle. Well described here!
Warmest regards,
CJ
I rode my Nightmare (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 9:38:14 AM
Been there done that....had a few nightmares myself, some that I had to hold on tight, one or two that became a reality and had to hold on even tighter. Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Lovers (Poetry) - 10/31/2006 7:10:00 AM
Adele
Simply beautiful verse..
Peter
Lovers (Poetry) - 10/31/2006 7:06:13 AM
"Lovers"
An enjoyable read with a hint of
sensuality!
Lovely to share, thanks!
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
I remember - A Child's Poem (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 3:44:42 PM
Very nice and what I think a child's poem should really be... Thank U for sharing!
I remember - A Child's Poem (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 1:58:54 PM
A lovely piece! Thank you for sharing.
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
The Cutting Edge (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 1:41:45 PM
Very well written with a wondeful vivid imagination of the sword.
Two Sparrows (Poetry) - 9/12/2006 6:12:00 AM
this poem grabbed me from the get go! wonderful imagery!
Susan
Two Sparrows (Poetry) - 9/12/2006 4:53:39 AM
This is lovely, Adelle. The imagery is so good here.
Hugs,
CJ
Sharing (Poetry) - 8/30/2006 7:17:36 AM
Adelle
Short, stunning and succinct romantic composition
And I love that goldfinch graphic
Peter
Sharing (Poetry) - 8/30/2006 12:17:00 AM
Adelle, that is the sweetest, most romantic poem I've read today.
Short and to the point and says volumes.
Brava!!!
If I Turned My Back On You (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 3:03:14 PM
I doesn't read like someone turning their back.
Ron
If I Turned My Back On You (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 1:59:50 PM
So deeply, deeply TRUE...I also believe in fate and if it's meant to be it will manefest..Thanks for this beauty!!
Love & Light, Dove
If I Turned My Back On You (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 1:42:00 PM
Beautifully penned. It's kind of like two ships that pass in the night, don't you think?
Nightmare (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 12:07:49 PM
This is exactly what work feels like to me!! Eerie and dark, wonderful write!
Nightmare (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 9:08:25 AM
Great job here Adelle~~
Peace & Harmony, Dove
Nightmare (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 8:33:02 AM
Hope the mattress and the toilet seat behave....
The Village Idiot (Poetry) - 8/9/2006 7:05:30 PM
I love your observation ability. Not many would pick up on that :-) Wonderful write.
The Village Idiot (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 6:56:56 AM
Very interesting thought you conjure up here. Who actually is the idiot? If the others hear a beat of nonexistent music what does that say about the power of suggestion on weak minds? Reminds in a much more poetic way of the old Emperor's New Clothes story. I enjoyed your poem.
The Village Idiot (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 5:21:22 AM
LOL, this is marvellous, and just who is really the village idiot huh?
Good one!
Ch'erie
The Village Idiot (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 9:32:18 PM
clever and well defined ...
Old Holy One (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 4:55:54 PM
This symbolistical-surreal-impressionist satirical poem makes me realize that the IN-VERB is on its way to etch REASON on huamnkind.
"The Holy One" is a poetic-philosophic flower scented with aromas of wisdom and historic vision.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The Village Idiot (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 4:45:05 PM
I have enjoyed the reading of "The Village Idiot".
Your writing style is very artful, stimulating and inspiring.
Thank You for posting "The Village Idiot".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The Village Idiot (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 1:46:17 PM
LOL
he is magic!!!
love this..pax A
Old Holy One (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 1:31:07 PM
Cleanliness in next to Godliness!
I remember my mother telling me that. This protagonist you have conjurred, this holy one, although seemingly enlightened, has forgotten the more basic of human requirements it would seem.
This one made me chuckle ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
