Sparky, The Shooting Star--Sparky Learns a Lesson (Short Story) - 3/26/2003 8:37:31 AM
This is wonderful! I can't believe that it's not published yet! I actually had tears for little Cindy and Tommy and their mother and evenfor Sparky! Very good write!
Sparky, The Shooting Star--Sparky Learns a Lesson (Short Story) - 9/14/2002 2:08:15 PM
Debbie, this is a wonderful story!
It stirred my emotions and brought a sprinkle of tears.
Keep up the good work
Lee
The Trail to Jessie's Heart (Short Story) - 9/14/2002 2:01:25 PM
Hi Debbie.
I remember this story from iPublish and I enjoyed reading it as much as the first time.
It is a touching love story, and points out how we never know what the other person is feeling.
Until we ask.
Very good.
Lee
The Trail to Jessie's Heart (Short Story) - 9/13/2002 11:04:57 AM
Debbie, I enjoyed reading your story, especially since I do not generally read romance or westerns. It seems to have potential for novel development. Toward that end I have a few critical and congradulatory points to share if you would care to hear them. Go ahead and email me. Either way I did enjoy the story.
Sparky, The Shooting Star--Sparky Learns a Lesson (Short Story) - 9/13/2002 7:38:20 AM
Nicely done, I've found myself under the dark stary night many an evening. I'll be looking for Sparky from now on.
Sparky, The Shooting Star--Sparky Learns a Lesson (Short Story) - 9/7/2002 1:12:09 PM
what a beautiful write, debbie!! it made me cry!! >tears < love, and ((HUGS)), your friend, karen lynn. god bless you!!!!!
Micah (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 1:29:17 PM
sweet and tender! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Micah (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 11:51:27 AM
This is so beautiful. I loved it.
Micah (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 11:45:27 AM
beautiful poetry of a newborn this is excellent....
Micah (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 7:36:23 AM
What a beautiful write on such a precious topic, Debbie. Children are the future of this world and worthy of such many things.
Thanks for sharing this write.
Jill :)
Micah (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 7:30:41 AM
Wonderful poem, Debbie!
The miracle of birth truly is a God-send.
Micah (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 7:20:26 AM
What a beautiful and precious write!!
Love Tinka
A Wedding Poem (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 6:36:33 AM
Hi Debbie:
Wonderful write from beginning to end. Love this.
~ Sandie May Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Micah (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 6:35:35 AM
What a pleasant journey!
~ Sandie May Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Daddy (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 6:24:16 AM
Beautiful tribute to your Daddy. I know how you must feel. I've lost mine a few months ago in February.
~ Sandie May Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Devastation (Poetry) - 11/26/2003 12:36:05 PM
An entire generation was marked by that day...splendid write here. ,
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 11/26/2003 12:28:14 PM
This is well done...lovely message, well crafted.
Dakota (Poetry) - 5/15/2003 8:14:27 AM
I know the exact feeling; seven times over, and each one of them just as special in their own way, ( first grandson, first granddaughter, etc). Thanks for bringing back wonderful memories.
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 5/14/2003 3:37:44 PM
This is beautiful, just wanted to let you know that you are really good at writing, wished I was :)
My BrotherMy Hero (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 9:49:26 AM
I never had a borther and always thought I'd be better off if I had had that opportunity. This poem lets me know that I was right. What a beautiful tribute.
- J -
His Gifts (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 9:47:47 AM
This is absolutely wonderful also! I am very impressed with your poems. Godd job on this one!
- J -
Momma's Gifts (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 9:45:53 AM
What can I say? You know this is beautiful. I know because it came from your heart. Your mom is so proud of you!
For Just A Little While (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 9:41:52 AM
This is absolutely beautiful and emotional. ow, you are a very emotional person....just like me! This one made me cry. I really like it.
- J -
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 9:40:06 AM
Your heartfelt emotion is splayed so vividly across the page. Beautiful poem and what a loving tribute. I know your sister is looking down with pride.
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 9:34:42 AM
What a beautiful poem. Very good write.
Night (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 3:00:38 PM
Strikingly beautiful !
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 7:21:42 PM
Debbie, thanks so much for remembering this day. It will never die so long as our society exists. Such a tragic day. I was watching tv when it happened and saw it all. I feel that we have a right to protect ourselves. That is what our government did in Afghanistan and what it will do in Iraq. God bless America. God
protect the USA and it citizens. Bill
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 3:24:16 PM
wonderful write thank you for sharing
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 9:42:44 AM
I reread this and cried some more. Such a sad tale. Bill
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 9:40:01 AM
God could never have given you a sweeter gift. And it is in the face of the child we know God exists and God is love. Bill
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/17/2003 6:17:22 AM
I adore this! Especially:
"...“Memem, can I pend da nite?”..." Precious!
For Just A Little While (Poetry) - 2/17/2003 1:06:57 AM
Too much sentimental and nice. Plz carry on.
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/17/2003 12:48:10 AM
Beautiful poem. and really heart touching.
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 11:23:37 AM
Grandchildren are a blessing! Wonderful, heartfelt write.
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 10:06:58 AM
So beautiful Debbie...I also look forward to having grandchildren...a precious gift.
Chrissie
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 8:51:47 AM
hope to be a granny one day too....
pst...not ready yet...hehehe...feel to young for that...lol
Love Tinka
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 7:41:18 AM
Love this write--one day I hope to know the same blessing!!
Momma's Gifts (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 9:02:53 PM
Momma's Gift struck a nerve it's a wonderful
poem I felt this deep inside my heart
Bless you !
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 8:11:18 PM
Debbie,
You have penned a beauty here.
Peg
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 8:01:11 PM
One of God's little children, a precious write. Hold him dear to your heart.
Nancy
Dakota (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 7:42:32 PM
Yes, it is precious ;) (As is his name!!)
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 6:25:58 PM
Good Job Debbie, I always enjoy your poems.
Dennis
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 1:35:05 PM
so touching...children do feel each others emotions....sad...but from your heart.
Night (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 6:06:38 PM
Hi Deb
I see why this was published. Very graceful turn of perspectives, beautiful.
Vicky
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 2:31:50 AM
Like my thoughts.....
any way we have one mental blood group, rather u are living very far away from me. :)
Very good poem
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 2:29:13 AM
So Emotional and Touching! Life can be so very hard.
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 2:17:17 AM
Such a good write Debbie, poignant and heartfelt. I can relate to this as I lost my close friend this way 18 months ago.
Chrissie
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 8:05:36 PM
I cried. Bill
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 5:16:56 PM
Hi Deb
I have a sister-friend like your Vickie.
Her name is Stacey. We were pulled apart by fate, too. Somewhere she knows you wrote this. Thanks for visiting "Unwanted". I changed the name to "A Tale of Mrs Jekyl."
Love Vicky
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 2:54:04 PM
>tears < :( (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(
Vickie and Me (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 2:50:19 PM
Oh this was sad.
Excellent write.
peg
For Just A Little While (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 1:27:02 PM
what a beautiful, heartfelt prayer this is...many of us that no longer have our mothers probably ask God this very thing...i know, mine died 13 years ago, and i miss her still. :( thank you for sharing this, debbie! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Devastation (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 1:34:58 PM
i will never forget that horrible day!! god bless america, and may he bring blessings and mercy upon us and keep us safe!!
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/26/2002 12:47:09 PM
She lives one with your love!!
Beautiful heart felt tribute!
Take Care-Dale
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/20/2002 4:21:12 PM
A wonderful tribute to your sister...and the Poem is also a good one ...Thank you for sharing
My BrotherMy Hero (Poetry) - 9/20/2002 11:57:23 AM
Beautiful. I lost my " brother hero" on Sept. 27th 1995 of lung cancer. But he's with me each and every day. Aren't GOOOD big brother's THE BEST! Great write tears to my eyes
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/20/2002 11:55:11 AM
Wonderful Deb and so sad. I am facing this only I'm the one going. She hears you. And sister's know.......we just know!!!
God BLess
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/17/2002 12:33:35 PM
i'm sorry for your loss (((HUGS))) and know that i care...emotional write, this...love, karla. :(
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/17/2002 11:00:51 AM
so moving and so sad, i can feel the pain.Great poem...
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/17/2002 10:15:11 AM
Thats Beautiful Debbie, I know it must be hard.
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/17/2002 9:44:58 AM
I know the feeling only too well
but now she is watching over you
as my brother is me
this was a very tearful write and you did it so well God Bless You
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/17/2002 9:23:16 AM
i am so sorry for your loss. may jesus bring you a peace and a comfort that passes all understanding. sad, heartwrenching write!! (((HUGS))), your friend, karen lynn. >tears <
The Miraculous Visit (Poetry) - 9/17/2002 8:08:47 AM
I know she hears and will always return your great love for her. Beautiful poem.
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 9/16/2002 10:26:12 AM
short, but eloquent!! beautiful job, debbie!! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS))
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 9/13/2002 5:39:47 PM
This was lovely~`*
Devastation (Poetry) - 9/13/2002 7:24:21 AM
Like the images we have seen flashed in our faces since that tragic event, your poem strikes that place deep within that brings my hand back to the saber I carried for so many years.
Night (Poetry) - 9/13/2002 7:22:09 AM
Nicely expressed. A beautiful retelling of mankinds eternal question.
God's Gifts (Poetry) - 9/13/2002 7:19:32 AM
I lost my Mother when I was 21, and my soul weeps that my children will never know her.
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 9/13/2002 7:17:11 AM
Very nice tribute, a eulogy to time.
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 9/13/2002 7:12:54 AM
That is one lucky smile owner.
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 9/13/2002 2:26:45 AM
Short and sweet..Very pretty images. Thanks, Dani
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 9/12/2002 7:39:13 PM
This poem is beautiful.
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 9/12/2002 10:55:15 AM
A smile gives everyday! Great!
Beauty (Cinquain) (Poetry) - 9/12/2002 9:12:36 AM
I love the smile the best!
Great poem!
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 4:58:44 PM
This is a nice piece and I would like to include it in my collection project dedicated to 911. Please email me if this is possible and if you are interested. Thanks
Afrika M.A.Abney
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 11:31:30 AM
Yes Debbie it is a year since But remember America braved it and came the winner.
Love from India
Joel
This Day, Last Year (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 11:28:55 AM
yes...and when this happened, i didn't think we'd ever see another year...so much uncertainty and fear...thank God, we've made it...changed forever...never the same...i hope we are a better Nation for it. "always remember and never forget." (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( **GREAT WRITE!!**
God's Gifts (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 10:08:01 AM
sweet and moving tribute, debbie!! made me cry, too!! >tears < love, and (((HUGS))), your friend, karen lynn. ((MORE HUGS)))
Devastation (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 9:59:09 AM
oh, God...what a write! >>shivers and tears < < you captured it perfectly. WELL DONE!! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
God's Gifts (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 9:58:12 AM
awwww...sweet tribute. made me cry...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
My BrotherMy Hero (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 9:28:09 AM
beautiful! let us draw nigh unto our families, and thank God we have brothers and sisters, parents, friends and loved ones...some are not so blessed. "always remember and never forget." (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
My BrotherMy Hero (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 8:46:04 AM
what a lovely tribute, debbie!! great write! thanks for your lovely comments; they are really appreciated!! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) ~never forget!!~
Night (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 5:46:42 AM
What a marvelous piece.
Afrika
Devastation (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 2:03:15 AM
A great tribute.May I use this piece in my collection of poetry project.Please let me know.Thank you
Momma's Gifts (Poetry) - 9/11/2002 1:53:32 AM
I love it! As a mother, myself, it holds special meaning. What a wonderful poem!
His Gifts (Poetry) - 9/7/2002 1:13:46 PM
beautiful! glad to know that you have jesus in your life!! he has surely blessed you by giving you such a powerful gift!! may you never lose it!! love, and god bless, your friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS))
Momma's Gifts (Poetry) - 9/6/2002 12:56:04 PM
~tears~ what a heartfelt tribute to your mother!! this is absolutely beautiful!!!!
Momma's Gifts (Poetry) - 9/6/2002 5:50:07 AM
I'm sure she is smiling in heaven
receiving your gift of words.
very touching and warming to the soul
Momma's Gifts (Poetry) - 9/6/2002 1:01:58 AM
This made me cry...that was your momma 's love touching through you onto another's heart.
She would be sssoooooo proud of you.
Night (Poetry) - 9/4/2002 8:11:55 AM
I liked this.
Night (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 10:26:14 PM
very nice poetry...
Night (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 10:06:38 PM
Nice write.. I enjoyed it.
Married Bliss (Poetry) - 1/8/2002 8:46:03 PM
This took me on a trip down memory lane, a bad trip, so it was obviosly a well written poem. ;) Janet
Married Bliss (Poetry) - 1/7/2002 12:39:49 PM
Hi Debbie, real cute Poem
I like it.
Your poetry Friend audrey
His Gifts (Poetry) - 1/2/2002 7:17:30 PM
How wonderful to know that Jesus lives in you. Your poem expresses the state of your heart. God Bless You for these words of encouragement to our world. Thanks, Lana
His Gifts (Poetry) - 1/2/2002 9:26:20 AM
Hi Debbie,
This is a beautiful poem.
You write of important things which we all need to pay attention to.
Keep up the good work!
Lee
His Gifts (Poetry) - 1/1/2002 11:47:41 AM
Amen! Happy New Year Debbie! Janet
