End of Us (Short Story) - 6/17/2007 2:23:14 PM
Frightening and morbid, but great. I've never heard the end of the world imagined that way! Good job.
Elvis, Baby (Poetry) - 7/22/2008 12:52:36 AM
well done
My Helen (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 4:39:44 AM
Carter,
BEAUTIFUl tribute to your Helen. I know she will love this poem! EXCELLENT!
Blessings,
~Linda
Carpal Tunnel Animosity (or Internet Mouse Hand) (Poetry) - 7/6/2008 7:45:02 PM
OUCH!!! Now quit viewing porn! That's yer punishment :) Sayeth she whose hands cramp daily..from underuse of Magnesium!! RSI suck LOL, Carpal...doubly sucks....Hope you get some relief, and I will add to Lois advice here, stretch the fingers out....You prolly do anyway. YAK YAK at yah. :) Reeeegards
Ch'erie
Carpal Tunnel Animosity (or Internet Mouse Hand) (Poetry) - 7/6/2008 6:45:19 PM
It could take forever to read all of interest on the den. As to carpal tunnel keep your hands even and not leaning downward to be more comfortable. Use the fingers and move the hands very little.
Caramel Frappacino Venti (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 3:44:10 PM
Love those icy drinks especially now at this season of the year. Iced coffee, starbucks, nothing like it. Of course, I must have the most expensive brand, isn't that what life is all about for us old folks now.
Adrift (Poetry) - 6/9/2008 2:25:31 PM
You are not really adrift. You are a great servant for God and your country. Your family is very proud of you as the family on the den is so proud of you too.
The Hardest Thing (Poetry) - 6/9/2008 2:24:29 PM
Thank you for serving your country. You do it because you want to and leaving family behind is the hardest thing. May God keep you safe and bring you home safely to them again.
Best Days (Poetry) - 6/9/2008 2:23:13 PM
Great memorial poem and I find it enjoyable to read to know someone young like you can really care enough for your Dad to memorialize him like this.
Duel for Abby (Poetry) - 6/9/2008 2:21:53 PM
It is a great challange, a great duel and now it's my turn to say Good write and much enjoyed.
Caramel Frappacino Venti (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 6:42:32 PM
LOLOLOLOL!!! Having worked in a Barnes & Noble with a cafe, I could really appreciate this!! You did a great job at this, building the longing as if a lust of other kinds, love it.
Caramel Frappacino Venti (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 5:04:29 PM
Tried one of those strawberrycreams the other day; Wow!
Caramel Frappacino Venti (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 11:44:53 AM
Cute and fits the sentiments of many....
Be always safe,
Karen
Poppycock (Poetry) - 2/10/2008 5:33:31 AM
LOL! You really shouldn't pull our legs this way. Nicely done.
Those that Return (Poetry) - 2/10/2008 5:26:04 AM
Hmm. This is a deeply moving piece, which immediately took my mind to the war in Iraq and our valiant stalwarts waging combat against tyranny and in favor of democracy. Your words remind us to take care of those who return to us with healing needed both internally and externally, requiring our prayers and support. Well done, my friend.
Those that Return (Poetry) - 1/17/2008 8:04:33 PM
A very poignant tale, well done...
Be safe,
Karen
Poppycock (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 6:45:20 AM
A wise man once told me...Sonny, it's not how much have, it's how you use what you have!
In the case of this delightful write of yours it is more than adequate and you have used it qute well in the presentation. Excellent work!
Poppycock (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 6:51:59 AM
Giggle! Ah, I think you have penetrated to the truthy core, here! Cool!
On Mother's Day (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 4:34:15 PM
Good write. Enjoyed reading.
On Mother's Day (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 6:16:01 PM
Different, yet heartfelt and beautiful. Your pain and anguish comes through crystal clear.....
Be safe,
Karen
Best Days (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 4:35:02 PM
Ah! Have to hand to those who grabbed life and lived it! Guess that is what memories are all about.........
Be safe,
Karen
Best Days (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 11:04:19 AM
outstanding write! And a great tribute to your father and his service.
I could not help but smile a bit as I have a couple of pictures very much like that one.
Best Days (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 6:23:06 AM
Oh my,sounds interesting,Hugs
Best Days (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 3:25:15 AM
You make getting drunk sound fun?!?:)
The Hardest Thing (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 6:28:45 AM
Carter,
A soldier saying goodbye to his family is always hard. Alot is said between the lines in this poem, Carter. The pain and anquish of watching a soldier walk away, and the turmoil in his heart can be felt here. Amazing poetry!
Many blessings,
~Linda
The Hardest Thing (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 6:13:34 AM
Great writing,stay safe and well...HUgss
The Hardest Thing (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 3:48:37 AM
So sad. I applaud you and your family for allwing me and mine to sleep under thier blanket of safety. God bless all of you!
The Hardest Thing (Poetry) - 6/11/2007 8:54:51 PM
A soldier leaving his family behind, been there! Goodbye's are always difficult........
Be safe,
Karen
