Xaedogion (Book) - 9/16/2012 5:39:20 PM
Hi T-bird, while this piece needs editing, I really like the story idea. I am not so much a sci-fi freak but I love books that are different and you and your brother seem to have hit on a great one here. Keep going ... I'd love to see the finished item ... would consider buying it. And don't stop being crazy ... that's where your best work is at :-)
Peace in the bottle (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 2:09:16 PM
How sad to fill bottles with your heartaches because to speak them they go ignored. You have painted a picture of a lonely soul searching, searching always searching.... Very well written!
Be safe,
Karen
Peace in the bottle (Poetry) - 7/21/2007 8:11:11 PM
I like the image of bottled anxieties. There's a pleasant finality, too. Nice work.
Beautiful sunset (Poetry) - 7/17/2007 5:01:41 PM
Very nice imagery. And manipulation of mood, as well. It's not an easy task.
Beautiful sunset (Poetry) - 7/17/2007 5:16:45 AM
Lovely writing,Hugsssss
Beautiful sunset (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 8:40:22 AM
Intriguing and compelling!
Beautiful sunset (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 8:23:01 AM
loverly and metaphoric thoughts~
.ness.
End of the rope (Poetry) - 7/14/2007 3:52:48 PM
such despair; but its not what we do, it is WHOSE we are. ..this is so succinct and sparse, as if it was a metaphor, a foreshadowing of a shortened life,
well-portrayed
.ness.
End of the rope (Poetry) - 7/13/2007 2:55:30 AM
A sad poem indeed and wonderfully written ... I hope he find the strength within himself to overcome life's adversities ... Welcome to the den ... look forward to reading more of your work ... hugs - Tiana
