Fear of Heights (Poetry) - 2/3/2013 4:30:52 AM
spare strong writing with repetitions
that truly work and aren't there for padding;
i like this work, Mercy;
my friend, Duke, recommended you to me and
i'm glad he did
john
Fear of Heights (Poetry) - 2/1/2013 4:15:43 AM
Manic Man:
I was scrolling through the M's and was irresistably drawn to your nom de plume (or guerre, as the case may be). I am very impressed and hope to see you post more and more. I don't sugarcoat anything; if I see something that I don't care for, I just don't comment. So you're from "down in Loos-i-anna, where the alligators grow so mean..." I myself am a High Plains cajun who lives in a Harsh Paradise where the grizzly bears grow so damned big and mean. Welcome to AD!
duke
Fear of Heights (Poetry) - 10/30/2007 1:17:49 PM
Beautifully written and so true to form. You have a very good eye to see what many cannot, enjoyed...
Be safe,
Karen
Fear of Heights (Poetry) - 10/30/2007 3:53:39 AM
Oh yeah, I can relate and I like your style, plus the fact that you seem to "know" whereas you speak . . . THAT, in my not-so-humble opinion says it all . . . Welcome to AD from a Louisiana man who thinks if anybody can change the corruption down here Bobby can . . .
Fear of Heights (Poetry) - 10/29/2007 7:11:09 PM
Welcome to Author's Den, you're among friends.
Hard to climb the mountain, but the journey worth it, yes. Excellent write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.