The Storm (Short Story) - 5/21/2010 1:47:15 PM
Awesome! I felt her pain! Thanks
The Storm (Short Story) - 1/23/2008 10:55:12 AM
There are storms in all of us. Thanks for your deft handling of this. Wonderful read.
The Gingerbread Man (Short Story) - 2/19/2006 4:35:15 AM
Lol ... should I dare say - typical men?! Lol.
God bless, Lisa.
Sandie.
Defending Our Domain (Short Story) - 2/6/2006 4:41:50 PM
Swashbuckling prose that would have made ther late Errol Flynn blush with envy !!
You have a knack for these inventive and condensed stories Celtic !
Peter
Defending Our Domain (Short Story) - 2/5/2006 10:29:02 PM
I liked the action, the pacing, and vision behind this work. It reads like an out-take however. Is there more before and it? If not, I think there should be. I'm especially interested in how these powers came to her. And a logic issue; if she can transport matter around like nuclear bombs and stuff, why does she need to use a hover sled an laser sword? Godlike powers would seem to be enough. What's she need technology for? background on the story--or knowing the rest of it--would answer some of these things.
Defending Our Domain (Short Story) - 2/5/2006 4:54:08 AM
Quite a story, and one heck of a Super Hero!
Defending Our Domain (Short Story) - 2/5/2006 4:45:52 AM
Your imagery blended with your storytelling makes this prose a joy to read. Great stuff and definatley commendable.
Felix
Defending Our Domain (Short Story) - 2/5/2006 3:46:03 AM
Great story Silver!!
Love Tinka
Defending Our Domain (Short Story) - 2/4/2006 6:51:06 PM
Silver,
So marvelous to read your stories again; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Storm (Short Story) - 12/28/2005 5:31:15 AM
The imagery is outstanding, Silver! Too well described! Its damn hot in Tanzania this time of the year, but reading this, I felt a chill! Too great a write!
God bless,
Sandie.
The Storm (Short Story) - 3/22/2005 9:04:50 PM
You actually made me feel shivers in my spine. I love snow. But there's a lot more than snow in this wonderful creative account. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
In Dreams - Part Three (Short Story) - 3/22/2005 9:03:09 PM
You certainly have lured all your readers in. Now what to we do? Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
In Dreams (Short Story) - 3/22/2005 3:27:06 AM
well done, holds reader interest, good beginning
In Dreams - Part Three (Short Story) - 3/21/2005 3:57:11 PM
Aw, gee...ending so soon? lol I'm eagerly anticipating the next part. Nice write!
In Dreams - Part Three (Short Story) - 3/21/2005 11:24:37 AM
excellent write, silver; very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
In Dreams - Part Three (Short Story) - 3/20/2005 6:47:16 AM
I'm hooked now - waiting for the next installment.
In Dreams - Part Two (Short Story) - 3/18/2005 10:07:23 AM
This got my blood stirring, being that I love the real estate investment and the mysterious, unknown element! I would like to read more! Nice job, Silver!
In Dreams (Short Story) - 3/18/2005 10:00:01 AM
Intriguing, so far, so good, as to building the suspense!
In Dreams - Part Two (Short Story) - 3/16/2005 9:35:26 AM
excellent addition to this series, silver; very well done! nice to read you again! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
In Dreams - Part Two (Short Story) - 3/16/2005 6:17:04 AM
Part Two is truly intriguing, SilverCeltic - and I love that quote at the beginning.
In Dreams (Short Story) - 3/11/2005 8:46:50 PM
I will certainly be coming up with teh second part in a couple of days. Thanks for reading!! ;) Silver
Ocean Spirit (Poetry) - 3/2/2023 2:04:01 PM
So spritual and comforting. Can this poem really kill a soul? the answer might be yes.
Heavenly peace found.
Best Regards
G.M
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 3/31/2012 6:51:40 PM
Their seems to be words of wisdom in this bit of prose. Thanks for sharing it!
A Castle Tour (Poetry) - 3/31/2012 6:50:04 PM
A great twist on the days of old! Thanks for sharing!
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/17/2009 11:40:20 PM
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem of truth. A true friend will tell you exactly what it is about and won't sugar coat it with sympathy when it isn't called for. A true friend will actually pull you from the ring of fire and tell you that you won't be so lucky the next time. A true friend is there when advice is needed, and not the smushy kind either, but truthful words that can bring us back to reality. Very well written and said.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
A Castle Tour (Poetry) - 8/30/2009 5:37:51 AM
Nice idea.. and even nicely expressed :) theres a book called Rude tales and glorious, by Nicholas Seare.. check it out i think you might like it... it has the sort of flow your poem does.. witty!
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 3/26/2009 8:29:48 AM
A great poem for hallows eve.....M
Upon Reflection (Poetry) - 10/25/2008 10:48:01 AM
My cat Seashore stuck with my by my side all day yesterday. It is if she knew it was my birthday and I had to celebrate it without our Tom, my hubby and here daddy. now today she is going her own way again. Cats do sense a need in you when you are sort of sad. They try to be your ever loving friend always though.
True Friends (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 10:03:27 AM
Agreed!
Love,
Sandy
The Nymph (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 8:05:46 AM
This is beautifully written erotica...Thoroughly enjoyable!
Mists of Time Passed (Poetry) - 8/27/2008 8:11:17 AM
I just love this poem it draws one in when roads dip
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 8/24/2008 11:18:06 PM
Yes indeed..it is a magical place..I loved it..visited twice
Blessings,
vesna
Tell Me Lies (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 9:24:16 AM
Tell me lies, tell me sweet loving lies, that song comes to mind with this write. My former 1st husband lied and promised things he did not carry through. Was an awful time for me and I cannot forget the lies he told me, but I forgave him when he passed away, as it should be. ***********
Gettysburg (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 9:21:11 AM
Live 45 minutes away from Gettysburg, always happy to visit and tour it. Like Devils Den best a series of rocks they hid in and fought. Grandkids like to play and climb there. I like to picnic there. Great thoughts written about the men and many were from far away and away from their loved ones. Love civil war novels too mostly about lost and found loves. Am a romanticist at heart. Good poem ***********
Irish Roads (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 9:18:51 AM
Thank you for this travels of a traveled path in Ireland. The photo is neat. Travelin by computer is as good as being there and your descriptions make it seem so real. Thanks again.
Apart From Life (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 9:16:32 AM
Rings true to me like a graduation presentation. Heard several last night and glad you have graduated to better things a you aged. You went out and made something of yourself which is what these days the newly graduated have to do and it won't be as easy as they think. Some for college, some for families, some for the service of our country, but all must get a life now. We all have to go on and have our own lives and live them as they are meant to be.
A Castle Tour (Poetry) - 5/29/2008 8:41:37 AM
I love anything about castles!! they fascinate me!
The Blue Ladies (Poetry) - 5/19/2008 7:55:21 PM
Awesome, just awesome, photo is enchanting and these words are full of enchantment.
Ocean Spirit (Poetry) - 5/19/2008 7:53:53 PM
I have heard that the ocean hates to give up its lost. Many are buried at sea never to return. I know of some whose plane went down in the ocean and they left behind children and wives in the 2nd world war. The ocean has many lives beneath it but still rolls on and on and gives us her tides.
When Life Deals You Lemons.... (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 5:03:15 PM
Don't go to bed and not resolve your anger I was taught. It is good advice, and being angry only hurts the situation and makes it profoundly longer and harder to make up. Oh but the joy afterward is scoring a hit and being together in love.
Grieving Still (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 4:59:54 PM
It's alright to grieve and to take all the time you need. When he comes to you in a dream, it is so nice but to wake up and find it isn't true is not much fun. Anyway they are with their creator and much better off than we are here. We stuggle on with our fears.
Dream Recorder (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 4:56:22 PM
Thanks for telling us your wishes for a dream recorder. Dreams are so profound sometime and should be recorded. Many we remember and do have a chance to analyze them, but some we don't remember.
I have heard dreams mean lots and can be analyzed by someone including yourself. Keep track of them and see a pattern.
Didn't I See You Today? (Poetry) - 5/9/2008 7:45:38 AM
Anger held inward lead to heart trouble and more, but anger expressed is good in a way but not anger toward others. Anger should be held in check and we should think about things rather than say them in anger. Too many impulsive things come out and anger destoys.
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 7:04:24 AM
Such a nice abandoned house. Maybe ghosts are present there now. I know a man who came from Rhode Island and he wants to move back to New Eng states in the future. Just a friend of mine, but I liked this poem very much. They were hard working people who lived there to have all those pets and animals, even a horse.************
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 7:01:18 AM
I do notice your advice and like it. Not to do gossiping, have no fear. You have a way with words like noone I've read so far and each to his own in living and giving. You made my day today. Love, Lois************
Friendships (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 6:59:11 AM
Loved the photo and it is such a lovely poem. I love nuts and berries and it is a good feed. Thanks for the poem. I must read more of yours. Stars to you**********
True Friends (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 5:37:20 PM
Right on, I feel you. Nothing pisses me off more than to having my feelings 'discounted' Great right my friend.
Janet xoxoxo
True Friends (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 4:38:03 PM
I think what we all really want at the end of a day is a friend to listen to and a friend to hold us-well done
True Friends (Poetry) - 2/22/2008 5:40:19 PM
Usually what we want is a good "ear" from a friend; let us rant and rave, or have a good cry, if need be, and then give us a silent Hug. Works for me...
Micke
True Friends (Poetry) - 2/14/2008 1:29:49 PM
Liked the words and inspiration of this one. Especially good to read on Valentine's Day for a widowed person. Great, keep up the good work.
Up Late (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 10:19:33 AM
I have to laugh, because I've been there--alone at night surounded by my own unlovely thoughts while others sleep, my body not cooperating. Love it!
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 12/31/2007 2:07:29 PM
I could almost smell the colors of the season upon us. Beautiful imagery.
True Friends (Poetry) - 12/31/2007 2:05:50 PM
It is so difficult for most to say anything but to repeat what others have said to them in those particular circumstances. It is never easy to comfort someone when every situation is distincly different from another. Words convey what is in the heart and empathy is best felt in that light. Missed your work.
Amor
True Friends (Poetry) - 12/25/2007 4:36:27 AM
Yes!
Tell Me Lies (Poetry) - 12/22/2007 8:52:37 PM
I liked this and it should go out to every person that has cheated on another person! Great write!!! Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost
True Friends (Poetry) - 12/22/2007 8:02:12 PM
Excellent piece..love it!
tells it how it is!
Vesna :)
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 12/5/2007 2:10:01 PM
Hi SilverCelticMoon! Thanks for making me feel Irish for a moment.
I would love to go to Ireland someday. It's truly a magical land.
You are welcome to visit my sites at either www.freewebs.com/kendoo or
here in the "Den".
Thanksgiving Day (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 2:59:00 AM
We always eat too much, and one thing Im thankful for is that my tummy dosent hold to much LOL.
Wonderful write, ty
Ch'erie
True Friends (Poetry) - 10/31/2007 7:43:48 AM
SO TRUE.
I absoutley LOVE this, really hits close to home. :)
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 8:52:48 AM
Boy ain't that the truth...
It's important to have a true
friend and unfortunately you
always find that you only have
one or two. Oh well...it counts
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 3:06:50 AM
Silver,
Sooo! true and bare to the bone.
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 8:51:21 PM
Good advice in this one, Silver; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 8:32:14 PM
Silver,
Excellent call to reveal one's true self and not hide behind a mask of deception. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 7:51:20 PM
I love Halloween. You've paid it fine tribute, Silver. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 4:06:32 PM
You are so right but often people just don't know what to say so you must take it that they care and at least they are trying to help...we all need that.
Fee
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 4:01:29 PM
No platitudes, thank you. Just the unabridged but compassionate truth is what I expect from my friends.
Kathy
True Friends (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 3:59:23 PM
Whatever you do, don't tell me "It will be ok."
That I can get from a fortune cookie, any ole day.
Good points. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 10:04:36 PM
a delightfully celebratory poem of Hallow's Eve ...
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 3:52:32 PM
Yeah, and ain't them goblins, ghosts and princesses cute.
I just love Halloween! Your word imagery and picture are wonderful.
Kathy
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 10:58:53 AM
A beautiful time of year! ...and yes
the All Hallow's Eve is exciting, magical
and a wonderful night. ;)
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 6:12:42 AM
My favorite Holiday, and I'm gettin ready!
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 4:49:20 AM
an wonderful and color work. fall is a great time of color and change.
randy
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 8:43:39 PM
Hello, Silver!
Welcome back! I've missed you!
A beautiful Autumnal write; well done! Hopefully, we'll be seeing more of your words.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fly by Night (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 7:59:30 PM
Silver Celtic Moon,
So good to read you again; you have been missed! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Up Late (Poetry) - 7/29/2007 4:03:09 PM
EXCELLENT!
:)
Hope it's only once, this bad!
Great write Silver1
WArm hugs and Inner Peace! Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Up Late (Poetry) - 6/14/2006 8:59:25 AM
IT HAS BEEN A PLEASURE TO READ SUCH FINE WORK
Up Late (Poetry) - 5/29/2006 3:40:14 PM
Goodness!
Hate those moments of swelling, bubbling, gurgling, burping, regurgitant releases of methane. Especially when it clears the room and you don't want to take the blame.
Foul gas is certainly one of the banes of our humanness.
Love the picture, so apt!
(-:
Richard
Oscar (Poetry) - 5/19/2006 12:42:14 AM
Perfection!!
saved this one!
Vesna..
My Knight (Poetry) - 5/19/2006 12:36:41 AM
YAY!!! I hope he has a brother..if so send him over to me..lol!
You are so blessed..good on ya girl!
beautiful tribute to your hubby..
Vesna
Up Late (Poetry) - 5/19/2006 12:34:43 AM
LOL:.been there DONE that!!!
Superb pice about something sooo uncomfortable..
delightful!!
Vesna :)
Up Late (Poetry) - 5/2/2006 9:46:32 AM
Coffee is my weakness too! Hope you felt better shortly after writing this. Love the photo! phew yu!
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 7:17:46 PM
Been there, Silver. I don't have acid reflux all the time but if I eat heavy carbs in the evening I am guaranteed to be waking up with that painful burn and uncomfortable bloat. I am sorry for your sleeplessness but from the depths of discomfort you have birthed a fantastic poem...graphic says it all!!
Take care,
Sherry
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 10:17:26 AM
the picture is priceless
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 8:46:23 AM
A wonderful tribute! Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
Regis
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 8:45:01 AM
Well, that's one way to vent I suppose. The photo nicely complements your verses. Thanks for the smiles. Love and peace (and relief),
Regis
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 7:38:04 AM
Should have came and talked to me I sat up till two working on some projects hoping someone would pop in on MSN or Yahoo to chat, alas no one did. good write and both subjects you covered in it I can relate to.
Felix
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 7:02:51 AM
But, I drink lots of diet soda and coffee and tea...
and that is why I am up tonight talking with just me.
I skip the pop, but the coffee and tea keep me up many a night! And I love that photo.
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 6:55:37 AM
I think most of us know this feeling to some degree... Cute picture! That'll teach kitty to follow too close.
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 6:24:50 AM
Hahahahaha....been there done that....pheeeeeew!!
Love Tinka :)
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 5:50:20 AM
I had those moments when the gas filled my stomach and wouldn't come out. I tossed and turned and I couldn't get to sleep, because it gave me great pain.
It seems fun when I read your poem, but I know the true feeling. I'm so glad you can at least write this out. Hope you are feeling better already.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 3:57:25 AM
LOL
Very funny picture!! *Laffin' too hard to review*
Up Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 2:47:45 AM
hahaha awesome...been to long since I heard from you
:)
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 7:50:56 AM
Ah! dear old Oscar, I think 'Dorian Grey' could've been written about me, oh no, that was 'Going Grey' lol. Silver, an excellent tribute to the wit, raconteur, poet and playwright that was Oscar Wilde.
Paul;-)
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 7:06:44 AM
Fascinating topic, and very interesting Oscar Wilde quotes. I especially like: "We are each our own devil, and we make this world our hell."
I also liked Felix's roommate - he had many great quotes, too!
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 5:59:22 AM
Celtic
A wonderful and fitting tribute to a Legend, Oscar Wilde
Peter
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 5:55:46 AM
Beautiful trip down memory lane! I love all the Oscars mentioned...
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 4:44:15 AM
Thank you for a much needed visit with Oscar Wilde ! ! ! I've loved his words since I was young, and this is a great refresher. Back in school and college, I acted in several of his plays, and loved delivering some of the lines... rolling off the tongue like warm melted cheese, or flinging them across stage like a buggy whip ! ! !
As too many of the young, today, say, "Cool - or Auesome!" I say, There will never be a better writer about human nature. - Bill
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 4:08:38 AM
Great ode to the man Oscar!!
Love Tinka
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 1:47:03 AM
I am not that familiar with Oscar Wilde, but this is a darn good write! Very well done~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 8:35:20 PM
I certainly enjoyed this write. Oscar Wilde and William Yeates are two of my favorite writers. I went to Ireland to see for myself the great people of their verses. I wasn't disappointed because I yearn to return. Thank you for this information too. I am alive this evening with all the words of Wilde running through my head.
Susan
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 6:54:31 PM
Interestin read and lesson about this famous or perhaps infamous man. Did you know he also reside for a portion of his life in my own home town of Halifax and it is said that the small Inn where he lived to this day is haunted by his spirit.
Felix (Perry not Unger)
Oscar (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 6:40:47 PM
Silver,
A wonderful tribute to Oscar Wilde. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And I love Oscar Meyer, too :)
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 2:00:30 PM
A beautiful place that beats with a Celtic Heart, as does this piece Silver...I think you may like my piece on Seamus Heaney.
Paul;-)
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 10:12:47 AM
Silver
This exquisite poem reminds me of the Forty Shades of Green !
I share your love and passion for the Emerald Isle !
Blessings
Peter
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 8:03:36 AM
Most beautiful....me heading that way in three weeks time..hope to get this far!!
Love Tinka
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 5:42:52 AM
Home is Where the Heart Truly Resides, as they say, and you say it very well here, SilverCeltic.
Tell Me Lies (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 4:41:48 AM
Yes. Thank God he is an ex. Good for you for opening your eyes.
Janet
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 4:39:38 AM
You make my heart also wish to travel to Ireland.
Janet
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 3:39:20 AM
Silver,
Beautifully imaged in illustration and verse, you bring the Emerald Isle vividly to life. I wouldn't mind visiting Ireland meself. As Karen said, our parents went right after 9/11 (after they allowed flights again) and were treated lovingly and graciously by the people. Made quite the impression on them, and on me, too. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/22/2006 2:57:09 AM
Silver,
Beautiful poetry, and I love the pic! I would love to go to the Land of the Shamrocks myself; my parents were fortunate to go right after September 11, 2001, and they said the Irish people treated them very well and that they saw more American flags than Irish! Imagine that! :) Very well done; brava! Sliante! (I think that's how it is spelled! LOL)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/21/2006 9:27:32 PM
My dream is also to visit the emerald island somtime hopefully to see the beauty that you describe so well.
Felix
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/21/2006 7:57:58 PM
You beckon to my Celtic soul, Silver. Thank you for sharing this beautiful gift. Love and peace,
Regis
My Heart Lies Over The Ocean (Poetry) - 4/21/2006 7:54:05 PM
Thank you for this sharing of knowledge of a country I find myself interested in. I will visit it. The road in this photo would tempt me into a long walk to see where it goes :-) Love all the colour in homes and flowers too! It certainly is a beautiful area.
Writer's Cramp (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 3:39:05 PM
Cute poem. I've been there, lots of times.
Janet
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 3/13/2006 3:58:30 PM
You created a perfect setting for a haunted house. All those memories watching from the windows, as you so aptly put it.
Janet Bellinger
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 3/4/2006 11:19:13 AM
I love the way you created and shared the ambiance through your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 3/4/2006 4:28:42 AM
Chrissy said it best I think. "If only walls could talk...maybe some can." I like this very much tho. It does haunt the soul, and makes one lament for the ones that built this house and other buildings, now watching from Heaven as it crumbles. A very sad epithet for such a wonderful home.
I am ½ Irish, ¼ Scot, and ¼ Welsh. So I also have Celtic roots. Thnx for sharing this wonderful story that has now made this home once again immortal.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little den sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 3/2/2006 7:05:23 AM
Ah, this haunts the soul, excellently written, just brought back a few memories,
Reindeer
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 3/1/2006 5:06:07 AM
excellent story tale ... superb imagery and atmosphere ...
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 3/1/2006 5:01:32 AM
Enjoyed this one....thanks!!
Love Tinka
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 4:58:19 PM
I like this! If only walls could talk...maybe some can.
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 4:04:32 PM
I've seen a lot of those derelect houses over the years. Oh the stories they could tell. A wonderful story poem.
Elizabeth
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 7:31:21 AM
That dilapidated and crumbling house is meant for somebody Celtic
And once ensconed in it, the circle of life will take off again, as the Lion King said in the film !
Very atmospheric write
Peter
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 6:22:05 AM
A most compelling write, so good to read!
Birgit and Roger
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 5:59:19 AM
It is so sad to see these old farmhouses abandoned by their owners and time. They have a history so rich and vast that it is such a shame to see them fall into dis repear, well said
Felix
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 5:44:54 AM
We wished to go back in time to see it in its prime.
I often feel the same when I come upon such a forlorn place on my rural wanderings.
A truly powerful piece, SilverCeltic.
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 3:54:43 AM
Silver,
Richly imaged, powerfully written; excellent!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 3:23:22 AM
Incredible in every way; super job, Silver! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/27/2006 10:48:44 PM
Silver, this is outstanding!I was there with you! superb images and mood. Such a bittersweet ending. Beautiful work!
Eileen
The Listener's Home (Poetry) - 2/27/2006 10:45:47 PM
haunting tale...very descriptive
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/24/2006 1:28:30 PM
I love fairy tales and this is one of the best I've read lately. It only goes to show what we are capable of if we relax and stop being so self-critical.
Good write, and good advice. The only thing missing was the moon shinning on her.
Bobbi
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 5:26:23 PM
Good for her!
A wonderful story poem.
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 7:38:21 AM
Sighhhhhh...this was beautiful....just shows you never say never...it's never toooooo late..even for me I hope.
Aiming for the bathroom and old Christmas gifts unopened!!
Love Tinka :))))
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 6:10:04 AM
I love it! My husband always gets nervous when I read romance novels. He'll state very firmly: 'I'm not wearing the cowboy hat nor the Scottish kilt tonight!' LIKE he has a choice....
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 5:45:39 AM
A stupendous write, Celtic!! I was captivated from beginning to end! Bravo to you!!
Peace.
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 5:27:25 AM
Wonderful tale Silver, your message carries great weight, love it.
Paul;-)
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 5:16:27 AM
You have to take the bull by the horns in this world Celtic, to get what you want, and more importantly, what you need !
I love the Bonnie Tyler songs, all of them, especially Total Eclipse of the Heart !
This is very inate wisdom, you have to create your own reality in this world !
Peter
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 4:17:13 AM
This is fantastic, origianal, interesting, a little provoctive and definately one of the best you have done in the romance field. I love it and love the message.Well done Silver.
Felix
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 3:35:03 AM
Proves that there are, indeed, heroes still out there.
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 3:18:29 AM
Sundays are one of my favorite days of the week, especially today, since I am OFF from work at Fire Mountain! AAAHHHH!!! I can RELAX (and perhaps go to breakfast!)! I may even go to church later this evening if I so choose to! (I would LIKE to!) But I have laundry to do as we need clean clothes for work! LOL DARN, no relaxing for ME part of the day! Oh, well....LOL
Well done poem, Silver; enjoyed! Thanks for sharing! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I NEED A break: started my job at Fire Mountain on Weds., worked Thurs., Friday, and yesterday; and already have 30 hours in! WHEE! :)
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 3:10:24 AM
I love the message behind this Lisa. Sundays are my days too - but I spend them indoors. Great write, Lisa!
God bless,
Sandie.
Slave to Her Desire (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 2:55:32 AM
Whoa!!! How did I ever miss this, Lisa? This is hot, hot, hot!! Love it!
God bless,
Sandie.
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 9:44:55 PM
loved the story and the way you built around it bringing it to a happy climax......almost as good as.....well you know :-) Great message :-)
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 9:08:23 PM
watch out for those postal dudes ...
superb story telling!
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 7:32:24 PM
True enough. (thank you, Sherry) In my case, it was taking a chance on someone I wouldn't have thought of before as someone I'd be interested in (could be your neighbor, a friend, a friend of a friend, that guy you talk to at the water cooler at work, the postal dude, etc)....a guy I was casual friends with.
Taking chances and doing things just for you sometimes work out wonderously. ;) Silver
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 7:21:58 PM
LOL! Yep, he has two brothers. Both of them the biggest bums and jerks you've ever seen. (Boy, could I tell you some stories!) My knight was the youngest of the three boys. Mike's father died when he was nine...and they were raised by their single parent mother...who bless her, died before I knew Mike. She did a good job with Mike and unfortunately knew that her other two were squirts.
Thank you all for reading my some what syrupy tribute to my own knight. AND....Yes, Elizabeth, we ARE blessed AND lucky babes! ;) Silver
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 7:16:37 PM
Silver, you have a wonderful story here! I love the finale, and it was a great read all the way!
Eileen
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 7:12:31 PM
And they all lived happily ever after...sigh...Amen! This is a wonderful story/poem, Silver. I enjoyed every line and I became captivated by the progressing tale. There is a lot of wisdom in your words. If we sit around waiting for adventure and happiness to find us, we will die waiting for adventure and happiness to find us. There is no entertainment committee assigned to our life, if we want excitement, we have to go out and find it or make it happen. Excellent writing! I love this!!
Take care,
Sherry
Holding Out For A Hero (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 7:08:20 PM
Silver,
Compelling reading; enjoyed the message here to not wait for love to fall into your lap; you sometimes have to go for it. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Luna (Poetry) - 2/10/2006 8:42:36 PM
I like it! Quite a different feel
to it.
Becca
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/9/2006 10:22:01 AM
So romantic and I know chilvary is not dead.
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 12:38:44 PM
I guess...what a hero. I have one too, and dearly love him.
We are lucky babes.
Enjoyed.
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 10:07:55 AM
Well Silver, aren't you blessed!;-) lol at Tinka ( does he!;-)
Great write, and loving words that should make him very pleased!
Eileen^
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 7:04:01 AM
Does he have a brother???
Beautiful compassionate offering sis!!
Love Tinka
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 6:00:44 AM
Respectful tribute. Nice to tell the geezer whilst they are alive.
Long may it be so..
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 4:34:57 AM
Sounds like you have one of the few of us left remaining lol, just kidding I doubt if my wife would describe me so vividly. I am sure he also appreciates what a true jewell he has found in your heart and love.
Felix
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 4:26:51 AM
A Fine Tribute to your Knight in Shing Armor, and I salute him as one of the Litter Box Brigade myself. But I hope my spouse doesn't read this since I haven't brought her breakfast in bed in quite awhile - I've been too busy walking the dogs and cleaning those litter boxes!
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 4:01:55 AM
You are indeed blessed by God, Celtic to have such a loving and understanding partner !
And that is a gorgeous surreal picture which sets the scene for the composition !
I am with you on the french vanilla cappaccino and blueberry muffin. !
Peter
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 2:22:57 AM
Silver,
A shining tribute to your Knight. Aren't you blessed! As we have been, reading these beautiful words. Thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/5/2006 1:12:42 AM
Beautifully written!!
Love Tinka
My Knight (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 8:55:48 PM
How wonderful it is to not only write about a Prince Charming but to have one in your life everyday. Congrats on both accounts.
Bobbi
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 8:21:50 PM
Enchantingly absorbing, Silver!
Chants and moons and futute's glee
never appropriatedly mesh into what's seen...
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tell Me Lies (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 7:26:35 PM
Terrific~!! Slyly witty and grittily determined. Man didn' have
a chance! Keep 'at glove handy. Hope you never need it, but. . .might help keep future candidates honest? 'Pea' <3
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 6:54:12 PM
A breath of enchantment hovers within the verses as a bit of mystery intrigues. There is anticipation in the "words of power, words of fear" making me long to hear the message she brings. Not everyone will be happy to learn the lessons of the mystics as they just might challenge what we believe to be true. Wonderful poem, Silver, beautiful poetry.
Take care,
Sherry
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 2:49:08 PM
Beautifully captivating Sliver, took my mind to 'grove's of Oak, Where with mistletoe we'd invoke spirits of the past. Love the pic too.
Paul;-)
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 8:37:57 AM
Love the imaginative flow. "words of power, words of fear"
immediately engages. Illustration's fab! Glad I caught this.
'Pea' <3
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 6:46:41 AM
I could hear the musical artist's 'Enya' in my ears while reading this mystical prose.
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 6:16:14 AM
an engaging sojourn into how the mystical powers offering knowledge and insight are dismissed due to fear or apathy, if what is revealed is not wanted to be heard or known ...
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 6:13:51 AM
I agree with Lady A; would make a wonderful short story.
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 5:33:21 AM
An engagng haunt, Silver. Love the way you convey the feel of this truly mystical write.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 5:30:58 AM
As an Irish Newfoundland descendent I always love the traditional but non confirmal Celtic tales you tell. Filled with the magic of the wee people they always open the magic tresure box of our imaginations. Well done Silver.
Felix
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 3:48:07 AM
a mystical anticipation.........
enchanting........
make it a story!
pax A
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 2:37:10 AM
Sweet Silver Celtic Moon~
What a stunner of a write to wake up to this morning! WOW!! Excellent, excellent write; so good to see you posting here at the Den again! (Hey! I just did a peom! LOL) Well done; brava!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 2:18:04 AM
Silver,
You are the first Poet whose words I read this morning, and you've left me in awe...enchantment; beauty; a hint of mysticism. What a way to begin the day! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 2:09:50 AM
If it's not liked oftentimes it won't be heeded..
At first i read it as her streamed behind.lol thought huh sounds neat.. Just that ole gutter mind of mine...
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 1:20:23 AM
The old adage is " Give them what they want " !
This is a breathtakingly beautiful Celtic composition, complete with archaic and stunning picture Celtic !
You have an undoubted flair for these gems
Peter
Druid Moon (Poetry) - 2/3/2006 10:50:43 PM
I logged back in when I saw this one! Fantastic thought provoking write. Seems to be the night for great insight! Thank you for this sharing.
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/3/2006 10:20:26 PM
Thank you for this sharing of legend with us. I love reading about other cultures and thier beliefs.
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/3/2006 9:58:36 PM
My Irish blood was pounding through my veins as I read your wonderful piece. You have done Both Yeats and the Irish Proud. The imagery in your piece was magnificent, and the rhythm was heart racing. Thank you so much for making this late night read so enjoyable.
Bobbi
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 11:43:05 AM
This is very enlightning and informative. What a fantastic poem of lore...
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 7:17:24 AM
Fascinating, indeed, and I especially liked your marvelous poem and narrative, SilverCeltic, since I always enjoy learning new things.
And I love that graphic.
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 4:30:40 AM
Both the origianal writing of Yeats and your own brilliant piece reflect the beauty of Irish folklore and the magic thar runs like a river throughout it. Your information is concise and to the point and explains a lot that the reader would otherwise miss in the poetry, as well the graphic is awesome to steal a term from a younger generaton and stirs the fires of imagination and passion.
WEll done Silver,
Felix
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 3:24:25 AM
What a wonderful ride! Love the magical feel to this inspiring, exquisite write, Silver.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 2:41:55 AM
Oh! I love Yeat's, and you've done him proud here Silver, this a wonderfully imaged piece of Celtic verse. I love the last stanza so powerful in expression.
Paul;-)
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 7:39:17 PM
full, vibrant imagery capturing the mood and motion of this soul catcher ...
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 6:02:19 PM
Silver this is a fascinating poem! it is also mystical and makes me tingle at the thought of its meaning.Beautifully done! Thanks for sharing all the info!
Eileen^
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 5:15:36 PM
SCM,
Sooo nice to see you here; you have been missed, gurl! Very well done; you have NOT lost your edge! BRAVA!! Beautiful but shattering write; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 5:07:21 PM
First of all I love Yeat's work Celtic !
And secondly I love your Celtic adaption of this classic piece !
Has a distinct Horsemen of the Apocalypse feel about it too !
The Celtic graphic is superb art
I loved the line " The East her hidden joy before the morning break, "
Peter
Shadowy Horses (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 4:48:24 PM
Silver,
Stirring imagery, beautifully penned...my favorite lines:
"...I hear the sound of their harnesses jingle
and see the stars spin, spark and die under their hooves. ...."
BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Luna (Poetry) - 1/31/2006 5:47:06 AM
I love any and all poetry that pertains to the moon..I love full moon..am the livliest then..and sleep like a log..
this is so lovely..
Vesna:)
Luna (Poetry) - 1/29/2006 2:19:05 PM
love the atmosphere that you have built within this write.
Nuggets of Wisdom (Poetry) - 1/29/2006 11:10:06 AM
Thank you for sharing this gift of wisdom. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Luna (Poetry) - 1/25/2006 3:17:18 PM
lovely write in its simplicity and serenity.
as always, you deliver so much in your poetry.
hugs and blessings
krissy
Luna (Poetry) - 1/23/2006 11:47:30 AM
What would we do with a great m0on write
and great m0on pictures?
Always a pleasure to read the finest...
Luna (Poetry) - 1/23/2006 4:42:34 AM
serene and mystic, beautiful!
Luna (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 11:52:20 AM
As always when you write on the moon the results are dreamlike and special to behold.
Felix
Luna (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 7:40:46 AM
I love full moons,though you're not supposed to plant certain things during a full moon. Great tribute and painting.
Luna (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 7:09:12 AM
I love moon writes, and this is a good one, as is the painting.
Luna (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 4:33:57 AM
Lovely offering!!
Love Tinka
Luna (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 10:35:25 PM
Hello, my friend. I really enjoyed this poem about the moon. We seem to be on the same wave lenght today.
Bobbi
Luna (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 7:26:26 PM
your creative skill never disappoints ...
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 4:10:33 PM
Mournful and sad write but one we all feel now and then throughout our lifes, but there is hope and there is someone for everyone and when the morning comes when the poem ends about looking at the face sleeping beside you then you will be glad you waited.
Felix
Pretty girl in the picture as well, is it you?
Luna (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 3:55:16 PM
By th Light of the Magical Moon !
You convey a serene and tranquil mood in this delightful composition Silver, that completely relaxes and eases the reader !
The compelling picture is both spiritual and evocative !
Peter
Nowhere Man (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 3:33:56 PM
A sad and bitter relection of life in our so called modern society, where the downtrodden are treated like lumps of rubbish
Thanks for highlighting this appalling anathema in our greedy and material world Silver !
Peter
Luna (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 3:24:12 PM
Superb imagery and so calming...excellent!
Paul;-)
Luna (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 3:15:05 PM
This is avery creative poem ,and I love the art too!
Great combo!
Eileen
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 3:06:12 PM
Very sad but well written!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 2:15:03 PM
A sad and compelling commentary on the state of our society today. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Luna (Poetry) - 1/21/2006 2:13:30 PM
I find the moon magical and I find your poem completely captivating. Thank you for sharing this gift, SilverCeltic Moon. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 5:49:49 PM
How wonderful to read your work again. This unfortunately can apply to so many women. It is heartbraking, and poingnet. Would that I could heal all those hearts and make them see that love of self is the most important love we can find.
Thank you for all of us.
Bobbi
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 3:47:18 PM
~~SCM~replace the she with a he and it's me~wonderful poem~
~~martin~~
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 5:34:07 AM
Well penned, so many of us can relate to this!
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 5:32:20 AM
A truly sad piece, which sadly can apply to both women and men today.
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 2:37:33 AM
Silver,
It's so important to get and have meaning in ones life. Your imagery is always so in tune with reality. Sad but beautiful write, my friend.
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 1:48:00 AM
You expound the reality of modern day living sadly !
There are few good men and women left in this material world anymore
All values and perspectives of decency, honesty and trust have been terminally eroded, leaving a vacuum of hpolessness and despair for our children
Peter
Waiting (Poetry) - 1/19/2006 10:38:56 PM
Celtic, this is an exceptional capture of the reality so many women and men too, face today. I know at least five young men mid twenties of friends and family, that have no girl and no prospect of one.The same on the female side, and they all say the same thing, theres no one that wants anything but sex anymore, and they can have that with anyone. It's so sad, I pray it changes for the youth in this generation, and soon. Thanks for sharing.....Eileen
