I can not see your face (Poetry) - 3/30/2011 10:44:06 PM
Ami jantam na apni Doctor er sathe sathe ekjan KOBI o.
I Can not See Your Face Pare Valo laglo.
Regards.
Goutam
Silence (Poetry) - 12/29/2007 5:17:29 PM
I like the touch of quantum physics that you add here. Thoughts are dreams and particles, indeed... I see what you are saying and agree. The last line is a great ending that sounds simple, powerful, and leaves much to the imagination. Long live the marriage of physics and poetry! Best wishes
- Brandon
Good wish (Poetry) - 12/29/2007 5:10:01 PM
It it is cryptic, but not to the point where it makes my head hurt. It is pleasant and makes me think. I especially like the 7th and 8th lines... those stand out the most to me. I like the reference to "listening help"... simple yet well-worded; I understand what it means but it also makes me curious. The very last stanza is very thought-provoking as well. Thanks for sharing.
Morbid love (Poetry) - 12/16/2007 2:31:14 PM
Very unique comparison indeed, but somehow the spirit continues on through eternity...
Be safe,
Karen
Dedication (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 11:54:12 PM
Shared thoughts to ponder over, nicely done...
Be safe,
Karen
Dedication (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 9:29:15 PM
A thought-provoking piece!
Sandie May :o)
Silence (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 8:37:36 PM
Oh this one has my brain hurting lol
just kidding
it made me think, and thats a good thing
took me on a bit of a loop........and now
I am silent :)
pax A
SANCTITY (Poetry) - 12/11/2007 5:39:02 PM
Peaceful and serenely written....
Be safe,
Karen
Good wish (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 5:34:35 AM
A lot of cryptic verses whitn this interesting penned literary poetry . . . Questions asked . . . Questions unanswered . . .
Tachyonic existence (Poetry) - 12/6/2007 8:32:31 AM
Like the premise of the poem . . . That everything is as it should be . . . But not quite . . . Like, maybe there is something the same but better . . . Somewhere . . .
