Night was my dream (Poetry) - 7/26/2008 5:12:34 AM
Türkçesini nereden okuyabilirim?
Axilea
Night was my dream (Poetry) - 5/28/2008 6:28:39 AM
Intense in powerful emotion. I get the sense that this poem was metered. I should have loved to have read this in your native tongue. --Charlie
The Dove in the Balcony (Poetry) - 5/28/2008 6:25:18 AM
Really Derya, you have some brillian ideas in this. I wish I could read Turkish, so I could get the intensity of imagery that I know this has. Here's what I love: Washing time, and hanging it out to dry... that it doesn't shrink or get tangled. And I also love your line: "cries of the human doves Uttered in the balconies of the underground"... and the idea that a balcony can also be frightened, and can runaway with its boarders. Amazing talent! Welcome to AD... just sorry I didn't "discover" you sooner. --Charlie
Mon Coeur est pour la pluie (Poetry) - 5/28/2008 2:24:55 AM
"et puis qu'est-ce que deux s'il ne se divise pas en deux"
Breathtakingly beautiful poetry! An exploration of sadness that lingers.
Axilea
Denial (Poetry) - 5/23/2008 2:46:43 AM
A whirling extended metaphor, rich with sensitivity.
Welcome.
Axilea
