Kingdoms All part 16:Only fools Rush In (Short Story) - 11/22/2014 5:59:15 AM
I hope Lucy will be O.K.. I guess I'll just need to wait to find out.
Love ya!
Jane
Down Below (Short Story) - 11/22/2014 1:19:31 AM
Scary!!
Love ya!
Jane
Kingdoms All part 14:A Haunting Tale (Short Story) - 11/21/2014 8:39:59 AM
Oh, my goodness! You've got a great story going on here! I will wait for the next segment.
Love ya!
Jane
Kingdoms All part 3:Queens and Maids all in a Row (Short Story) - 11/14/2014 1:27:00 AM
Richard, this story is getting interesting in every part you publish. When can I expect the 4th part? Cant wait!
Cannibal Soup (Short Story) - 8/18/2014 11:07:22 AM
Interesting, I would love to read what happens next.
Depth Charges part l (Short Story) - 8/11/2014 6:42:45 PM
This all narrative intrusion that reads like a school report: "What I Did Last Summer" kind of stuff. It could equally be a story treatment or pitch. The problem is there's no illusion of reality to sink into because there's no P.O.V writing. Point Of View writing kicks in when we are inside the head of a character, touching those thoughts, using their senses to understand. To make this a real story, we need to have a mental image of the main character, the setting: what does the inside of the sub actually look like? What are the smells, the sounds? P.O.V. writing is about "showing" a story, not "telling" about it. This reads more like a data dump, or the back-story research a writer does before writing. I think this might be a good story once the reader is given a character to become intimately bonded to. I look forward to seeing what might become of this.
Who we our (Poetry) - 2/27/2016 10:40:44 AM
I really think you should use "are" instead of "our" in the title and also in the body of your poem.
All of Us (Poetry) - 2/6/2016 3:39:08 PM
Let us hope he/she keeps hands off of all of the buttons....
Thanks,
Chris
Star Trek Classic-Passing into Eternity (Poetry) - 2/4/2016 8:58:26 AM
Man I love this, I still have all original 79 episodes I recorded on VHS tape in the 70's, they still play, ( if i can remember where i stored the vhs player)
Loved "Yesterday IS Tomorrow" and the one also where they all grew old even with the sorry low makeup budget to work with back then. I know every scene by heart you mentioned each one in.
Ole cap'n still kicking though.
Dan
Taking Care (Poetry) - 2/4/2016 8:52:42 AM
Richard, I guess if worse comes to worse I figure I can be an extra for the Walking Dead tv show, maybe get paid for that hard earnded look at least, ha.
Dan
Taking Care (Poetry) - 2/4/2016 8:35:00 AM
Great advice. I should've taken it early and my teeth would've been better. Fortunately, I've only lost two. But have a lot of metal filling all the holes.
Ron
Who I am (Poetry) - 12/14/2015 5:35:07 PM
We must always love and remember our beloved parents
I'm a grandfather and still think of my loving parents
Peace be with you
Merry Christmas
William
Two step on Solid Ground (Poetry) - 12/14/2015 5:23:16 PM
I too like my 2 feet on the ground hate nights makes me feel not right
Peace be with you........... Merry Christmas
William
Amazing You (Poetry) - 12/14/2015 5:15:00 PM
An awesome write Richard, looking forward to seeing more of your posting
Peace be with you
Merry Christmas
William
Star Trek Classic-Passing into Eternity (Poetry) - 10/25/2015 8:51:36 AM
I was fortunate to meet Nichelle Nichols, who was the first African-American woman to play a ... Lieutenant Uhura, at a 100 Year Starship meeting a couple of years ago. With each passing year that famous cast is disappearing… But their timeless stories will carry on.
Ron
Two step on Solid Ground (Poetry) - 8/18/2015 6:38:45 AM
When we lose our willingness to explore and settle for keeping our feet on the ground, those problems you mention will become worse. It is only through imagination and vision like Galileo who turned the Catholic Church upside down by declaring that the Earth was not the center of the universe and Arthur C Clarke who proposed the space elevator and stationary satellites that we now depend upon for so much communication and life-saving like never before. Those stationary satellites allow us to reveal the very problems you wrote about and solve them more quickly.
A space elevator would do away with rockets (not jet airplanes) that cost a tremendous amount to lift a pound to orbit (not to the moon).
Ron
Two step on Solid Ground (Poetry) - 8/18/2015 4:06:25 AM
Solidly written. I'm with you. Get out the lawn chairs and we can look up instead of looking around.
Thanks
Chris
Never stop Lovig (Poetry) - 7/18/2015 4:51:01 PM
Richard,
It would be wonderful if family could live together in harmony. At some point children must leave and make their own life. I remember very fondly my growing up years. I am the oldest of eight and we all played and fought but we loved each other and we all knew it.
Love and blessings,
Linda
Never stop Lovig (Poetry) - 7/14/2015 3:13:05 PM
I wouldn't call it a poem either, Connie . . .
Never stop Lovig (Poetry) - 7/14/2015 12:57:36 PM
I wouldn't call this a poem, Richard, but it's an interesting point of view, a little old-fashioned, but to me, that's a good thing to be!
Connie
Who I am (Poetry) - 5/28/2015 11:05:43 AM
Unconditional love regardless of the circumstances.
Ron
Ouch,never a dull needle (Poetry) - 5/17/2015 10:20:33 AM
Poor dear, feel better soon!
Christine
Ouch,never a dull needle (Poetry) - 5/16/2015 9:17:26 AM
I'll remember that and try to stay out of hospitals! ;-)
Ron
Ouch,never a dull needle (Poetry) - 5/16/2015 5:49:47 AM
Indeed... hope your feeling better soon...Hugs
Stop the Violence (Poetry) - 5/1/2015 9:53:53 PM
There is really no violence. It's just a bunch of losers what lie, cheat and steal from the hood whenever they can find an excuse to get way with it. The silent majority are good citizens of all colors. Sadly good folks don't make the news. The morons are in the MEDIA! Amen!
Stop the Violence (Poetry) - 4/30/2015 10:46:52 AM
As Gandhi, Martin Luther King, and Nelson Mandela knew, violence never got us anywhere. While there is great frustration for some, we need to educate ourselves on nonviolent ways to resolve our problems. Strong police forces, mighty armies, and arming ourselves, is not the solution.
Ron
Goodbye Farewell and Prosper Us All (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 8:01:31 AM
We must remember that Mr. Spock was a character written into a TV series and then later written into movies. While the writers and Nimoy's fine acting made the character seem real, he was not. People seem to be drawn by these fictional characters because they are shaped to be less complex as our fellow humans. Therefore we can identify with them and often do. Hence, your poem to Nimoy as is character more so than himself.
Ron
Goodbye Farewell and Prosper Us All (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 7:36:19 AM
First we lost Gene, then Bones and Scotty. Now Spock has joined them too. May they all be safe in their journey to the stars.
Michael D.
Internet Take Over (Poetry) - 1/19/2015 7:45:01 AM
An interesting perspective. It's easy to become addictive to certain technologies that are so easy to use like a cell phone and computer. I do not have the choice to leave the house every day, or I certainly would. I have found that being alone and not interacting with others can be a very good thing for ideation and creativity. For example, you are extremely creative, probably because of your isolation. If you were highly social, your creativity would be very much less than it is.
All these technologies that we are so taken up by are here to stay with more to come. We can use them for learning or trivial social interaction. It is our choice. We can go out and breathe the fresh air and enjoy nature without the benefit of these devices at all. It's great to have choice. It's freedom, not oppression. It depends upon how you look at.
Ron
Internet Take Over (Poetry) - 1/18/2015 5:25:58 PM
Just figuring that out , are ya...? I well know the feeling as I go out for a walk or bike ride anymore so rarely on top of the fact that is freaking cold out...LOL, -e-
Stop (Poetry) - 1/16/2015 7:40:56 AM
Bullying and child abuse are wrong and should be stopped as soon as possible. Your inner spirit is the best protector against abuse. It certainly doesn't hurt to be a "mean son of a bitch," when confronted by an abuser.
Ron
Inspire Me Dear Paris (Poetry) - 1/14/2015 8:58:23 AM
Men and women of good will are all Parisians now.
Inspire Me Dear Paris (Poetry) - 1/12/2015 8:53:12 AM
We must never give up and never give in. That's what I get from this poem about your concern for Paris after the terrible terrorist attacks.
Ron
Never Give In (Poetry) - 1/10/2015 9:27:03 PM
Excellent advice Richard. Well done indeed!
Never Give In (Poetry) - 1/10/2015 1:16:15 PM
Ed already said that famous line. But you keep keeping on, because that's what it's all about. You are leaving a huge body of work, that when edited, will make its mark someday.
Ron
Never Give In (Poetry) - 1/10/2015 9:12:52 AM
I'm with you, Richard. And never let 'em see you sweat! I like your grit.
Jesus vs Santa (Poetry) - 12/20/2014 5:32:29 PM
Well, Santa does not even come close. It's Jesus by a landslide and no one can even hold a candle to his abiding Love. Amen
Merry Christmas!
Never any Silver Bells Here (Poetry) - 12/20/2014 3:47:54 AM
Timely write and all so true. The meaning of Christmas is in the word CHRIST-mas itself. Amen!
The Perfect Gift (Poetry) - 12/19/2014 11:18:31 AM
A poem with a good message built-in. Something that everyone should think about at Christmas time.
Ron
You (Poetry) - 11/23/2014 2:14:59 PM
where's the poem?
You (Poetry) - 11/19/2014 10:29:18 AM
A poem with a message. We shouldn't blame others for our own misbehavior.
Ron
You (Poetry) - 11/19/2014 12:29:54 AM
Very insightful words of wisdom. Thank you.
Love ya!
Jane
O Holy Day (Poetry) - 11/11/2014 10:37:11 AM
Yes, the word holiday comes from religious holy days. Without them, we wouldn't have any time off because even weekends have only one only day. I believe it was labor unions that finally forced the creation of Saturday so that working people could at least have a weekend and Sunday could be taken over by football. ;-)
Ron
Turkeys -Gobble me This (Poetry) - 11/3/2014 12:11:28 PM
I think this one is better suited for Halloween than Thanksgiving!
Ron
The Cauldron (Poetry) - 10/31/2014 7:46:07 AM
I will remember what you wrote and make sure that I push any witch I see into her pot so that she can stew with the rest.
Ron
Ho Ho Hum (Poetry) - 10/2/2014 9:23:37 AM
Enjoyed the offhand humor. Santa is overrated. Time for a change.
Ron
Life Accordingly (Poetry) - 9/28/2014 4:09:02 AM
Wonderful message.
Kathy J Parenteau
Life Accordingly (Poetry) - 9/27/2014 12:05:21 PM
I like the message you are conveying with this poem… Life is precious and doesn't last forever, so we should pursue life as much as we can, while we can.
Ron
Me (Poetry) - 8/10/2014 11:09:07 AM
thought provoking read
Me (Poetry) - 7/16/2014 7:45:57 AM
I agree. We all have to be you we are and do our best.
Ron
Me (Poetry) - 7/15/2014 2:08:18 PM
Yes, we are all unique individuals and we should treasure ourselves and be proud. Good write!
Sandie
Stronger (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 9:02:04 AM
You have to still believe in your country, go to wars to fight for the greater goods...
Sandie
Stronger (Poetry) - 6/28/2014 11:16:26 PM
The ideas and beliefs in this poem are stronger than Superman. They were the fiber of our country and some of us still believe in them. We are few.
God bless you, God Bless America!
John Michael
Poke in the Eye (Poetry) - 3/26/2014 10:41:31 AM
I like Curly, Larry, and Moe; but don't like Shemp. Heeeheee!!!
Sandie :o)
Its a Given (Poetry) - 3/26/2014 3:59:19 AM
So true! We should always try to better ourselves and be kind to others.
Sandie
Alone (Poetry) - 3/25/2014 2:48:26 PM
Thank you for sharing. This is a sad but beautiful poem.
God Bless
Kathy
Alone (Poetry) - 3/25/2014 8:01:50 AM
Some find being alone quite pleasant.
Ron
Alone (Poetry) - 3/25/2014 5:00:01 AM
This is a very heartfelt poem.
The definition of "alone" is that: Many are left alone, but are never feeling lonely; and yet, one can be in the company of many, and would still be feeling alone.
Your children will be your children all of your life, they will not forget you. They may move out, but they will come back to visit you. I know the feeling well. When they begin to move out on their own you always feel like you're being left behind, but the joy is when you see them coming back to visit you. Always a joy!!!
Sandie
Alone (Poetry) - 3/25/2014 2:15:05 AM
It must have took an act of courage and brave mixed emotions to write this poem. I lost one wife to cancer and I sometimes get upset when she comes home late from work because I fear for being left alone again. She brightens the day is like a beam of light. Yes, this guy does not want to be left in the dark ever again. Amen!
Drugbuster (Poetry) - 3/19/2014 8:08:37 AM
People tend to look for a magic pill that will do what they can do by their own behavior. I take only what is necessary to keep me alive, and no more. But so many fall into the trap of thinking that all their pain and misery can be solved by a pill… Only to find out that it is the pills that is causing more pain and suffering.
Ron
Drugbuster (Poetry) - 3/19/2014 6:44:35 AM
Even Christ drank wine, just another drug. At one time dinosaurs were the dominant creatures. Right now it's us, but it's a precarious position. Man could disappear in a heartbeat, and then who knows? It could be the cockroaches that take over the world.
Michael D.
Drugbuster (Poetry) - 3/19/2014 3:58:07 AM
Although I don't take any drugs, but I would never say I won't, for when one gets physically sick, like having cancer or other diseases, drugs and pills are what makes them feel better. One can never say to others that one doesn't or won't take any drugs or pills.
Sandie
Death is Sad Indeed (Poetry) - 3/13/2014 2:32:04 PM
you idolize fictitious people in life, so it's no incongruity you mourn the same way in death ...
Death is Sad Indeed (Poetry) - 3/13/2014 1:39:56 PM
3-13-2014:
Until You Do Die You Will
Never Know What Awaits
Your Sorry Ass-Pray to
Whoever Your God It Is
Only Sad Indeed...
TRASK...
Death is Sad Indeed (Poetry) - 3/13/2014 1:16:45 PM
You are probably one who feels for others. Some of us has deeper empathy than others, and we can feel other people's sorrows in us.
Sandie
Where did Everyone go ? (Poetry) - 3/12/2014 5:42:33 AM
It'svlike an episode of the Twilight Zone where an aircraft disappeared from radar and was taken back in time to the past. This is really a mystery.
Sandie
Where did Everyone go ? (Poetry) - 3/11/2014 8:11:54 PM
A nice simple life would be nice. What am doing on this computer? Am I possessed? Wow! Think of 25 years ago before computers and cell phones. Were we better off? I believe we were. Nice thoughts Richard!
MASH -A Tribute (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 7:02:55 AM
Not only was he not used right, I don't remember Ferret Face at all. Major Franklin Burns.
Ron
Fourth of July (Poetry) - 7/4/2013 12:22:18 AM
VERY Good poetic write for the 4th!
Peace, God's agape love, abundant blessings,
John Michael
Fourth of July (Poetry) - 6/30/2013 10:02:39 AM
Thanks for the warning. I'll remember not to use fireworks as a suppository. ;-)
Ron
Fourth of July (Poetry) - 6/29/2013 9:53:10 PM
I enjoyed reading your nice 4th of July poem, I agree it is the time
to have fun with family and friends, enjoy but be careful with
the fireworks. Have A Great Day! And May you and your family
Have A Happy 4th Of July. Celebrate!
Win one for Mom,Apple Pie and Me (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 9:13:51 AM
I think your wait may be a lot longer than you could ever even fantasize...but your wait for death maybe shorter too...e
Daddy Come Home (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 9:09:16 AM
With four wars as a backdrop, this sort of thing happens all too often.
Ron
To You (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 12:25:33 PM
That's right, she begot me.
Ron
Grandpa Where are Your Teeth ? (Poetry) - 5/7/2013 8:38:30 AM
I'm not sure about whose teeth ended up in Africa, grandpa's or grannie's. Either way, this is hilariuuuus! Great fun.
Grandpa Where are Your Teeth ? (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 4:46:24 AM
Grandpa, this is quite an amusing write.
I hope you saved that dime.
There are good things and bad things about getting old. It's time to start saving all your dimes and get some new teeth1
Connie
Being Old (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 5:20:48 PM
Ain't it the truth.
G
Hallelujah (Poetry) - 4/30/2013 10:08:13 AM
We all need someone to pick us up when we are down. I'm so glad you had someone to do that for you.
Ron
Hallelujah (Poetry) - 4/29/2013 1:20:14 PM
Great uplifting poetry for those who have had their live changed for the best.
G
A Tear (Poetry) - 4/5/2013 4:46:08 PM
Richard,
Aplause, Aplause, for this write. Your compassion shows for all the sick people in the world. I write alot of abuse poetry and for the homeless and forlorn, but THIS is wonderful. A very caring heart you have and I also wish a cure for cancer, for child abuse and homelessness. I cry a tear with you my friend.
Blessings,
+Linda
Fingers Crossed (Poetry) - 3/30/2013 5:51:19 AM
Richard,
Very creative poem, Richard. I'm glad I don't have a nail biting problem.
Blessings,
+Linda
Fingers Crossed (Poetry) - 3/25/2013 3:13:32 PM
A wise poem for all nail biters.
Georgew
Changes or Bust (Poetry) - 12/22/2012 10:17:53 AM
change is the only constant in life
budd
No Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 8:45:37 AM
Now, that is sad.
Ron
Remembering When (Poetry) - 11/27/2012 10:07:59 AM
As we age, we tend to forget the bad and romanticize the good in our past. I wasn't particularly fond of any of those shows, preferring Ed Sullivan, Laugh In, Twilight Zone, and Saturday Night Live, Mike Douglas over sitcoms and hero dramas.
Just listened to some old radio shows. Those actors put a lot of character in those voices and made our imaginations carry the rest, like reading a good book. The quality of those stories is phenomenal considering what they had for technology.
Ron
Sometimes (Poetry) - 11/26/2012 8:42:42 AM
I'll take a gin martini any day. It is sad how the holidays have become so commercial and so expected that many lonely people out there contemplate suicide.
Ron
Not just on Christmas Day (Poetry) - 11/23/2012 2:55:50 PM
Santa has forgotten where I live but I know he is still there and watching for ya gotta believe no matter what...hope u have a happy bully free Christmas, Richard...e
Other Thanksgiving Offerings (Poetry) - 11/22/2012 9:06:07 AM
Turkey is basically dinosaur, and it tastes like chicken. In spite of all the antibiotics, steroids, and genetically enhanced corn they are stuffed with, turkey meat is probably the most nutritious and healthful meat out there. That's why I'm eating four turkeys this year. I will save money, not get fat, and stay healthy for the rest of my life.
It doesn't get any better than that. I don't care if you are worried. I'll just cut your head off and eat you. Actually, just thaw you out and cook you. So you won't have to worry anymore. Yum Yum.
Ron
Other Thanksgiving Offerings (Poetry) - 11/21/2012 2:27:25 PM
Just imagine if the indians gave our ancestors a donkey for dinner; then we all would be getting a "piece" of ass for dinner on Thanksgiving...have a good one...e
Survive (Poetry) - 11/5/2012 8:30:26 AM
Survival today is largely tied up in income. While Sandy can take our things, as long as we are not injured and still have work that pays money, we can easily start over and survive––even if it means in another place.
However, if we have no money, and/or the work. We fall into what is called the, “safety net,” Of charity and welfare. That is no survival at all.
Recovery will take a lot of effort and I hope that we do not build back the same structures to be destroyed again in future storms like we do on the Gulf Coast.
Ron
A Tear (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 10:36:14 AM
a belweather warning of the insanity of man were the only cure i feel will be our end . but we still have hope and deep within tis piece of yours is that hope bring it up into the light i know you can.
Boo ! Did I Scare Ya (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 12:26:13 PM
Richard,
Yes, you scared me, I hate spiders! Well written.
Mary
The End is Always Near (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 8:58:35 PM
What if things do go wrong observational poetry is fine but is your thought of hope or what will be will be like the subject and your take on it
Gummy (Poetry) - 10/22/2009 8:46:33 AM
This is very cute. I like it.
Moving Day (Poetry) - 10/5/2009 1:18:50 PM
Richard,
Moving is always very hard, and I'm sure your memories are many. But as you know, the only thing to do is make new ones. Fantastic write, expressed so well.
Mary
Believe in Whatever you Feel (Poetry) - 9/29/2009 7:18:44 PM
Yeti nother reason to believe in whatever you feel, Richard...good play on words. The mysterious is easier to believe in than the obvious - man is the destroyer while the Abominable Snowman is feared...go figure...be well, Richard.
Warmly,
Sage
Alone (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 7:44:55 PM
There is a difference between being alone and being lonely, but alone reflects of being left behind yet your words ascribe to holding on for future hope filled with desires...
Be always safe,
Karen
Gummy (Poetry) - 9/18/2009 10:16:29 PM
A VERY GOOD WRITE...FILLED WITH LAUGHTER AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Be Yourself (Poetry) - 9/17/2009 12:49:58 PM
Ditto..always be yourself sweet man..great writing...stay safe and well..Hugss
Well Being and Love (Poetry) - 9/14/2009 2:32:31 AM
Stay strong Richard.Thank you for sharing this poem.take care
EDWIN
Well Being and Love (Poetry) - 9/13/2009 2:52:32 PM
REMEMBER TO TAKE ONE DAY AT A TIME...GOD IS WITH YOU. THIS IS A GOOD WRITE THAT GIVES WISE ADVICE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Believing (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 12:28:29 AM
KNOWING YOU ARE NOT THERE AND ADMITTING IT...BUT STILL PRESSING ON. THIS MEANS YOU'VE HALF WAY THERE...YOU MAKE ONE STEP AND GOD WILL MAKE TWO. THIS IS AN EXCELLENT WRITE, THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Never Forgetting You (Poetry) - 9/9/2009 3:27:25 PM
Awwww, so deeply endearing...
Be always safe,
Karen
Never Forgetting You (Poetry) - 9/9/2009 1:11:38 PM
It sounds like you have a difficult challenge ahead. I wish you well,your words sound like your love is strong and true......
The Day that Changed us All Forever (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 12:47:28 PM
STRONG STATEMENT OF TRUTH WITH WORDS WELL PHRASED AND PAINTING A CLEAR PICTURE OF YOUR STAND. DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Backward Talking-single story (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 11:00:56 PM
pretty good item' naw i soy it mus be well dun my laddie diddnee?
keep wring.
Being who we were Meant to Be (Poetry) - 9/1/2009 5:58:37 AM
Darn good honest write. I place no meanings or explanations.
It just is a ..darn good honest write!
Missing You (Poetry) - 8/26/2009 6:28:38 PM
I see no need to be sorry. I wish I could see my mother again... and the twitter and facebook line made me laugh. Nice write.
Remembering When (Poetry) - 8/23/2009 4:16:04 AM
Love the poem! There is a Stooges movie in the works but nothing can compare to the original trio.
Where did they All Go too ? (Poetry) - 8/22/2009 12:15:36 AM
'NICKELODEON' (NICK AT NIGHT) IS THE ONLY WAY TO QUENCH YOUR THIRST FOR...WHAT ONCE WAS...TV COMEDY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Where did they All Go too ? (Poetry) - 8/21/2009 6:34:15 PM
Richard,
I also wonder why the 'good' shows were taken off the air. Some of the shows today aren't good at all. I wish they would bring back some of those old reruns we used to enjoy and laugh at.
Blessings & Peace,
~Linda
Where did they All Go too ? (Poetry) - 8/21/2009 4:56:54 PM
Hi Richard
I also wonder where the simple, fun shows went. Maybe they exited with the simple, fun days we used to live. Cheers! Liz
Where did they All Go too ? (Poetry) - 8/21/2009 12:22:47 PM
Richard,
Does make you wonder what happened to those old characters. I remember when TV was black and white, three channels (no remote), and rabbit ears with tin foil. This brought back memories.
Differences ll-A Long Time Coming (Poetry) - 8/20/2009 6:42:22 AM
Richard, a most powerful line..."if God knew what was going on he would cry."
Cheers,
Dan
Waste Not (Poetry) - 8/18/2009 4:33:53 PM
You are so right as all life is to be valued...
Be always safe,
Karen
Just Say It (Poetry) - 8/18/2009 1:33:37 PM
Beautiful, endearing thought for your mom. Sometimes life and time slips by faster that we care to realize...
Be always safe,
Karen
Just Say It (Poetry) - 8/17/2009 1:50:32 PM
Richard,
I've always said the same thing, all those fortunate sons and daughters who still have their Mom, TELL her I love you every day..spend quality time with her, don't let with her last breath find you reqretting things you didn't do. Thank you Richard, for reminding all your readers whats really important in life.
Many blessings,
~Linda
Survival (Poetry) - 8/16/2009 3:42:09 AM
Richard,
Humans do need to use their instincts for survival just like the animals do. You are right on with this one.
Blessings & Peace,
~Linda
Being who we were Meant to Be (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 10:20:50 PM
What an interpretation you present and yes we are all human, but so many refuse to see or understand that. One thing to remember is to know who you are in your heart and soul and stand tall no matter what...
Be always safe,
Karen
A Tree not Just For Climbing any More (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 6:39:09 PM
Richard,
You are right, we take things way to much for granted in this day and time. Yes, a tree is magestic, and beautiful. It should NEVER be taken for granted.
Blessings and hugggggs,
~Linda
Leave Space Alone (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 6:35:42 PM
Richard,
There is alot of wisdom in this poem. I've always thought this but could never put it into words as you did. There are children starving here on earth, people wandering the streets homeless, with all the money they are spending on sending people up in space, use it here on earth to help someone. I've always thought those millions of dollars to build all those space rockets could be put to better use. Thank you Richard, for putting into words what I've been thinking for years.
Blessings and Huggggs,
~Linda
Being who we were Meant to Be (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 6:31:42 PM
Richard,
YES, we are all human. Unfortunately, humans get hurt. When you are hurting from the heart no bandaid can help, I'll just say hold on, hold your head high, the sun will shine again one day. God be with you.
Blessings and hugggs,
~Linda
C'mon Now (Poetry) - 8/14/2009 4:56:28 PM
Richard,
Loved this, Richard. It seems we have grown up children in the White House. You put it into words like I never could! You are an amazing poet.
Blessings & Peace,
~Linda
C'mon Now (Poetry) - 8/14/2009 7:45:16 AM
INTERESTING AND UNIQUE APPROACH TO PRESENT DAY COMPLAINTS...DONE WELL
THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
C'mon Now (Poetry) - 8/14/2009 7:05:42 AM
Richard,
Very interesting last verse about children running the White House. Well, could they do worse? Loved this.
Mary
Differences ll-A Long Time Coming (Poetry) - 8/13/2009 5:44:20 PM
Richard,
AMEN to this write. NO it shouldn't matter if a person is black, white, in a wheelchair, bedridden, walks with a cane, I see RED when I see the handicapped shunned, or see a disabled person or Vet looked on as 'different'. Thank God in Heaven we will be equal. Outstanding write, Richard. A keeper!
Blessings and Peace,
~Linda
The Spirit from Within (Poetry) - 8/13/2009 5:39:18 PM
Richard,
The earth is being destroyed in the name of progress. Its heartbreaking. I've been wanting to write about this, thank you for doing a much better job than I could.
Blessings and Peace,
~Linda
Instinct (Poetry) - 8/13/2009 5:36:22 PM
Richard,
Because I have also lost MY OWN Mother, I UNDERSTAND. I KNOW how you feel. Losing a parent is something we never get over, God be with you , Richard.
Blessings and Peace,
~Linda
The Spirit from Within (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 8:25:38 PM
I think mankind has forgotten about moderation and common sense, nice writing...
Be always safe,
Karen
Differences ll-A Long Time Coming (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 2:41:40 PM
GOD KNOWS ALL THINGS. SO ONE WONDERS, KNOWING ALL THINGS, WHY DID HE PURPOSELY MAKE US DIFFERENT. WHY AREN'T ALL THE FLOWERS IN THE WORLD ONE COLOR...WHY THE VAST ARRAY OF VIBRANT, LUSHIOUS COLORS THAT BEAUTIFY THE EARTH? COULD IT BE THAT WE, CREATED IN HIS IMAGAGE, WERE CREATED TO DO THE SAME THING?...TO BEAUTIFY THE EARTH AND BE LIVING EXAMPLES OF HIS WONDROUS LOVE FOR ALL MAN KIND? SO WHY ISN'T IT SO?...YOU ASK. WELL...WE'D HAVE TO GO ALL THE WAY BACK TO THE GARDEN OF EDEN TO UNDERSTAND THAT GOD'S 'PERFECT PLAN' WAS CHANGED BECAUSE OF DISOBEDIENCE. SO HOW DO WE FIX IT? THE BIBLE TELLS US THAT 'GOD IS LOVE'....THEN ONLY HIS LOVE, LIVING INSIDE OF US, CAN FIX IT AND IT HAS TO START WITH EACH INDIVIDUAL. DESPITE THE OBSTACLES, DESPITE THE SNUBS, DESPITE THE OBVIOUS PREJUDICES, EACH PERSON WHO HAS LEARNED THAT WE ARE ALL CHILDREN OF ONE GOD, MUST TAKE THAT REVELATION...THAT LOVE...AND SPREAD IT...BEGINNING AT HOME AND THEN ABROAD. THIS WORKS BELIEVE ME...I AM NOT SOON TO BE 65 AND A PERFECT EXAMPLE OF GOD'S LOVE REACHED OUT TO BE AT THE AGE OF 4 AND I HAVE NEVER FORGOTTEN IT. I KNOW THAT THERE IS LOVE IN THE WORLD THAT IS BLIND TO THE COLOR OF A PERSON'S SKIN AND I KNOW THAT THIS LOVE EXISTS BECAUSE OF A SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS. PLEASE SEE ONE OF HIS INSPIRATIONS ENTITLED 'THE BUS RIDE'. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS WORK THAT SUPPORTS YOUR THEME WELL. GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
One Day I'll be there Too (Poetry) - 8/11/2009 11:52:19 AM
THAT'S WHAT OUR LIVING IS ALL ABOUT RICHARD...OUR DESTINATION IS THAT 'CITY' NOT MADE BY HANDS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
One Day I'll be there Too (Poetry) - 8/11/2009 3:59:32 AM
Richard,
YES, there is a Heaven and one day we will see all its glory. What is Heaven like? It is undescribible, Richard. Our minds could not comprehend its beauty. I hope one day I'll see YOU there!
Blessings and Peace,
~Linda
Life is To Important to Forget (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 10:34:10 AM
Richard,
Your poem should be on every bulletin board in America. We should NEVER forget, especially the precious children who lose their lives far to soon. Keep writing, Richard.
Peace and blessings,
~Linda
Luck is only what You make It (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 4:09:39 AM
DITTO..indeed great writing as always dear friend..sometimes my luck suxs as well your not alone believe me...stay safe and well always
Hugsss
For the Sake of All of Us-Stop (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:07:21 AM
Humans are not smarter than that. And when one member of the species would just as soon bite off your hand than allow you to feed it, it is difficult to get along. That said, we should be thankful to the leaders of North Korea for doing the right thing. They didn't have too. They could have played the crazy hardball game and just let those two reporters rot.
News (Poetry) - 8/4/2009 12:28:22 PM
YOUR POINT IS WELL TAKEN AND YOUR PHRASES AND IMAGERY SUPPORT YOUR THEME NICELY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Life it's a Given (Poetry) - 8/4/2009 2:52:51 AM
Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Life it's a Given (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 7:47:51 PM
Yes, we should always be grateful for each new day that we can wake up and live, even our most painful of days. I always try to remember the things I can still do physically, and not concentrate on the stuff I can't- it helps.
Life it's a Given (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 7:09:59 AM
Very well written sweet man....as always enjoyed very much...have a wonderful and safe day OK...keep smiling always...Hugsss
Life it's a Given (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 3:57:54 AM
Richard,
I'm glad I didn't miss this one. You are right on the mark. I am a disabled woman, I know just what you are talking about. I have a bad back and there's alot of things I miss out on, but God is with me and one day I'll fly to the skies, all pain gone. Enjoyed this, Richard. I'm going to track you.
Blessings,
~Linda
Enough (Poetry) - 7/31/2009 5:02:58 PM
Perhps one day all of mankind will learn and treat each other with respect and understanding....
Be always safe,
Karen
Enough (Poetry) - 7/31/2009 4:33:38 PM
BIGOTRY AND HATE ARE INSTRUMENTS OF THE ENEMY THAT IS USED TO KEEP PEOPLE DIVIDED AND STRIFE GOING ON. ONLY WITH THE TRUE LIGHT OF GOD, CAN ONE'S EYES BE OPENED TO SEE THE TRUTH...THAT ALL CREATION WAS CREATED BY GOD AND APPEARS JUST AS HE WANTED US TO APPEAR...BROTHERS AND SISTERS WE ALL ARE...ONE FATHER ....ONE BLOOD. WE HAVE TO PRAY THAT GOD'S PURE LOVE REACHES AND CHANGES MORE HEARTS AND MINDS. ONLY 'HE' CAN WORK THIS MIRACLE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Enough (Poetry) - 7/31/2009 6:14:50 AM
Indeed sweet man...I totally agree with your words...have a wonderful and safe day OK keep smiling...Hugss..well done as always
Whoops (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 1:27:59 PM
CUTE...WITTY AND SO TRUE. IN THE END WE HAVE TO ANSWER FOR ALL WE DO...SO MAKE IT RIGHT WHILE WE'RE HERE, 'CAUSE YOU CAN'T MAKE IT RIGHT ON THE 'OTHER' SIDE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
There's Enough Love to Go Around (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 10:08:37 AM
DITTO.....How very true your words are sweet man....I believe in these four words DREAMS...PASSION..LOVE.....AND....DEVOTION...if you have them in your life you have everything (sighhhhhh)..very well written enjoyed very much....keep smiling always...Hugsss
No more (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 6:02:48 AM
DITTO....yes I agree if there was more LOVE in our world instead of HATE wowwww wouldn't that be wonderful..Excellent writing sweet man as always..keep smiling OK...Hugsss
No more (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 5:56:57 AM
Richard,
You've got it so right. It's simple really, countries are only lines drawn by man, so they can fight over those lines. And yes faith is a healer, but if I'm not of your faith, another war. Yet, ironically, every faith wants peace.
Mary
Differences (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 2:34:07 AM
Being Different means nothing its whats inside sweet man..enjoyed once again if you have the passion to write never stop OK...have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss
A Rose Without Thorns (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 2:32:00 AM
Interesting..but life is very short for many of us..so while you are breathing enjoy every moment you have believe me I have seen so many who wanted to live and didnt...great writing dear man...keep writing never stop OK...Hugss
What did You Say ? (Poetry) - 7/29/2009 6:33:57 PM
Enjoyed well done indeed...Hugsss
A Rose Without Thorns (Poetry) - 7/28/2009 7:59:05 AM
Richard,
Words of wisdom. If we had life without thorns we wouldn't appreciate the rose. Excellent poem.
Blessings,
~Linda
A Rose Without Thorns (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 10:39:08 PM
So very true yet sometimes I think we grieve for ourselves, in the parting, being left behind...
Be always safe,
Karen
A Rose Without Thorns (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 8:44:48 PM
Thorns keep us honest. Death is as natural as breathing. Enjoyed.
