Avery (Poetry) - 4/21/2010 2:51:21 AM
Love this poem. It's amazing how much a child affects you, isn't it? It doesn't change for the next one either there is just a little less fear. I Love you, Mom
Wake Up Papa (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 2:21:54 AM
This one made me cry both when it happened and now reading about it. I miss him too. He was a good man.
Untitled (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 2:18:25 AM
We all lose it at one time or another. Usually because of someone we loved. We usually find it again though. Love ya, Mom
The One I Love (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 2:15:47 AM
Sadness is a powerfull emotion and you express it well.
Talk to Me (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 2:12:02 AM
A poignant plea well written.
If It Could All Go Away (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 2:04:50 AM
Wow Good write. Time definately heals all wounds, I hope it heals yours quickly. Love Mom
Faith (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 2:02:00 AM
Sad but with hope. I like that.
Dream Man (Love) (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 1:59:44 AM
It's great when Love feels this good isn't it. Good rhythm and flow. I loved it.
BUTTERFLIES (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 1:55:09 AM
I like how you varied the lines. It made it seem as if butterflies were flying about. Good work
Do You Remember (Poetry) - 4/23/2008 11:01:03 AM
Sometimes in looking back to what once was it surely bring many smiles and a warm feeling inside....
Be always safe,
Karen
Do You Remember (Poetry) - 4/23/2008 1:35:33 AM
Jen,
Very beautiful and poignant write. May love treat you kindly. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Untitled (Poetry) - 3/16/2008 12:47:51 PM
The heart does a good job at unreasoning the head!! You showed that here, nice work.
Untitled (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 1:48:14 AM
Jen,
"Getting Lost in the Moment," would be a great title. Reasoning sometimes becomes uncontrolable when the heart is involved. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
If It Could All Go Away (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 9:06:34 PM
...well penned thoughts here Jennifer...in asking...the healing has started.
John
If It Could All Go Away (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 1:08:57 PM
Excellent expression of emotions; keep on writing!
If It Could All Go Away (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 12:29:23 PM
Sometimes it helps to write your thoughts down and get it out.
Ron
Wake Up Papa (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 6:15:40 AM
Very nice, it seems we both wrote about our grandfather today . . .
AIDS (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 2:47:34 AM
Jenni,
You handled that assignment very well. I hope you got an A+. Just dealing with such a controversial subject, you deserved an A. There was an incident in my town awhile back where a young boy, grammar school age, contracted aids in the same way you speak of. His classmates were ok with it but the parents of the children put the family through hell. They didn't want their children anywhere near the boy. To make a long story short after much ado and time spent to educate the parents the young boy was accepted. They even went on to name the towns newest school after the lad. He's been long gone but his memory lives on through the hearts of a town's people. Each year since his death they hold a road race in his honor and the proceeds go to a scholarship fund also in his name. I find it so strange how people approach different subjects which they know nothing about and jump to conclusions without researching. I'm sorry to have bent your ear so I'll close with the hope that you don't find this too wordy. May God Grace You with His Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Faith (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 12:49:25 AM
...love found...is well penned in positive light...when perhaps one cannot find it in darkness.
great write of hope Jenni...
John
Wake Up Papa (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 12:44:37 AM
...memories...within sadness...are penned with loving remembrance of a "Papa" and a grandchild.
well done Jenni...
John
Faith (Poetry) - 2/24/2008 9:22:30 PM
REMEMBER LOVE IS AROUND THE CORNER
WAITING FOR YOU TO FIND
BUT DO NOT TRY TO RUSH IT
KEEP FAITH IN HEART AND MIND
I think this is good advice and I admire your positive outlook. Thank you, Jenni. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
AIDS (Poetry) - 2/24/2008 9:21:08 PM
This is very compelling, Jenni. Ignorance can cause so much pain. Thank you for sharing your sentiments. Love and peace,
Regis
Old Memories Surface (Poetry) - 2/24/2008 9:20:00 PM
Powerful and painful expression, Jenni. Sometimes, writing and sharing such "things" is very therapeutic. Love and healing to you,
Regis
Wake Up Papa (Poetry) - 2/24/2008 9:17:56 PM
Bittersweet memories well-shared, Jenni. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
Regis
