Within--From Specks (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 12:01:01 PM
You did very well with the timing in this since one word the wrong way could have easily gotten the beat off. Excellent work.
Within--From Specks (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 10:36:17 AM
Absorbed in all the "what if's" trying to sort out and make sense of it all, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
Wides Eyes Open Shut--From Images of Imagination (911) (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 9:06:36 PM
I loved what you wrote here,"Right before the eyes, blood filled stars fell from the sky, leaving mystery in the wondering whys."
I marvel at your talent, when left to your devises, you always shine.
The images in the poem are stark yet vivid and clear,last days of time I muse.