An Absence of Family- A short story (Short Story) - 4/24/2011 6:52:33 PM
you may be the only light that glows for some of your patients as they near the brighter light towards their end.
jch
Out With The Bike (Short Story) - 2/4/2009 11:28:55 AM
So a new womderful writer came to the neighborhood. Welcome.
Do write funny and serios (as I've read just those till now). It's good, interest catching, streaming.
Out With The Bike (Short Story) - 2/4/2009 9:00:47 AM
Very, very cute! I'm a seventy-four your old man that rides a bike with a group named, "The Old Kranks". One must be no younger than fifty to be an Old Krank, and we have people into their early eighties riding with us. The group rides five days a week and, if not working,if possible, I'll ride the five days doing about eleven up and down miles per day, however, many in the group do about twenty per day with a few century (100 mile) rides a year thrown in. Keep it up. You may not lose a hell of a lot of weight riding a bike, but it does wonders for you cardiovascular system. Mark Lichterman
What Does Anyone Ask? (Poetry) - 4/2/2011 5:47:06 AM
Lovely writing indeed ..enjoyed..stay safe and well..Hugsss
Apathy (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 3:42:37 AM
Well Done, Toni!
Cheating at Solitaire (Poetry) - 2/13/2009 10:09:34 AM
...gives me reason & subjects to reflect on...ed
Cheating at Solitaire (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 4:54:18 AM
Excellent poem,take care
Edwin
Cheating at Solitaire (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 4:06:32 AM
BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Cheating at Solitaire (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 7:34:43 PM
Hi T.D.
Oh how true and how nicely you've put it. Thank you. Cheers! Liz
At the Funny Farm (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 1:07:12 PM
My goodness, what an amazing tale and one I would bet is repeated over and over again with each passing day. All in a days work, they tell me....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Slew of Haiku (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 12:54:24 AM
I am sorry, but i don't know to appreciate haiku.
But I also don't know to appreciate my brother's art, though he won a lot of prizes and his pictures are in some big museums.
It's just me with my little understanding, not afraid to agree that it is really little. Not that i feel any inclination to enlarge it.
those are my interests.
So, thogh I don't understand it, it doesn't mean that others don't like it.
Most probable they do.
I just don't like Haiku (maibe in Japanese I'd like it, but in English, till now, I didn't hear anything that made my ear want to listen)
But, on the other, positive hand, I do appreciate a poetry of you words.
Combinations of words and their combind picture are so special and so unique.
All this said, you can through my review under the sink, or put it in out of sight shelves (in and not on, as in shelves with doors to hide the content of shelves) or you can take it as one in 277 other reviews you'll have here or, revolutionary, you can rewrite your sweet words and combinations into poems we (simple people) can recognise as poems.
It was way too complicated even for me. So just in one sentence: I liked it with mixed feeling.
So, as afterthought, Thank you for me stopping for so ling and looking into myself THIS deep.
J(notF)K
