I play an online game called Legend Arena and I wrote a very short story for the fun of it (for our Clan's Forum) and decided to post it here. So here you go!
I walked quietly towards the clearing. I could hear them talking about their battle plans and knew I had to do everything I could to stop their plans. I quickly circled around to their tents and quietly crept under a flap to get inside.
“Idiots, no one’s guarding their weapons!” I thought to myself.
I quickly started shoving their equipment under the tent and was thankful I had drank a Potion of Titan’s Strength before I got to the clearing. After I got all of their equipment shoved out of the tent under the flap by which I had entered, I crept back under. I gathered all of their equipment and hurried back the way I had come. I made it back to our camp just in time. My strength was failing. I showed the fruits of my labor and we laughed at the poor equipment they had. We sold it all and used the money to by us better equipment.
We prepared ourselves for the slaughter we had planned for days.
“At exactly 22:00 we attack!” Our glorious Warlord Prudh shouted to us. “We show no mercy! They all must die!”
Very interesting start. I like the idea. With a little more character developement and maybe an obstacle in the protagonist's way, you could have an even better story. Best wishes.
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