Read it, loved it. The description, characterization was wonderful for such a short work. The love scene was sweet and hot. Lovely work. I hope you will take it out of doc file form and post it here.
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone
2/18/2007
I love stories with open endings for they cause the reader to use their own thoughts to create new beginnings. Lady J
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge
2/15/2007
Dear H J Cuz, after reading this captivating story, "Song of a Mariner' I couldn't agree more with what George has said. Why is it not here... for more eyes to see and enjoy? You are a very talented writer! I was fascinated with the story!!!!! Well done! You're hired! LOL, LOVE AND BEST WISHES , Holly
Mon amě
Miguel de Cervantes needed to be throw in jail to write with such elocuence.
The short story becomes a long one in the mind of the reader which uses many minutes flling the spaces between the lines despite the delicate minutia, from the wax sealing of a scroll to the portuguese steel wrapped in virginity.
If you had been a thirteen century bard I envision you in the company of the greats.
As you are living today's century, no bards here that could cross florettes or words with you....yet.
Son of a Mariner is so well written that it is a crime not to put there, more publicly, where everybody can read it.
A beautiful story.
A excellet pen.
Georg
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
