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Maybe To Pittsburgh This Time
by Randall Davis Barfield
Saturday, January 20, 2007

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     I've always liked Girzone's book Joshua. So, here's my feeble attempt.

“Scotty,” the boy screamed a bit late.  The shiny, dark blue sedan that hit Scotty did not stop.  The charcoal-gray terrier lay in a lifeless heap near the curb of the street. The boy ran and lifted his companion into his arms. His sobs were for fear of losing the love he and Scotty had shared going on eight months now. The boy didn’t know how long he sat at the street edge hugging Scotty, but it seemed an eternity.

 

Then the boy felt that someone was approaching. It was a bearded stranger dressed in jeans and sneakers. He wasn’t old or young.

 

“Is he alive?” the stranger asked gently.

 

“Don’t think so,” the boy replied. “There’s no strength in his body.”

 

“Hmm, that’s not good,” the stranger said. “I know an old trick that has worked a few times. Mind if I try it?”

 

The boy dried his tears with his shirt sleeve and handed Scotty over to the kind, swarthy man. He took the young dog carefully and began to rub its smashed stomach softly back and forth.

 

“Do you think it will help?” the man asked the boy.

 

“It might,” he replied.

 

“Good answer,” said the stranger. “It means you have not lost hope.” The boy noticed that the man had sort of a twinkle in his eyes as he spoke.

 

He continued rubbing the pet’s stomach. Fairly soon the broken little body seemed to be going through a change. A change back to normal. Scotty definitely began to wag his tail now. The boy’s eyes were saucers.

 

“Oh, Scotty,” cried the boy, “you’re alive!”

 

“Just as I am,” the stranger said, smiling.

 

“How did you do it, Sir?”

 

“Oh, I usually try one thing then another,” he said, modestly. He seemed really pleased that the boy and his dog were reunited.

 

“Where are you from, Sir? What’s your name?” the boy asked, making motions to get up and leave with Scotty in his arms.

 

“Name’s not important. I was born in Bethlehem, but I’ve been literally all over.”

 

“Oh, Bethlehem’s not far from here. My mom’s got folks there. Did you know any Solts? It’s her last name before she married.”

 

“Believe I did,” the stranger said, rubbing his chin.

 

“I have to go. Me and Scotty,” the boy told the stranger. “Anyway, I’m not supposed to talk to strangers.”

 

“I know that, Jerry. It’s good advice, in general. World’s got some bad people in it.”

 

The boy and his dog began walking away. The boy stopped a sec and looked back.

 

“Sir, how did you know my name?”

 

The stranger laughed a friendly laugh. “Guess I just presumed it, Jerry. You go on home now before it gets late. You and your recovered Scotty.”

 

The boy and dog quickened their pace. Their steps were happy ones.

 

The second time the boy looked back, the bearded stranger was gone. Maybe to Pittsburgh this time, the boy thought.

 

 

 

END OF “MAYBE TO PITTSBURGH THIS TIME”

 

 

 
 
 

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Reviewed by Guy Hogan 1/22/2007
I like this. You seem to have an instinct for the form of the very short story.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/22/2007
Randy,

Excellent story; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 1/21/2007
What an inspiring story!

Chrissy
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 1/21/2007
This is a refreshong story. It gives me hope that the stranger to some is still performing miracles.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 1/20/2007
I'm so glad that I read this! The first paragraph had me thinking that maybe I should pass it up...I'm tired and a sad story could send me over the edge, bawling like an imbicile tonight! But I stuck with it and what a gift it was! You've brightened my quiet, sleepy night...

Susan

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