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Stargate :Can A Jack Beat Himself-part 5-A Foe In a Doe
by Richard J Kallao
Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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Jack what did you do ? he asked himself as he stood now over the two lifeless bodies .' You might be the evil twin of Jack O' Neill but I'd don't think your people wanted war Jack, Jack your in trouble now ,'

Jack slapped himself,' Shuddup Jack.' Suddenly he dropped the gun and started walking away .And he smiled to himself ,' Jack got to find SG-1 and take the other Jack's place . Where are they, if I'd were Jack he be telling Daniel something that wasn't right .' He then continued looking in fact for the SG-1 team then knew where they had to be right now .He continued looking then he found them .

And his guess was right the SG-1 was with the natives of this planet and they were trying too figure how to straighten out the mess Jack caused . ' But it wasn't me,' Jack continued to argue , still no one would listened to him at all .Something was wrong definietly wrong here .

' No it wasn't you, it was me .' They all had turned and saw Jack standing in the door entrance of the cottage they'd were all in and sitting around the small table provided with fruit on it .And nearby a fireplace burning .The fire burning making the cottage warm inside ,since now it was and cold outside. The duplicates of Jack turned suddenly and all knelt to their knees after they saw him there .

' He is the one , ' a duplicate told him .

' I'd have return my children, Jack is back.' The duplicates ran up too him and surround the other Jack, Jack O' Neill stood only  just as looking as  dumbfounded as so were the other SG-1 team .Then he turned and look at Teal'c and shook his head .

' Don't even say it Teal'c .'

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