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Depth Charges part ll:Impact (POV)
by Richard J Kallao
Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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 I held my breath as we approached the reported area
we were too investigate and there it was,damn why did
I take this job ?

Ahead an underwater typhoon ,spinning like an upside
tornado but faster and faster almost as powerful as a
hurricane I've witnessed first hand .
 

My heart pounded as we got closer sonar was picking
up something but our eyes weren't seeing anything just
the heavy underwater typhoon,currents turned and ripped
fish try to swim but too no avail, even a squid was caught
up in the current but the squid fought too be free of it too. 
 

I stood by the periscope and suddenly felt odd,not the fact
when your inside a sub it already felt cramp or small space
hardly any room to move,that's why no fat people on a sub.
Not because their fat a fat person never got through a hatch.
 

Me being Captain I had to set an example for the crew I had
to be clean, straight through to my toes,never got in a fight
yelled sometimes that was the most trouble I been in . 
 

And being a female Captain I really had to be on my best .
 

Now Blue was almost making contact with the underwater
typhoon ,we braced ourselves for impact . We waited still
sonar said there was something there are eyes didn't .
 

I felt uneasy for the first time in my life .
 

to be continued .

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