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Ghostbusters 3:Slimed Reunited Again:From a Fan's Viewpoint
by Richard J Kallao
Thursday, November 27, 2014

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     not original and sorry
Dan Aykroyd I know you
and Harold and John Landis
created the Ghostbusters
but I just had to put my
two cents in about how
the third movie should go
hope you don't mind,from
a fans view.
Cold blistering Day fell over the land as the day of Thanksgiving started from household then to household people gathered far and near to give thanks to everyone and God himself and his son Jesus ,But not all were giving thanks today he was old man about seventy five lonely lived at the outskirts of the city never doing nothing always complaining but never getting anything done once a long time ago he ran this city and that's what became of him he was so power hungry he ruined everyone else around him and never said he was sorry how he treated others.His name was Peter his last name not important right now ,he was for the most part a team that investigated Hauntings,they made money from that to be sure but Peters money went not for then too scientific endeavors to make spirit hauntin better but for himself Peter work for others and with called the Ghostbusters now their few outings they had were successful in hunting spirits collecting them and studying them, but in time the team members grew uninterested especially in where the Ghostbusters were concerned as,Peter Vankman was ,now he rocked in a rocking chair he was giving on his last birthday on the very front porch he build by his hands ,he loved the Ghostbusters though they only lasted a few years together before thinking about breaking up, the other Ghostbusters stayed together so they could teach younger ones to take over,pass the torch as it were,but Peter loved his wife then girlfriend Dana as they had lived in this house she died four years ago of old age but he buried her in the backyard he didn't want her to be left alone and dead,they say death was the next step in dying and evolution if so he would be ready because soon he felt his body getting weak, not like the young Peter many years before,energetic,full of life and energy ,Peter now was old tired no teeth Peter he gummed his food ,at least no ghosts ,no dead men coming after him or killing him, especially Slimer,he remembered the first time he got slimed,yuck sticky stuff, but sometimes Slimer was helpful he smiled as the sun was setting,I missed you Dana my love my joy of life itself,at least Heaven has another angel there.' Suddenly he looked up there was something dripping then too off the top of his head,green it was like ooze,he stood,'Slimer.' he saw Slimer sitting on top of his head,' Long time no see,something's wrong?'And so as Peter discovered what was troubling Slimer another adventure of the Ghostbusters was about to happen for one last time.end

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