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The Funnelweb spider in my laundry.
by Kay P M- Devenish
Friday, December 6, 2024

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       
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     They say that a rabbit's foot is lucky,well,perhaps it was for my daughters pet, but not so for the funnel-web spider.

 

I am so very terrified of funnel web spiders,I found one once inside my laundry,that was many years ago but it still haunts me today. I had a young child in the house at the time.She was still asleep in a room nearby when I opened the laundry door to find on the floor not far from me a massive funnelweb spider! It was disturbed by my intrusion and so raised itself up on its back legs,its big body lent backward with its sharp long fangs pointing upward just waiting to strike at anything nearing it.It obviously knew I was there and I was a threat.The danger of such a poisonous creature being so close by put me in shock, just looking down toward it caused my heart to speed up and thump hard.I was terrified,I reached out for the nearby straw-brooms handle,lifted the broom up high above it and smashed downward as hard as I could onto its massive black body... once,twice,3,4,5,6,7,8,and more.
It died at my first hard swipe,but my heart was pounding so hard from fear that I couldn't stop until I saw it finally pulverised.
 
My young daughter's pet rabbit cage,with her pet bunny ,named Kramer sat a few inches behind the dead spiders squashed body.
The bunny was alive and unaware of my trauma although it had born witness to my terror. At that moment so many questions crossed my mind, how did such a deadly spider get into my home?
 
The afternoon before this happened I had carried the cage inside from the backyard,the cage had handles on both sides. It was mid summer in New South Wales Australia and I was concerned for the bunnys health being outside in such horrid heatwave conditions,so I decided to bring it inside.
What I did not know was the spider was either in the cage,or under the cage. I will never know which one it was,but I can not think of any other way it could have got in.Funnelweb spiders can't climb steps,and there was a step outside.
I have never forgotten that day,my youngest child could have been bitten if she had of gone into the laundry to check on her pet,but I thank God that it was me   who opened the laundry that morning. Funnelwebs are indeed a very deadly creature, I still have PTSD due to that experience of several decades ago.

 

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Reviewed by Ajlin Parker 1/6/2026
Reading your story made me really happy because I got to read something written by such a talented writer lol. I’ll also share your story with my friends. If I get a chance I’d love to make cover art or other artworks for your story for you at the best price
Reviewed by Jackie Brooks 10/6/2025
That would have terrified me. I do not like spiders generally, when my husband and I were managing a motel in Washington State he found a Black Widow under the counter in our Reception area. When we moved back to California we had a Tarantula in the wood pile. Now I am back in the UK the biggest one that usually invades houses in April or September is a big black bodied critter with long legs and it can run like the clappers. It isn't poisonous though a nip from it would bother me as I am allergic to their bites. I don't know its proper name but it has been called a 'Cardinal' as in the 16th century Cardinal Wolsey was apparently terrified of them, they used to invade Hampton Court Palace where he lived. The only spider I sort of made friends with was a fat bodied white spider that had silver and gold markings, it lived in my greenhouse and ate all the white flies that tried to attack my tomatoes.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/8/2024
Your reaction was normal. And even a large spider is no match for a broom unless they can hop out of the way with each blow. It has been the housewife's savior in many ways and even driven off vicious dogs.

I hope writing it down will help you stop worrying. The shot of adrenaline you got was what made you kill it over and over again and also give you that fight reflex rather than flight. I hope this will help you.

Ron
Reviewed by Eva Pasco 12/7/2024
You were brave to confront it. I totally understand your trauma.

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