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A Real Scary Story
by Gina Hooten Popp
Thursday, October 18, 2018

Rated "G" by the Author.

       


     This is a real scary story as told by my great grandmother.

 A REAL SCARY STORY

Yesterday, my Mother told me a scary story that her mother’s mother told her. That would be my Great Grandmother Caledonia.

In the late 1800s, Caledonia’s family arrived in Tennessee from Scotland where they settled in a small farming community. After living there for a year or so, they attended a wake for one of their neighbors—a young teenaged girl who’d died unexpectedly. Caledonia did not know the girl well but was very distressed as they were similar in age. As she watched the townspeople mill about she went up to the handmade casket balanced between two dining chairs that’d been turned toward each other. She noticed the lid had already been nailed shut. She took a sharp intake of breath as she realized just how fragile life was even for someone as young as herself.

Looking around the room, Caledonia saw her parents, sisters and brothers visiting with the townspeople they so infrequently got to see. The room buzzed with their voices as they caught up on each other’s lives. When she was certain no one was watching, she slipped out the back door to be alone with her thoughts. Standing on the back porch she felt a chill run down her spine even though it was a warm day in October. Wrapping her arms around herself, she looked out over a nearby field. That’s when she noticed a stranger walking down the fence line with her back to her. From her long brunette braid and slender form she appeared to be a young girl too.

Suddenly the stranger stopped walking and turned to look up toward the house. She had a lovely face . . . until her head split open and fire rolled out.

Caledonia wanted to scream, but she couldn’t. In fact, she couldn’t even move. All she could do was watch as the stranger turned and continued walking down the fence line. Surely, it had been her imagination. Perhaps it was the way the sun was shining. Or maybe she was ill.

But no, twice more the stranger turned and looked back at Caledonia. Both times fire rolled out of her head. Then when she arrived at the end of the fence line, she simply vanished.

Finally Caledonia’s feet were able to move, and she ran crying back inside the house where she was met by the mother of the deceased girl. “Oh, Caledonia!” the grieving woman said as she hugged her tight. “Don’t despair. Let’s be happy for the short time we had with her.”

Caledonia knew it was not the time to tell what she saw outside. Instead she took a seat in a chair someone had pulled up for her. A hardback chair similar to the two that the casket was balanced between. As the women folk gathered near, her whole body shook with intense fear. A flood of tears burned her eyes. Someone handed her a white cotton handkerchief. She could hardly hold it in her shaking hand. To calm her pounding heart, she took a deep breath.

No one said a word as they waited for her to compose herself. Perhaps that’s why the rattling noise inside the nearby casket sounded so loud.

Now all eyes in the room were on the casket instead of Caledonia.

The rattle grew louder and the handmade casket actually shook for a moment on the chairs. Then it stopped.

“Should we open it?” Someone called out.

“No,” the deceased girl’s father replied. “I placed her inside myself. There is no way she’s alive.”

Later that afternoon, the girl inside the coffin was buried in the family cemetery. And my Great Grandmother Caledonia never did tell anyone about what she saw on the back porch until years later when she told my Grandmother who told my Mother who told me.

•••

“Oh my gosh,” I exclaimed in horror to my Mother. “Is this a real story?”

“Of course it’s a real story,” she replied with a smile on her face. “It’s a real scary story.”

 

 

 

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 10/22/2018

It IS a real scary story!!

never stop writing!

m
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/19/2018
The vision on the porch wasn't scary sounding to me. Over the years of storytelling that could change. The idea of someone in a coffin banging around, is scary, but could be explained by natural gases escaping from a decomposing body. Time and storytelling can make a old story more scary.

Ron
Reviewed by Eva Pasco 10/19/2018
Well, if that girl was alive in her coffin, there wouldn't be any chance of survival once buried.

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