My day started like any other day in Phoenix in the month of March. The sun had already broken through leaving the stars behind. There had been a wind storm the preceding night. The after affects being a palm tree lying belly up on the front lawn. There was one peculiar sight there for any one to see. A woman's body layed out along side the fallen palm tree. I went to her fallen body to see if she were alright. She was if you think being dead is okay.
After leaving her fallen body I stepped inside my apartment to call 911. The call's duration lasted a good 60 seconds. I went back outside to cover the dead woman's body, only her body was no longer there. No one else was on the lawn or even close to it except me! Could she not have been dead. To be honest I started to feel freaked out. Then I noticed where her body was. Someone in only 60 seconds had placed her dead body in a large trash bin. The only problem was as she was stuffed in the trash she was smoking a cigarette. Now I had felt her pulse earlier there was none. Plus she was as cold as a witch.
The woman paused her smoking and said a matter of factly. I am here for you my darling boy! Well she talked, her eyes were open and she was smoking. Just then a loud thunder clap woke me from my sleep. I had been sleeping and dreaming of the woman lying next to me breathing rapidly. I had many dreams and also remembered just about all of them. But never an occurence like this.
Just what makes my dreams so revelational. It is because I am still in my Mothers womb, the lady sleeping next to my prone body!!!!
ANTHONY...! I AM IN TOTAL SHOCK. THIS IS TERRIFIC...I HAD NO CLUE OF WHAT THIS ENDING WAS GOING TO BE. I WAS TOTALLY CAUGHT UP IN READING AND LIVING FOR THE NEXT WORD. GOOD WORK AND THANKS FOR SHARING. GOD BLESS, LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Darkest Angel
3/28/2010
This story has to be told, man--where is your quill?!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
3/17/2010
WoW! Buddy,you freaked me out with this little gem. After the shock of the smoking lady in the trash bin only to realize you were still inside her womb really grabbed me. This is amazing, my friend. Good doesn't even come close.
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