AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Christine Boyce, iAnita Shaw, iMargaret Evans, iPamela Wiedenbeck, iBethany Peterson, iStephen Murray, iJames Hill, iJoshua Su, iWilliam Potter, iJohn DeDakis, i

  Home > Action/Thriller > Stories
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry      Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Brian K Pellerino

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· 297 Titles
· 926 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2004

Brian K Pellerino, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.


In the Walls
by Brian K Pellerino
Tuesday, February 22, 2005

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       
Recent stories by Brian K Pellerino
· Into the Abyss
· In the Walls (part II)
           >> View all 3


     Secret discoveries lead to revelations about space itself.

"So what's this then?" he asked her.
She turned and volleyed an ice-blue stare that reminded him of just how much about her he didn't know.

He turned the thought over in his head a few more times, tired of the exercise and shifted gears. She was looking into him, questioning. No, that's not right. Waiting. She was holding her breath waiting for him to announce his profundity. And he had some. He always had some. He would grab some elusive metaphor and juxtapose it just right and throw her completely off balance. Then, she'd find herself clawing to catch up. She didn't really want to be an active part in his ramblings, she just liked to hear him speak. He commanded the words to do his work. To perform an audio play. She could see them and sense their power. It was hypnotic.

He opened his mouth to speak again and held. The breath clawing its way back into her lungs betrayed her and she let an audible gasp slip. He didn't move but she knew that he saw it. She thought she could see the faint traces of a smile and then nothing. 'He's so good at me' she thought. If they gave out awards for that sort of thing, he deserved several.

He brought his hands up to his mouth. It was a trick he used to change pace quickly. He would effectively change his expression under their cover and the difference would be startling enough to distract. She didn't disappoint. She was taken off topic again.

Pointing his left hand slowly across the room, extending his arm, he said "Well, what do you see?"

"I see," she began, "a door".
He caught himself before he could look annoyed, "and?"

She wasn't following.

"Where do you suppose it goes?" he asked.

She thought about it for a second. It was a regular closet door. It was painted white that had begun to show wear in places. She had painted it herself, five years ago? At least. The question seemed silly. It was a closet. It was filled with coats, most of which were waiting for eventual disposal.

"I'm not sure..." she started before he silenced her with a look.

He pointed at the door again and motioned for her to open it.

She paused briefly and approached the door making certain to brush against him on the way. She knew the smell of her would intoxicate him and it was usually her best defense when he seemed to prefer the surreal. She reached for the knob and began to feel strange. There was a slight pulling in the pit of her stomach. When she touched the dulled brass orb, the feeling connected up her arm and to the door. It was vibrating, almost imperceptably.

"open it." he said flatly.

She did and gasped.

Want to review or comment on this short story?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/21/2005
excellent story, bri! well done! :)

Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Black Leather and Blue Denim, A '50s Novel by Jay Dubya

Black Leather and Blue Denim, A '50s Novel is adult literature for anyone who likes 1950s' teen culture. BL&BD has been given a 5 Star Rating by ebookpalace.com and by Midwest Review  
Member BookAds

Awkward Homecoming (Returning Home Series # 1) by Trennis Killian

Boom! Pain! Blackness! After an RPG attack on their barracks in Afghanistan, corpsmen, Amber Fox and Luke Owens wake up in an Army hospital in Germany. Thus, begins a four-month recovery for both of them. Amber lost her left leg bel  
Member BookAds

The Fight Begins! (Ford Valley Corruption Series # 1) by Trennis Killian

Retired! New start! Murder! Todd, detective lieutenant, has retired from St. Louis, Missouri and has moved to Ford Valley, Arizona. When Todd’s ex-wife is killed in a car accident, Todd fights for custody of his teenage daughter. She has bee  
Member BookAds