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Jerry had loved comic books since before he learned to read The only joy for this orphan boy He could feel the colors bleed From home to home and different schools Picked on and abused He climbed deep into his shell 'till he was completely out of view At just fourteen he ran away Alone, afraid, confused He found a job in a small cafe But he was still abused The waitresses were cruel to him The other workers too Except for one old cook I believe his name was Lou Lou helped Jerry find a room on the southside of downtown An old TV, a chair and bed Where he'd lay his body down Each night he'd come home after work With new found energy A bag he'd open on the bed Filled with comic books to set him free He laid them out so carefully Didn't let the pages bend Because the characters inside them were his only friends One night while he was walking home some bullys circled round They beat poor Jerry violently 'till his lifless body hit the ground But he was not alone that night, his friends were standing by, the hero’s of the comic books, together they did fly And now he lives inside the pages Filled with color Filled with light There's no more pain for Jerry and he doesn't miss this life Copyright ©2004 Edwin Dante Larson
Reviewed by Blue Sleighty
1/25/2007
I LOVE this.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
3/23/2005
heartbreaking write, very well done, edwin! bravo!
(((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very
3/22/2005
Such a well written sad and heartwrenching story of all so many children today.
Thank you for shedding light on this tragedies of the Innocent victims of society today.
So so sad. Got me some tears swelling .
Tracey