Very eerie tal that is well written. It definate reminds me from when I used to be in boy scouts and where they tried to scare the crap out of the younger scouts. Very strong twists and turns with solid description.
Reviewed by chander keswani
4/21/2002
Nude reality has been effectively portrayed.Very formal style has been adopted by you which seems to be affordable.
WOW!
Great story. Starts a bit slow and tiny bit formal and that perplexed me at first, but when it kicked in, it blazed with a good twist at the end. As Clint said the rest is easy fixes.
The fortunate inherit riches, prestige, positive notoriety. Those not so lucky bear legacies filled with poverty, infamy or, worse yet, the unhinged insanity and murderous urges of their ancestors.
