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Manka The Woman-child --- Chapter 13
by Sandra A. Mushi
Wednesday, May 3, 2006

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       
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     The village is in a state of chaos ...



Chapter Thirteen


 


            “Girls,” Maria motioned to us from the swimming pool, her hair drenched with water, “the water is lovely, you have to come in.  I could swim in here forever!”

 

            “You are going to wilt,” Ikunda warned her, “you’ve been in there forever!”

 

“I will have a Fanta please,” I told the thin waiter who was standing beside me, then pointed towards Maria.  “Don’t forget to take her order too.”

 

Smiling at Ikunda I reached for my handbag and reached for a mirror, a compact one like the one kaka Joseph’s fiancée carried.  I then examined my carefully applied lipstick; the way one kaka Joseph’s fiancée did, and then smacked my lips together in satisfaction.

 

The birds were chirping happily, while the crickets seemed to be dancing and singing a chorus to the birds’ happy tune.  Laughter rang out, bouncing around us.  The sun had cast a brilliant colourful glow over the slopes of the mountain as if God and His angels had been playing with a paint palette.  I was happy.  Everybody was happy.    Happily I positioned my left red high heel on my toes then twirled it around.

 

            “It was so nice of Dubya to share the money, wasn’t it?” Maria giggled from the pool. 

 

            “Darn,” Makicha who was sitting across me exclaimed, “I have ran out of cigarettes!”

 

            “They should have them, here,” Aichi pointed out, crossing her legs that were in light blue trousers.  Her painted toenails picked elegantly from the blue high-heeled sandals she was wearing

 

            “Waiter!” Makicha called out, snapping her painted nails in the air impatiently.  “Hurry!  Can’t you run?  So lazy!”

 

The waiter came running with our orders of drinks in his hand.  He jumped as Makicha started howling abusive words at him loudly, dropping the tray.  It fell a foot from her breaking the glasses and spilling the drinks.

 

            “Can’t you see where you are going?  Look at what you have done, you useless baboon,” Makicha snapped pointing at her green dress that was spotting a few bluish black stains from the Coke.

 

Suddenly a group of people with bibles and crosses came running from the gates towards us, calling us “sinners”.  We all got up screaming and running wildly, but our shoes were too high.  The angry mob was catching up to us fast.  I slipped and cried to Ikunda and Makicha not to leave me behind.  I looked back, the mob was inching closer and closer.  I couldn’t leave my red high heels behind.  I tried to take them off, but I was too nervous to unhook the ankle strap. 

 

            “Burn them!  Burn those thieves!  Burn them with their sins,” they chanted as they ran towards us.  “Burn them!  Burn them!”

 

The ground then suddenly broke open.  Something was happening, something was swallowing us, pulling us.  The chairs, the swimming pool and the brick houses also got pulled in.  We started thrashing around and screaming.  We screamed and fought – our voices echoing through the night.

 

“Uwiiii!” I heard screams.  They were getting louder and louder.  Suddenly, I woke up with a start, gasping for air and choking.  My old bed sheets were soiled with sweat.  I sat bolt upright on the mattress, realizing that it was just a dream a sighed with relief.  Hearing the voices again, louder this time, I looked blindly, “uwiiiii!”

 

“Ikunda,” I called out nervously, “what’s all that noise?”

 

My eyes were now wide with fear and I had jumped out of bed, but it was too dark to see anything since the kerosene lamp had been put out.  With my hands I nervously tried to feel my way around, careful not to bump into anything.

 

“Ikunda, where are the matches?” I whispered into the dark.  “Where did you put the matches?  Can you hear the screams outside?”

 

I didn’t know what was happening.  I strained my ears trying to work out what was being screamed about outside.   I got even more scared when Ikunda didn’t reply, so slowly and carefully I made my way back to the mattress on the floor.  Ikunda was such a light sleeper that such loud noises would have had her up and bolting by now.

 

            “Ikunda,” I whispered as I felt around.  My hand touched a face, but it was Salekio’s.  I moved my hands again and got hold of Shindo’s chubby hand.

 

My eyes had now adjusted to the darkness a bit and I could now vaguely just make out two bodies on the double-bed mattress.  I was confused – I was thinking about the dream and the voices outside.  Bibi had told me that if I got a disturbing dream, praying always helped in getting its meaning.

 

            “Ikunda!” I called out again while silently saying a quick prayer.  I was sure the angels that made dreams had gotten it wrong.  You won’t get swallowed if you were beautiful dresses.

 

“ikundaa!”  I called out again.  There was still no reply.  I could hear excited voices outside the house.  I couldn’t bear it any longer.  The bedroom door was slightly ajar and quick I slipped through it and ran outside.

 

“Ikunda!  Why didn’t you wake me up when you heard the noises!”  I called out to the group that was standing by the yard.

 

“Ooooh!!  Uwiiii Ruwa!  Kiruuuu!  My baby girl!” I heard someone scream.  It sounded like Makicha’s mother.  I squinted my eyes trying to make out the shadows and spotted Mama holding Makicha’s mother.

 

I could see Mama was trying to make out of what the hysteria was about but Makicha’s mother was too upset to talk.  Ikunda was not there.  She must be in the bathroom, I thought.

 

            “Go get some water, Manka,” Mama instructed after she had seen me, “Makicha’s mother is very dehydrated!  Hurry!”

 

            “Its too dark, Mama,” I replied nervously.

 

            “Light the kerosene lamp in the lounge and ask your sister to assist you.”

 

As I was making my way back inside, I caught sight of a group of people running up our kichumi.  They were shouting excitedly.  They were still a long way off so I couldn’t make sense of what they were shouting.  As they came rushing up, I ran back to Mama.

 

            “Manka!” she scolded me, “I thought I had asked you to bring me some water!”

 

            “There are people coming Mama,” I answered nervously.  With all the crying and noises around her, Mama never heard the other people walk in.  Makicha’s mother was sobbing violently.

 

            “What is going on?” I heard Mama ask through clenched teeth.  Mama always clenched her teeth when she was either very angry or nervous.

 

            “My baby!”  Makicha’s mother wailed as if to answer Mama.

 

As they got closer, I realized that it was a group of sisters.  It was a chilly night, so they had wrapped khangas round their white habits.  They hurdled together with looks of dread in their eyes.  The youngest sister was sobbing with grief.

 

            “We can’t find Maria!”  One sister announced sadly.  “Even the bag we had gotten her to keep her belongings is not there!” 

 

            “My Makicha is also gone!” Makicha’s mother wailed loudly between chokes of tears.

 

            “Go get water, Manka!” 

 

I was confused and scared as I ran back inside.  I had totally forgotten my fear of the darkness as I looked for the kerosene lamp.  Mama always left it on the table at the corner of the lounge, so it wasn’t so hard finding it.  Quickly I lit it and ran to our bedroom for Ikunda.  I wondered why she never came out after her trip from the bathroom to watch all this fuss.

 

            “Ikunda!  Oh my God, you won’t believe! Makicha and -” I had started.  I then stopped after realizing that Ikunda was no in the room. 

 

Quickly I ran into the dark with my kerosene lamp to the back to the lantern – now having completely forgotten about Mama’s request for water.  The old thin dress I had worn to bed now clung to my body with perspiration. As chilly as the night was, I was now drenched in sweat.

 

            “Ikunda!” I called out loudly his time.

 

With my free hand I opened the corrugated sheet door to the lantern.  But the one square metre room was empty.  She must be checking on her children, I thought as I ran to Mama’s bedroom.  Sprawled soundly on the bed was only Ikunda’s little children and Bibi.   I was now confused as I quickly ran back to our bedroom.  Looking around or bedroom then it hit me – had I dreamt?  That conversation?

 

            “Mamaa!” I then screamed after realizing that Ikunda’s old bag was missing, “Ikunda is also gone!”  

           

 

 

THE END
 

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Reviewed by Angeline waniha 2/10/2008
oooh Sandra, i read all the chapters this night. I dont believe it, u r splendid, keep it up baby. Hongera sana
Reviewed by S Cardin 8/17/2006
Great story, and I liked how the characters had to finally confront their actions. I liked the dream. Again, your vivid characterization is what brings this story to life. You have a very natural way to tell a story.

Will be there be a sequel?

Just a note on some of the more "techincal" aspects of the writing - This chapter is told in the 1st person but previous chapters were in the 3rd. I would suggest a copy edit for grammar/puctuation to "tighten" it up.

Keep writing!
Steph
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 5/22/2006
Hmmm...very interesting story, even though I'm coming in quite far into the story. Loved your language, and the scene is quite well set. I'll have to go back and read more of this, so that I can find out what's going on and who these characters are!
Reviewed by Safi Abdi 5/20/2006
<as if God and His angels had been playing with a paint palette. >

Sandra, wouldn't describe God that way, but very interesting end...

Nice work,

Safi


Reviewed by Ingrid Khola 5/14/2006
Congrats my Dear, you are an excellent writer!I started reading the book with the intention of finishing it off tomorrow,but guess what?? all done in an evening,so much for having an early night ha! I couldn't help wondering what's next. It's a real "page turner". Once you start you can't stop till the end. Well done and I can't wait for more of your writes. You are so talented, your writing is full of soul, I have read every single one of your writes and you rock Sista, I am moved. I'll share it all with all my friends and family.Huggs n kisses and wishing you all the best in your future endevours. A time will come when your name will be at amazon.com or kalahari.net and the like, exclusive books and so on. Keep up the gud work and stay unique so that you stand out from the rest.Ingrid
Reviewed by Sulubu Tuva 5/5/2006
All events were leading to this moment. People taking charge of their lives because the social structures have failed to deal with a frightening reality they cannot fathom.

Sandie, you go girl!
Reviewed by Ennie Kihedu 5/3/2006
Sandie, I am proud to have been called your friend before all the fame that is surely heading your way... The book is.... Wow! All the best sweetie, and know that I am 100% supporting you and your talent..Very well done indeed!!
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 5/3/2006
Sandie I look forward to the next book in this series
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 5/3/2006
Sandie, an excellent chapter and ending to the first book. Now we just can't wait to read on book 2! This is a wonderful series for teenagers and, as you see, adults to read. Can't wait to find it on the shelves!!!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 5/3/2006
Wow! some weird stuff going on here, for sure, Stephen King would be proud. Not a bad touch, this chapter and its confusion as to whether Manka is dreaming or not.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/3/2006
Sandie,

Keep on writing, girl; that is all I have to say to you! Wonderful story; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Peter Paton 5/3/2006
Sandie
Life is but just a dream...." Row, Row. row your boat, merrily down the stream
Merrily.Merrily. Life is but a dream "..!!!
Excellent addition to this engrossing and expanding story
Peter

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