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If All Religion In This Holy Hell Cannot Teach You Anything, But To Forgive_
You'd Better Hold On To What Few True Friends You Think You Got Left - Adlive...
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 7-23-06_(Revised)
SHOOTING STAR ASPIRED GREATEST STORY EVER TOLD CONTINUED:
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PHOTO:
I Had Dig Thru My Files Photo To Find
WhatIs Black Hole-So Called Modern Kind
Of Scientist'Believe Black Hole Results_
From Shooting (Collapsing) Star -WRONG_
Universe In ItselfIs ONE BIG SPACE,It Is
Continuous BLACK OPEN HOLE That In It
All Stars(Life)Collapses Into,i.e.*SEWER
For Billions Stars That Exist In Eyes Of
Man In Eye's Of (God) That Exist Deny Of
NotIsNever Ending Continuum Black Space_
REMEMBER:
I TRASK Said There Are More Hells To
Endure Than Are Particles In Entire(Due)
Universe! To Make You Understand His_
VASTNESS Of (GOD)-That You Humanity Is
But Mere Spec Of Dust In His Eye,It Is
Whence He Wipes His Hand Away(Eye) You_
Humanity Will No Longer Exist! If Above
Can't Make You See How Mediocre Love
Of Human Beings Is Shit -Then You Have_
To IMAGINE VASTNESS Of (GOD)_
Imagine (God) Sitting On Chair At Your
Desk, Looken Down On You As You Are Sure
On Floor As An ANT - To Kill You He_
(God) Merely Steps On You With His Foot!
NOW:
Thats How Large Vastnness Of(God)Is And
How Small You Are(Mere Spec Of Dust)And
Gone From His Eye-You Are Now Dead In_
Black Hole (In Black Space)Of Universe
Which Is Merely a Continuum...
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I TRASK Can Go On & On But,You Still Do
Cannot See Read Past Less 3rd Grade(You)
Mentality...
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ME,TRASK "POETIC PROPHET"c 2006
TRASK...
* UNIVERSE Is Never Ending Sewer And
It Ends On Planet EARTH...
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GRADITUDE FOR TRUE FRIENDS:
My True Friends I Cannot Count Them On
1 Hand-They're TOTAL STRANGERS From UPON
Out Of Nowhere: Tom,Bill,Gus,Go Past_
James,Bill,Dr.Pete,Authorsden: Linda,Be
Elizabeth,Peter,Others-SimplyHad Name Be
Names -"I Play No Games-Seek No Fame"_
No Refrain IN THE END -I,TRASK Will Be
There For You In VASTNESS Of (God) See
ME,TRASK I'll Be In His Eye(s) Of (God)...
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BIG HINT TO YA IF:
You Don't Want Your Name Mentioned Or
Do Irrespective-It Is Already Written In
(God)'s His Your Book Of Life...
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| Reviewed by Richard Cederberg |
8/16/2006 |
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You bring some things into perspective here Trask.
I think your were generous considering mankind specks of dust in God's eye. More like imploded molecules of stench on a festering dung heap.
Powerfully honest from the heart write. I admire you saluting true friends, they are few these days.
I think I've met the muse you had for this write. keep rocking the quill with the ink true said from heart poetic prophet.
In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
7/24/2006 |
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Trask
Count me in brother..
And thanks for the honor..
It's a privilege to be in your exalted company...and us LA kids have got to stick together !
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/24/2006 |
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Loud and clear message!!
Love Tinka |
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