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     Veil Of Inequity Operative In All Worlds...
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BUT: Goal Is I Know Most Of You Will Not Be Here In End...

11-14-06_

......WHATSA MEANING OF WORD GOAL.......

Websters Dictionary Best Definition Is_

END TOWARD WHICH ONES EFFORT IS DIRECTED!

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FEW OF IF ANY OF YOU HAVE ANY GOAL IN YOUR LIFE...

IF I DID REVIEW On Eveybody Poems,Story,
Articles,Blogs Authorsden In Your Glory
(You Think You Have)You'd All Be Runnen_

RIGHT ON HOST A D COMPLAINING About Me
CRITICIZING YOU That Which You Do Decree
Think What You Can Write In Spite_

I READ Nordetts Blogs In Particular That
To Effect If You Don't Do Reviews On Fat
Those Others Poems An Stuff It's Like_

YOUR SHOOTING (PUTTING) YOURSELF DOWN_

WELL She Can Correct Me if I Am Wrong
But When You Keep Reading Same (GONG)
Stuff (Crap) Over & Over Again Long-

GONE IT WAS TO ALL BORING TO BEGIN WITH...

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WHILE I,TRASK WRITE FOR BENEFIT OF A D I
Write Because I Care About Children,Deny
Not Even Poorest Of Poor Black Little_

CHILDREN Where She Lives Is IRRELEVANT!

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WHAT IS RELEVANT IS I HAVE ALWAYS HAD
A GOAL IN BEGINNING AS IN YOUR HER BAD
OR YOUR GOOD END! Majority Cannot Begin_

EVEN COMPREHEND What I Write, Simply You
Can't Read Past 3rd Grade Mentality,Due
If It Pisses You Off I Could Care Less_

PHOTO/ARTWORK:Look At It At Top Off Page
IT SPEAKS FOR ITSELF! Always Has If Rage
I Go Into It Is Reason Why Simply_

ME,TRASK I Would Rather Be BURDENED With
*WELFARE Of Little Children Than Be Diff
BURNED DOWN IN $ MASSES OF YOUR GREED$!

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{{{{{{{ NOW IN LIEU OF ABOVE }}}}}}}}}}

GREED IS NOT ALWAYS SUMMARIZED WITH MONEY
IF You Cannot See ThatWhich Any Of Honey
Is Evolved In Greed Then Simply You Do_

YOU ALL ARE BLIND LEADING BLIND...

ME,TRASK "POETIC PROPHET"c 2006 TRASK...

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ME,TRASK I AM NOT IN THIS WORLD TO BE
LOVED BY YOU NOT BY NOBODY...

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* HOW SWEET IS REVENGE ITSA GOAL AWAY FROM TODAY...

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VEIL OF INEQUITY,i.e. Is One's Own Self Centered Greed_

$Money$ Being Only Least Of It All In Which You All Write In Spite Of WANT
" NOT THAT WHAT YOU NEED "...

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/15/2006
I hear you Trask...thank you!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg 11/15/2006
Trask ...

You touch on good points. One has to have a thick skin to survive on this opinionated planet.

Of course the whole point of writing novels and essays and poetry is to provoke the reader to think and feel beyond their own parameters and abilities.

I could care less who agrees with me or who likes me. Although I would rather be liked than maligned or hated, and don't know anyone who doesn't like their ego tickled.

Authors Den is still one of the best interactive sites I've come across - and my novels and poetry and essays are in over 35,000.

As long as there are people doing the same thing there will be ugliness and strife and opinions and hatred from one to another. In my opinion loving one another and communicating for the betterment of both parties is far superior than strife.

Some people are sensitive and interact on this site only as a community of friends walking through life together. There is nothing wrong with this. Many don't have grand aspirations to be successful in the literary realms.

I like you Trask ... you provoke me to think and feel beyond my abilities to do so. There are some here on AD that I wouldn't give the time of day because inside them is nothing but darkness and rancor and phoniness.

Your friend ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor 11/15/2006
It is ironic that when one posts something on AD, that when you review it, you are expected to agree with it, or the weenies run to Matt with their tender feelings hurt. AD has become a website for amateurs, no longer professional authors. Author Zone went the same way. So many restriction were put on writers, Author Zone folded. I have seen so many good authors pull out of AD, it is a shame. It's basic premise was a good one. Too much weenie bullshit now. I'll continue to support "good" authors as long as I am here. They deserve that respect and whatever kudos I can give for their effort.

Good commentary, Trask.

Elizabeth

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